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2012Portal 2012Portal - Mayan Beyond 2012 User ID: 15022013 Netherlands 09/27/2012 04:57 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Peace, love and happiness. I actually liked it and generally I do not like rap all that much anymore. Good job. Your articulation is good; work to make it perfect. From the love of power to the power of Love - My camera and video gear: [link to graphicstart.com] --- --- --- "Jesus Christ, the Son of God our Savior" |
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TruthSeeker2012 User ID: 14980911 United States 09/27/2012 07:02 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Ok, first I do not care for rap (beat poetry) that much but I can appreciate art and all music is art. That being said... Overall....decent but... You have that 50 cent slur thing going on. I personally don't like that, others may. So advice I give to you is to try and talk(sing-rap) clearer. Honestly though it wasn't bad at all...now do a metal version... go...do eeet! I will find the truth..... |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 24146274 United States 09/27/2012 07:10 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I missed you GLP - Not trying to be the best - Just doing the best I can / trying to get better - Which each song I make, I try to get a little feed back and incorporate it into the next : Comment/Like/Subscribe Any support is awesome - even if you say it sucks and should quit music, that's your opinion and it's valued <3 - Even the troll - I love you He/She - Lyrics: Hope, That's what I lost when pop died, Or my mother soon after, Cause of the moments I asked why? Why does life take the people I love? When I all I've ever wanted was love? So I struggled with the thought, In the weather of the rage I fought, I tried to understand something that will never be forgot. You could probably relate Confused about the pain of life, Looking to the clock watching time pass.. I understand that we all make mistakes, A new day, a new face, Stare in the mirror wondering who's looking at who. Its too early to say its too late. If there is one thing I've learned in this life it's that we live what we create. Live what we create, even if it means that we take it away. only freedom I know is in death, and in death I know, So use this time on earth to learn how to let go Just let go Its hard to do but if you know that eventually you going to go too, then we all have something in common right? We'd spend less time on whats the meaning of life, and more time being alive. Imagine how much time you spend getting ready for life, habbits, hobbies and trades, only when life is lost are we able to be thankful for today. Cause if you never knew loss, You'd never get to play. So I struggled with the thought, In the weather of the rage I fought, I tried to understand something that will never be forgot. You could probably relate Confused about the pain of life, about the pain of life~ I understand that we all make mistakes, A new day, a new face, Stare in the mirror wonder who's looking at who. Its too early to say its too late. If there is one thing I've learned in this life it's that we live what we create. Live what we create, even if it means that we take it away. only freedom I know is in death, and in death I know, So use this time on earth to learn how to let go Just let go, I let go, I let go, And all I see is love. I know that we all a little different, But I can't ignore the fact we all a little the same, Cause I see it in the face, We've all suffered a little pain, so next time you look in the mirror, remember its never to late for change, change for a better tomorrow and not in vain, to show that we have strength To show that we overcame! I understand that we all make mistakes, A new day, a new face, Stare in the mirror wonder who's looking at who. Its too early to say its too late. If there is one thing I've learned in this life it's that we live what we create. Live what we create, even if it means that we take it away. only freedom I know is in death, and in death I know, So use this time on earth to learn how to let go Just let go I let go, I let go, and found hope. It doesn't suck |
Prophet. (OP) User ID: 6016659 United States 09/27/2012 07:22 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | The speech - I agree with, - always working on that - It's hard to speak perfect english <3 Thank you all!!!! Last Edited by Prophet. on 09/27/2012 07:31 PM Prophet~ |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 20641532 United States 09/27/2012 07:49 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Ok, first I do not care for rap (beat poetry) that much but I can appreciate art and all music is art. Quoting: TruthSeeker2012 That being said... Overall....decent but... You have that 50 cent slur thing going on. I personally don't like that, others may. So advice I give to you is to try and talk(sing-rap) clearer. Honestly though it wasn't bad at all...now do a metal version... go...do eeet! Everyone has a unique style of singging 50 cents music is stuck in the 90s. We all have opinions i think this song is nicely done! |
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Pythagorus User ID: 12699116 United States 09/27/2012 08:43 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I generally don't like rap. Especially because the words are generally full of F*** SH***... But I really liked what you did. You have a talent for writing. I still prefer something I can hum, but it was good. You could probably go big if you'd swear more. :) |
