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A song I made - Looking for feedback - Help spread/support. <3

 
Prophet.
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A song I made - Looking for feedback - Help spread/support. <3
A dream... To spread peace, love, and philosophy. <3

(It is all profanity free - no explicit vocals)



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^ This link is broken, it should be fixed tomorrow. <3

I missed you GLP -
Not trying to be the best - Just doing the best I can / trying to get better - *Which*cough late edit *With* each song I make, I try to get a little feed back and incorporate it into the next :

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Lyrics:

Hope,
That's what I lost when pop died,
Or my mother soon after,
Cause of the moments I asked why?
Why does life take the people I love?
When I all I've ever wanted was love?

So I struggled with the thought,
In the weather of the rage I fought,
I tried to understand something that will never be forgot.
You could probably relate
Confused about the pain of life,
Looking to the clock watching time pass..

I understand that we all make mistakes,
A new day, a new face,
Stare in the mirror
wondering who's looking at who.
Its too early to say its too late.
If there is one thing I've learned in this life
it's that we live what we create.
Live what we create,
even if it means that we take it away.
only freedom I know is in death,
and in death I know,
So use this time on earth to learn how to let go

Just let go

Its hard to do
but if you know that eventually you going to go too,
then we all have something in common right?
We'd spend less time on whats the meaning of life,
and more time being alive.

Imagine how much time you spend getting ready for life,
habbits, hobbies and trades,
only when life is lost are we able to be thankful for today.
Cause if you never knew loss,
You'd never get to play.

So I struggled with the thought,
In the weather of the rage I fought,
I tried to understand something that will never be forgot.
You could probably relate
Confused about the pain of life, about the pain of life~

I understand that we all make mistakes,
A new day, a new face,
Stare in the mirror
wonder who's looking at who.
Its too early to say its too late.
If there is one thing I've learned in this life
it's that we live what we create.
Live what we create,
even if it means that we take it away.
only freedom I know is in death,
and in death I know,
So use this time on earth to learn how to let go

Just let go,

I let go,

I let go,

And all I see is love.

I know that we all a little different,
But I can't ignore the fact we all a little the same,
Cause I see it in the face,
We've all suffered a little pain,
so next time you look in the mirror,
remember its never to late for change,
change for a better tomorrow and not in vain,
to show that we have strength
To show that we overcame!

I understand that we all make mistakes,
A new day, a new face,
Stare in the mirror
wonder who's looking at who.
Its too early to say its too late.
If there is one thing I've learned in this life
it's that we live what we create.
Live what we create,
even if it means that we take it away.
only freedom I know is in death,
and in death I know,
So use this time on earth to learn how to let go

Just let go

I let go,
I let go,
and found hope.


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Last Edited by Prophet. on 10/05/2012 04:54 AM
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The music is cool but as soon as the rap started I stopped it
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Why for? I mean, I understand -

Is it because you don't like rap?

Was the specific kind of rap?

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I normally call it "beat poetry" but Rap works :P
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Peace, love and happiness. I actually liked it and generally I do not like rap all that much anymore. Good job.

Your articulation is good; work to make it perfect.
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Very well done. I'm not a rap fan myself, but I can hear when someone puts a lot of energy into something and gets a professional result. Keep at it.
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It was a big surprise - I didn't expect it to be so good.
It's from the heart and it is great.
Listening again......

Whoever says negative is either jealous or ignorant. No way does it suck.

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talking about the original post - NOT the cheetah song

Last Edited by <Peace> on 09/27/2012 05:52 PM
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Thank you

<3
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Ok, first I do not care for rap (beat poetry) that much but I can appreciate art and all music is art.

That being said...

Overall....decent but...

You have that 50 cent slur thing going on. I personally don't like that, others may.

So advice I give to you is to try and talk(sing-rap) clearer.

Honestly though it wasn't bad at all...now do a metal version...

go...do eeet!
I will find the truth.....
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I missed you GLP -
Not trying to be the best - Just doing the best I can / trying to get better - Which each song I make, I try to get a little feed back and incorporate it into the next :

Comment/Like/Subscribe

Any support is awesome - even if you say it sucks and should quit music, that's your opinion and it's valued <3 - Even the troll - I love you He/She


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Lyrics:

Hope,
That's what I lost when pop died,
Or my mother soon after,
Cause of the moments I asked why?
Why does life take the people I love?
When I all I've ever wanted was love?

