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I just made this cartoon, feedback from fellow GLPers?

 
snillozikim
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I just made this cartoon, feedback from fellow GLPers?
This is gonna be the introduction to Episode 2 of these videos I am making to help educate the sheep. give me any feedback you have, or any funny ideas lol...

this is a time consuming process to make these cartoons, but funny to do all the voices lol

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05/22/2012 10:44 PM
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05/22/2012 11:00 PM
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haha well guess you guys are too busy trying to find new things to be paranoid about! watch this!!
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05/22/2012 11:08 PM
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05/22/2012 11:35 PM
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lol really no one????
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05/22/2012 11:49 PM
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you need to put some hot broads in the video...
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05/22/2012 11:51 PM
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Re: I just made this cartoon, feedback from fellow GLPers?
take out the music in the back ground , and pick up the pace , still i'm going to give you 5stars for trying , keep it up

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05/23/2012 12:01 AM
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Re: I just made this cartoon, feedback from fellow GLPers?
Needs a bit of work. Since it's a cartoon you need to spend more time on the voice acting and try using a microphone to record with. Run the clip through a video editing program to clean up the audio and balance the volume. Try to avoid recording with different background acoustics...IE always record in one area and if possible, soundproof the area.
"A truth's initial commotion is directly proportional to how deeply the lie was believed. When a well-packaged web of lies has been sold gradually to the masses over generations, the truth will seem utterly preposterous and its speaker, a raving lunatic."
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"All truth passes through three stages. First, it is ridiculed, second it is violently opposed, and third, it is accepted as self-evident."
-Arthur Schopenhauer
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05/23/2012 12:07 AM
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o.O

So you're one of the people adding to that weird part of youtube seal
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So you're one of the people adding to that weird part of youtube seal
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"A truth's initial commotion is directly proportional to how deeply the lie was believed. When a well-packaged web of lies has been sold gradually to the masses over generations, the truth will seem utterly preposterous and its speaker, a raving lunatic."
-Dresden James

"All truth passes through three stages. First, it is ridiculed, second it is violently opposed, and third, it is accepted as self-evident."
-Arthur Schopenhauer
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So you're one of the people adding to that weird part of youtube seal
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weirdoscaredscreamahhh

That is pure nightmare fuel.....damned
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So you're one of the people adding to that weird part of youtube seal
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lolsign
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weirdoscaredscreamahhh

That is pure nightmare fuel.....damned
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:xerces016:
"A truth's initial commotion is directly proportional to how deeply the lie was believed. When a well-packaged web of lies has been sold gradually to the masses over generations, the truth will seem utterly preposterous and its speaker, a raving lunatic."
-Dresden James

"All truth passes through three stages. First, it is ridiculed, second it is violently opposed, and third, it is accepted as self-evident."
-Arthur Schopenhauer
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05/23/2012 12:36 AM
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hahahahaha, yeah thats just kinda like my trial run. but i was recording it in my room with my built in laptop mic and the TV was on...so yeah...lol
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05/23/2012 12:38 AM
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So you're one of the people adding to that weird part of youtube seal
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hahahaha
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So you're one of the people adding to that weird part of youtube seal
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lolsign
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scream
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05/23/2012 12:43 AM
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Re: I just made this cartoon, feedback from fellow GLPers?
hahahahaha, yeah thats just kinda like my trial run. but i was recording it in my room with my built in laptop mic and the TV was on...so yeah...lol
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Pickup a cheapie USB microphone and it will give you 10x the quality of those crap built in omni-directional mics. You could run the audio through Audacity separately...but yes, the key to good recording is elimination of sound and acoustics.
"A truth's initial commotion is directly proportional to how deeply the lie was believed. When a well-packaged web of lies has been sold gradually to the masses over generations, the truth will seem utterly preposterous and its speaker, a raving lunatic."
-Dresden James

"All truth passes through three stages. First, it is ridiculed, second it is violently opposed, and third, it is accepted as self-evident."
-Arthur Schopenhauer
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05/23/2012 01:11 AM
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Re: I just made this cartoon, feedback from fellow GLPers?
yeah i was looking for a way to normalize the direction of the audio, cause this shitty mic tries to be stereo, but if you get slightly off center, itll blow out one side of the speaker a shitload more than the other one
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05/23/2012 01:21 AM
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Taco bells hiring.
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05/23/2012 01:23 AM
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haha, at least i can make cartoons better than you can attempt to interject mediocrely funny comments....you try drawing and animating shit using microsoft paint Douche King...haha
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05/23/2012 01:25 AM
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Re: I just made this cartoon, feedback from fellow GLPers?
I like it. Your tone with the characters was funny. But yeah just speak clearer and bit faster pace.
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05/23/2012 01:36 AM
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Re: I just made this cartoon, feedback from fellow GLPers?
thanks dude!
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05/23/2012 01:37 AM
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Re: I just made this cartoon, feedback from fellow GLPers?
check out the first video i made for this series...i put in a lot of really good clips

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05/23/2012 01:41 AM
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Re: I just made this cartoon, feedback from fellow GLPers?
Riveting story, the drama kept me curling my toes for more. I couldn't get enough of the police chase scene in the cornfield! The animation simply delivers! The accompanying musical score sent shivers down my spine. The passionate voice acting alone should be winning some Emmys!
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05/23/2012 02:09 AM
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Re: I just made this cartoon, feedback from fellow GLPers?
hahhahahahahahahahahahahaha i know, it was hard to film in that corn field
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05/23/2012 02:14 AM
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lol i hope you guys liked my expertise
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05/23/2012 02:34 AM
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05/23/2012 03:04 AM
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Re: I just made this cartoon, feedback from fellow GLPers?
haha, at least i can make cartoons better than you can attempt to interject mediocrely funny comments....you try drawing and animating shit using microsoft paint Douche King...haha
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Oh well I was trying to be sorta nice but your cartoon is a piece of no talent fucking shit for brains crap. You gotta douche that shit outta your brain. Fucking pointless ass.





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