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KNOWMANZ LAND

C. IVEY

In KnowMan's Land is the place where I was born
The earth recedes, sweep my hand across the door
And watch the City moan in heave

v1

Take it higher than the snakes and the falsifiers
They couldnt keep up with candor so they lost their flyers
Slip through the grasp of the friars and squires
Acquiring a clue requires they be re-wired

So true, SHITiation in Code-Blue
Temperament invested in and ready to mold you
Sold you right on down a shitty river
And maybe its me but that don't paint a pretty picture

Itty bitty scripture thats given is called religion
Before holding u back, time was GOD's fiction
Such an odd prison, it wants to cash me in
Light 2 Dark tomorrow like Zoroastrian

Cargo, well charged like Wells Fargo
Maneuverin through the sewer system, no embargos
I seen barcodes scanned since a newborn
Reverse engineering cuneiform to a New Dawn

C. Ivey
Hook:

In KnowMan's Land is the place where I was born
The earth recedes, sweep my hand across the door
And watch the City moan in heave


v2

Replicants on duty shootin through your solarium
World famous gallery bits, illuminarium
I turn white shirts red and burn ties
Allegorically of course the sunshines

Discerning minds like 1 in 5 million
Took me damn near 10 years to see I wasnt dealed in
I hurt ya feelings if i'm running my jibs
Building on what I know is such a dangerous risk

This is not a game, this is serious lets go
On a whole other threshold like a death blow
Jethro blew in flutes through Vishnu
It's not the issue, but the script we been livin thru

Look what it did to me and you, goin Cuckoo
Macintosh mass massage usin voodoo
Who knew the shit would up and radiate?
Speaking Japanese now not sure if its safe to play in waste

Hook:

In KnowMan's Land is the place where I was born
The earth recedes, sweep my hand across the door
And watch the City moan in heave


v3

Ring of power like king for a hot hour
To the top downward, shot from clock tower
Scour pyramids clearances clear the clergy
Reappear wit attorneys, circumvent the dirty

Mercy Mercy murder sprees unearthly
Planet wide like mercury planned purposely
Programmed predictively, proficiency
This is Knowmanz Land, effectively I set this free

Its not too late, my tendencies to do somethin
But it's not easy dont have a magic blue button
Still Will my Will direct measure
Cant give you advice until I get my shit together

Ill spread love, get shot up by gunz
Or locked up by cops, it's the Prodigal Son
Lost but found, awesome profound
All falls down but crawls out of the ground again..

Hook:

In KnowMan's Land is the place where I was born
The earth recedes, sweep my hand across the door
And watch the City moan in heave