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Here's a poem for you if you're into this

 
Anonymous Coward
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02/07/2013 03:54 AM
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Here's a poem for you if you're into this
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I wish you would stop
waiting for me like that
Sleeping love housed under your
grim wings doom
Your apartment is dim
where you stir noodles in boiling water
The kitchen's dark window
reveals nothing.
Not even the rain or the white stray cat
Red and black candles surround you
You light them cautiously
as if they were crude loud weapons

Someone knocks rapidly at the door
and you remain frozen and silent
But it eventually stops much to your relief -
The noodles boiling softly over
muffled footsteps fading down the hall
The stray cat screeching
at something unknown and terrifying
And the match's flame dangerously close
to the fingers of your still shaking hand.

- me
Face Palmer

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02/07/2013 03:55 AM
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Thats deep man. Thats deep.
"The world will soon wake up to the reality that everyone is broke and can collect nothing from the bankrupt, who are owed unlimited amounts by the insolvent, who are attempting to make late payments on a bank holiday in the wrong country, with an unacceptable currency, against defaulted collateral, of which nobody is sure who holds title."

Never attribute to malice that which is adequately explained by stupidity.

The woman who is not pursued sets up the doctrine that pursuit is offensive to her sex, and wants to make it a felony. No genuinely attractive woman has any such desire. - H.L. Mencken, In Defense Of Women
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Re: Here's a poem for you if you're into this
no one gives a shit about love and beauty anymore. damn i'm depressed and maudlin. :(
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02/07/2013 03:56 AM
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Re: Here's a poem for you if you're into this
Thats deep man. Thats deep.
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eh my one and only piano cd shit review came from a germany. you're not fooling me.
Face Palmer

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02/07/2013 04:00 AM
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Re: Here's a poem for you if you're into this
You poem leaves the reader with unanswered questions.
What kind of noodles did she cook and did she do it for 1 or 2 persons?
"The world will soon wake up to the reality that everyone is broke and can collect nothing from the bankrupt, who are owed unlimited amounts by the insolvent, who are attempting to make late payments on a bank holiday in the wrong country, with an unacceptable currency, against defaulted collateral, of which nobody is sure who holds title."

Never attribute to malice that which is adequately explained by stupidity.

The woman who is not pursued sets up the doctrine that pursuit is offensive to her sex, and wants to make it a felony. No genuinely attractive woman has any such desire. - H.L. Mencken, In Defense Of Women
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02/07/2013 04:04 AM
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Re: Here's a poem for you if you're into this
You poem leaves the reader with unanswered questions.
What kind of noodles did she cook and did she do it for 1 or 2 persons?
 Quoting: Face Palmer


thanks for representing germany.
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02/07/2013 04:05 AM
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Re: Here's a poem for you if you're into this
Do you know me lol
Face Palmer

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02/07/2013 04:06 AM
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You poem leaves the reader with unanswered questions.
What kind of noodles did she cook and did she do it for 1 or 2 persons?
 Quoting: Face Palmer


thanks for representing germany.
 Quoting: black calx


You don't seem to hold your own peom serious? You kidding or what? Ass.
"The world will soon wake up to the reality that everyone is broke and can collect nothing from the bankrupt, who are owed unlimited amounts by the insolvent, who are attempting to make late payments on a bank holiday in the wrong country, with an unacceptable currency, against defaulted collateral, of which nobody is sure who holds title."

Never attribute to malice that which is adequately explained by stupidity.

The woman who is not pursued sets up the doctrine that pursuit is offensive to her sex, and wants to make it a felony. No genuinely attractive woman has any such desire. - H.L. Mencken, In Defense Of Women
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02/07/2013 04:11 AM
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Re: Here's a poem for you if you're into this
You poem leaves the reader with unanswered questions.
What kind of noodles did she cook and did she do it for 1 or 2 persons?
 Quoting: Face Palmer


thanks for representing germany.
 Quoting: black calx


You don't seem to hold your own peom serious? You kidding or what? Ass.
 Quoting: Face Palmer


are you mentally challenged or something?
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02/07/2013 04:13 AM
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Re: Here's a poem for you if you're into this
You poem leaves the reader with unanswered questions.
What kind of noodles did she cook and did she do it for 1 or 2 persons?
 Quoting: Face Palmer


thanks for representing germany.
 Quoting: black calx


You don't seem to hold your own peom serious? You kidding or what? Ass.
 Quoting: Face Palmer


nevermind I see you're one of those people who get off on reporting "abusive posts." have fun with your karma.
Face Palmer

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02/07/2013 04:15 AM
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Re: Here's a poem for you if you're into this
You poem leaves the reader with unanswered questions.
What kind of noodles did she cook and did she do it for 1 or 2 persons?
 Quoting: Face Palmer


thanks for representing germany.
 Quoting: black calx


You don't seem to hold your own peom serious? You kidding or what? Ass.
 Quoting: Face Palmer


nevermind I see you're one of those people who get off on reporting "abusive posts." have fun with your karma.
 Quoting: black calx


Yeah I report spam. You mad bro?
"The world will soon wake up to the reality that everyone is broke and can collect nothing from the bankrupt, who are owed unlimited amounts by the insolvent, who are attempting to make late payments on a bank holiday in the wrong country, with an unacceptable currency, against defaulted collateral, of which nobody is sure who holds title."

Never attribute to malice that which is adequately explained by stupidity.

The woman who is not pursued sets up the doctrine that pursuit is offensive to her sex, and wants to make it a felony. No genuinely attractive woman has any such desire. - H.L. Mencken, In Defense Of Women





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