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Subject CREATE TENSION WITH TWO SENTENCES...TRY IT!---- I was just shooting into the sky. What should I do with this angel?
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Original Message 1. write two sentences.
2. create tension between them.
3. define "tension" any way you want.


Example:

She felt the hand move up her back.
Surely it was a hand.

or:

He brushed her hair aside and grinned.
She bared her fangs and snapped.

Just a Game,

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