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Message Subject Ladies who appreciate poetry? Think my GF will like this poem I wrote her?
Poster Handle MALACHI
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girls like things like that, but there is a fine line between ballsy and impressing a girl and just being flat out cheesy and cliché.

that poem is a prime example of cheesy and cliché.

so if you are really going to show your 'gf' that poem, please tell me you are thinking about marrying her, because if you aren't then that poem just seems like some cliché high school garbage.

trust me, poems are good if they are written good and if they don't push any boundaries.

spewing love out of almost every sentence is flat out lame.

you're not bob dylan and unless you are some sort of musician, I suggest you don't show that to her...
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 28097479


Um, actually we both are.

Thanks for the cheesy and cliche shitty feedback.
 Quoting: MALACHI 27724247


like i'm going to spend more than 5 minutes of my time reading and analyzing some wannabe musicians shitty poem?

good luck sir

I wish you and your girl the best, love is freakin complicated.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 28097479


Sounds like someone is jaded.
 
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