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Message Subject What does it mean when your writing is "convoluted?"
Poster Handle Rev-bo
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No. It was not a rhetorical question. My grad professor took a cheap shot at me or, at least, I felt she did. Sometimes I think many of these professors feel threatened of being up-staged by their students.




What if you purposely write in sophisticated sentence structures; that is, sophisticated enough to easily go above the comprehension level of the laymen reader. Would that be considered "convoluted?"


By most normal people, it probably would be, if they knew the meaning of the word. I seem to remember that most news articles are written at something like a 10th grade level, so the average reader could understand.

Your post above is fairly sophisticated writing; sophisticated enough that I would think you would know the definition of "convoluted."

Were you asking a rhetorical question?

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Odds are, your grad professor is probably an above average reader, unless she teaches something like sociology or women's studies, in which case, you definately went over her head. Just try to be more concise with your writing, maybe use a little less fancy language, and by all means, don't think you're smarter than your professor. It WILL come through in your writing, she WILL be insulted, and you'll probably end up taking the class again.
 
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