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Anonymous Coward User ID: 12877760 United States 09/27/2012 10:01 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Nice hook in the chorus of this song....for me, rhythm and melody is everything. The verses seem a bit busy. Try using less and accentuate your words with musical punctuation. All in all, i'm satified with your efforts. I liked 'Listen' better. Big balls for posting them! Do you have any instrumentals? |
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ScrumpTheTexan Forum Administrator User ID: 3974719 United States 09/27/2012 10:50 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Ok, first I do not care for rap (beat poetry) that much but I can appreciate art and all music is art. Quoting: TruthSeeker2012 That being said... Overall....decent but... You have that 50 cent slur thing going on. I personally don't like that, others may. So advice I give to you is to try and talk(sing-rap) clearer. Honestly though it wasn't bad at all...now do a metal version... go...do eeet! ^What he said^ Except I like *some* rap (hip hop.. whatever) but mostly old-school stuff like NWA & PE... anything 'new' has to bring-it to catch my ear... Little Wayne is utter shit, for instance. The vocals are lifeless & need punch... and that's just honest critique, not insult. That'd be the *1st* thing I'd work on if I were you... the vocals are central & an instrument in what you're trying to do. So punch it up dude! And then post it in this thread: Thread: Any GLP'rs in a band? Ever in a band? Got Video or Audio? Here's Me. (2nd Video added) I am a Christian. Christian does not equal doormat or pushover "I Have Sworn upon the Altar of God... Eternal Hostility against every form of Tyranny over the mind of man." -Thomas Jefferson, Sep. 23, 1800 The Election of Donald John Trump: [link to www.godlikeproductions.com] For previous Newsletters, click 'Scrump's News Letters' @ [link to www.godlikeproductions.com] |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 22573986 United States 09/27/2012 10:53 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I really liked it a lot. BUT..... I think you've got to take it up a notch. It sounds like you were concentrating on getting the words right so it sounds a little too rehearsed. Know what I mean? You need to practice a ton and then again. That way, when you sing it, you can really throw your heart and soul into it. Sound like you really mean it! And I'm sure you probably do, so take it up a notch! |
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Jericho9 User ID: 7913305 United States 09/27/2012 11:08 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I missed you GLP - Not trying to be the best - Just doing the best I can / trying to get better - *Which*cough late edit *With* each song I make, I try to get a little feed back and incorporate it into the next : Comment/Like/Subscribe Any support is awesome - even if you say it sucks and should quit music, that's your opinion and it's valued <3 - Even the troll - I love you He/She - Lyrics: Hope, That's what I lost when pop died, Or my mother soon after, Cause of the moments I asked why? Why does life take the people I love? When I all I've ever wanted was love? So I struggled with the thought, In the weather of the rage I fought, I tried to understand something that will never be forgot. You could probably relate Confused about the pain of life, Looking to the clock watching time pass.. I understand that we all make mistakes, A new day, a new face, Stare in the mirror wondering who's looking at who. Its too early to say its too late. If there is one thing I've learned in this life it's that we live what we create. Live what we create, even if it means that we take it away. only freedom I know is in death, and in death I know, So use this time on earth to learn how to let go Just let go Its hard to do but if you know that eventually you going to go too, then we all have something in common right? We'd spend less time on whats the meaning of life, and more time being alive. Imagine how much time you spend getting ready for life, habbits, hobbies and trades, only when life is lost are we able to be thankful for today. Cause if you never knew loss, You'd never get to play. So I struggled with the thought, In the weather of the rage I fought, I tried to understand something that will never be forgot. You could probably relate Confused about the pain of life, about the pain of life~ I understand that we all make mistakes, A new day, a new face, Stare in the mirror wonder who's looking at who. Its too early to say its too late. If there is one thing I've learned in this life it's that we live what we create. Live what we create, even if it means that we take it away. only freedom I know is in death, and in death I know, So use this time on earth to learn how to let go Just let go, I let go, I let go, And all I see is love. I know that we all a little different, But I can't ignore the fact we all a little the same, Cause I see it in the face, We've all suffered a little pain, so next time you look in the mirror, remember its never to late for change, change for a better tomorrow and not in vain, to show that we have strength To show that we overcame! I understand that we all make mistakes, A new day, a new face, Stare in the mirror wonder who's looking at who. Its too early to say its too late. If there is one thing I've learned in this life it's that we live what we create. Live what we create, even if it means that we take it away. only freedom I know is in death, and in death I know, So use this time on earth to learn how to let go Just let go I let go, I let go, and found hope. Very well one OP. I'm not easily impressed with new artists and new music they share. This is an exception. Keep it up! |
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