How about a short story where god turns out to be some sort of alien machine that creates life | |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 389838 United States 03/16/2008 10:43 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 350216 Netherlands 03/16/2008 10:51 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Well, your writing style isn't really good. But the idea is quite nice. You can hang the story on the Rosswell crash of course. The day when they found a 'recorder' and after 70 years they finally figured out what that automated machine was doing. (All in top secret government levels) You can start off with an alien (very human like) coming to earth. (make up a reason why) contacting 'normal people' ( a cop, preferably a woman with skillz). With connections to that rosswell project that she isn't aware off. (her husband? would be cool). The Alien tells about the seeder and recorder and the war that is sparked to the woman. Who tells it to her husband. Who tells the project. Then bring everything together. After this point a group has been assembled and set aboard the fixed recorder' The recorder flies off to the central thing... and continue from there... |
shameless agitating fuck (OP) User ID: 392245 United Kingdom 03/16/2008 10:56 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Just make sure to make out he royalty checks to the estate of Kurt Vonnegut. And then slap yourself for ripping off the Sirens of Titan. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 389838Sirens of titan ? by kurt vonnegut huh ? I'll keep an eye out for that. I dont read books much so I was unaware that it was unoriginal but I guess great minds think alike. |
shameless agitating fuck (OP) User ID: 392245 United Kingdom 03/16/2008 10:59 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Well, your writing style isn't really good. But the idea is quite nice. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 350216You can hang the story on the Rosswell crash of course. The day when they found a 'recorder' and after 70 years they finally figured out what that automated machine was doing. (All in top secret government levels) You can start off with an alien (very human like) coming to earth. (make up a reason why) contacting 'normal people' ( a cop, preferably a woman with skillz). With connections to that rosswell project that she isn't aware off. (her husband? would be cool). The Alien tells about the seeder and recorder and the war that is sparked to the woman. Who tells it to her husband. Who tells the project. Then bring everything together. After this point a group has been assembled and set aboard the fixed recorder' The recorder flies off to the central thing... and continue from there... Er no dude, my story is set like in a galaxy far far away with no humans whatsoever. |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 350216 Netherlands 03/16/2008 11:33 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Er no dude, my story is set like in a galaxy far far away with no humans whatsoever. Quoting: shameless agitating fuck 392245Shame. But oke it's your idea. Where does this God-Child come from? Is it created by this fully automated seeder? What does it look like (please don't tell me it's a slimey slug) Where do you want to go with this story? What is the role of this God-child. What language does it speak, how do those aliens communicate? I see an idea, but i can't find a story. There is no ultimate goal. There is no plot and i can't think of one. |