So I struggled with the thought,
In the weather of the rage I fought,
I tried to understand something that will never be forgot.
You could probably relate
Confused about the pain of life,
Looking to the clock watching time pass..

I understand that we all make mistakes,
A new day, a new face,
Stare in the mirror
wondering who's looking at who.
Its too early to say its too late.
If there is one thing I've learned in this life
it's that we live what we create.
Live what we create,
even if it means that we take it away.
only freedom I know is in death,
and in death I know,
So use this time on earth to learn how to let go

Just let go

Its hard to do
but if you know that eventually you going to go too,
then we all have something in common right?
We'd spend less time on whats the meaning of life,
and more time being alive.

Imagine how much time you spend getting ready for life,
habbits, hobbies and trades,
only when life is lost are we able to be thankful for today.
Cause if you never knew loss,
You'd never get to play.

So I struggled with the thought,
In the weather of the rage I fought,
I tried to understand something that will never be forgot.
You could probably relate
Confused about the pain of life, about the pain of life~

I understand that we all make mistakes,
A new day, a new face,
Stare in the mirror
wonder who's looking at who.
Its too early to say its too late.
If there is one thing I've learned in this life
it's that we live what we create.
Live what we create,
even if it means that we take it away.
only freedom I know is in death,
and in death I know,
So use this time on earth to learn how to let go

Just let go,

I let go,

I let go,

And all I see is love.

I know that we all a little different,
But I can't ignore the fact we all a little the same,
Cause I see it in the face,
We've all suffered a little pain,
so next time you look in the mirror,
remember its never to late for change,
change for a better tomorrow and not in vain,
to show that we have strength
To show that we overcame!

I understand that we all make mistakes,
A new day, a new face,
Stare in the mirror
wonder who's looking at who.
Its too early to say its too late.
If there is one thing I've learned in this life
it's that we live what we create.
Live what we create,
even if it means that we take it away.
only freedom I know is in death,
and in death I know,
So use this time on earth to learn how to let go

Just let go

I let go,
I let go,
and found hope.
 Quoting: Prophet.


It doesn't suck
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The speech - I agree with, - always working on that -

It's hard to speak perfect english

<3

Thank you all!!!!

Last Edited by Prophet. on 09/27/2012 07:31 PM
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Ok, first I do not care for rap (beat poetry) that much but I can appreciate art and all music is art.

That being said...

Overall....decent but...

You have that 50 cent slur thing going on. I personally don't like that, others may.

So advice I give to you is to try and talk(sing-rap) clearer.

Honestly though it wasn't bad at all...now do a metal version...

go...do eeet!
 Quoting: TruthSeeker2012


Everyone has a unique style of singging 50 cents music is stuck in the 90s. We all have opinions i think this song is nicely done!
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Thank you for saying it's unique :p

As I said - I'm not trying to be the best,
Just doing the best I can, while learning!
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I generally don't like rap. Especially because the words are generally full of F*** SH***... But I really liked what you did. You have a talent for writing. I still prefer something I can hum, but it was good.

You could probably go big if you'd swear more. :)
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You sound like mc hammer on crack humpty.
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I try to keep the peace, always <3



Another song if your interested ~
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I try to keep the peace, always <3



Another song if your interested ~
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Nice hook in the chorus of this song....for me, rhythm and melody is everything. The verses seem a bit busy. Try using less and accentuate your words with musical punctuation.

All in all, i'm satified with your efforts. I liked 'Listen' better. Big balls for posting them!

Do you have any instrumentals?
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Well I like rap and I LOVED this! Your words, your beats, "Live what we create". Yes.

So glad you are continuing on your musical journey. And it's good to see you back Prophet. Hope all is well.

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Fucking awesome. Thanks for sharing
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Nice (l y r i c s) but it sounds like your reading at times. Re-record it and bring it from the gut. More attitude and belief in what you are saying.peace
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Ok, first I do not care for rap (beat poetry) that much but I can appreciate art and all music is art.

