only change i'd make is us leaving in the 1st harpazo at the 6th seal.(Rev.6:12-7:9) The large multitude is us.

Rev.12 talks about the jewish remnant "woman" who come to know Jesus in the 1st part of the 70th week. They are protected after the A.O.D.

Song of Sol. 2:10-13 talks about the beloved (us) rising up and coming away in the spring. Maybe this ascention day or pentecost?

Maybe it all happens simultaneously: worldwide quake, sun black, moon like blood, stars fall, mountains moved, all men realizing wrath of God is come, Rapture, 144,000 sealed.

I think the 2 witnesses come a little after the 144,000 but idk.