My first music upload

Thats got a nice feel to that song,would be better if you sang the words though

I like it. The drums are a little too laid back in places but it works. Slap a Verve (Richard Ashcroft) style vocal on it and swirl it up in places, I could imagine chilling out nice in the sun at a festival somewhere.

thanks for the feedback,yes the drums are a little lax on it,thats because they were the only style on my recording software that half suited the song,and when i get time and my son isn't about i will put my voice onto the track,glad you like the feel to the song though,i think that counts for a lot :-)

just uploaded my second little ditty,sounds like 70's porn music :-)

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am i allowed to say porn on here????

No. This is a fuckin Christian site, asshole. Keep the shit clean.

sorry :-)

i dont seem to have many fans :-(....i gave up my day job too :-)

well i have had one message of support,thanx to all that viewed my video :-)

lol,i like that :-)

I like using those open string chords too.

Aside from persistent arrhythmia that needs to be fixed, you'd definitely need to add the bass to tie it all together.

Anything else is hard to tell at this point having in mind that vocals are lacking. Sill, you'd might consider experimenting with panning drum components and guitars. Don't keep everything in the middle - broaden the sound from left to right!

Best of luck!

cheers for that advice,this was a first take,always room to improve :-)

wow,nearly 70 views,thanx guys

lets get this over 100 views and i will get the beers in :-)

lol @ the vids

Good vibes in your song