That being said...

Overall....decent but...

You have that 50 cent slur thing going on. I personally don't like that, others may.

So advice I give to you is to try and talk(sing-rap) clearer.

Honestly though it wasn't bad at all...now do a metal version...

go...do eeet!
 Quoting: TruthSeeker2012


^What he said^

Except I like *some* rap (hip hop.. whatever) but mostly old-school stuff like NWA & PE... anything 'new' has to bring-it to catch my ear... Little Wayne is utter shit, for instance.

The vocals are lifeless & need punch... and that's just honest critique, not insult.

That'd be the *1st* thing I'd work on if I were you... the vocals are central & an instrument in what you're trying to do.

So punch it up dude!

And then post it in this thread: Thread: Any GLP'rs in a band? Ever in a band? Got Video or Audio? Here's Me. (2nd Video added)

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I really liked it a lot. BUT..... I think you've got to take it up a notch. It sounds like you were concentrating on getting the words right so it sounds a little too rehearsed. Know what I mean? You need to practice a ton and then again.

That way, when you sing it, you can really throw your heart and soul into it. Sound like you really mean it! And I'm sure you probably do, so take it up a notch!

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Good shit OP ! rockon
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Well....

The only thing that makes me feel better is that you wasted a lot more time than I did.

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I missed you GLP -
Not trying to be the best - Just doing the best I can / trying to get better - *Which*cough late edit *With* each song I make, I try to get a little feed back and incorporate it into the next :

Comment/Like/Subscribe

Any support is awesome - even if you say it sucks and should quit music, that's your opinion and it's valued <3 - Even the troll - I love you He/She


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Lyrics:

Hope,
That's what I lost when pop died,
Or my mother soon after,
Cause of the moments I asked why?
Why does life take the people I love?
When I all I've ever wanted was love?

So I struggled with the thought,
In the weather of the rage I fought,
I tried to understand something that will never be forgot.
You could probably relate
Confused about the pain of life,
Looking to the clock watching time pass..

I understand that we all make mistakes,
A new day, a new face,
Stare in the mirror
wondering who's looking at who.
Its too early to say its too late.
If there is one thing I've learned in this life
it's that we live what we create.
Live what we create,
even if it means that we take it away.
only freedom I know is in death,
and in death I know,
So use this time on earth to learn how to let go

Just let go

Its hard to do
but if you know that eventually you going to go too,
then we all have something in common right?
We'd spend less time on whats the meaning of life,
and more time being alive.

Imagine how much time you spend getting ready for life,
habbits, hobbies and trades,
only when life is lost are we able to be thankful for today.
Cause if you never knew loss,
You'd never get to play.

So I struggled with the thought,
In the weather of the rage I fought,
I tried to understand something that will never be forgot.
You could probably relate
Confused about the pain of life, about the pain of life~

I understand that we all make mistakes,
A new day, a new face,
Stare in the mirror
wonder who's looking at who.
Its too early to say its too late.
If there is one thing I've learned in this life
it's that we live what we create.
Live what we create,
even if it means that we take it away.
only freedom I know is in death,
and in death I know,
So use this time on earth to learn how to let go

Just let go,

I let go,

I let go,

And all I see is love.

I know that we all a little different,
But I can't ignore the fact we all a little the same,
Cause I see it in the face,
We've all suffered a little pain,
so next time you look in the mirror,
remember its never to late for change,
change for a better tomorrow and not in vain,
to show that we have strength
To show that we overcame!

I understand that we all make mistakes,
A new day, a new face,
Stare in the mirror
wonder who's looking at who.
Its too early to say its too late.
If there is one thing I've learned in this life
it's that we live what we create.
Live what we create,
even if it means that we take it away.
only freedom I know is in death,
and in death I know,
So use this time on earth to learn how to let go

Just let go

I let go,
I let go,
and found hope.
 Quoting: Prophet.


Very well one OP. I'm not easily impressed with new artists and new music they share. This is an exception. Keep it up!
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the use of rhyme is pretty unsophisticated for a hip hop number. you need to play around with internal rhyme/slant rhyme/enjambment etc.

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