Quoting: MALACHI 27724247
and my bad if I offended you, to tell the truth I only read like 2 lines out of that Quoting: Anonymous Coward 28097479
but as soon as I saw love I said "oh it's one of those poems."
i'm sure it's actually alright I just don't really like the subject matter
Okay, well when someone pours all their heart, all their soul and the very core of their being into something USUALLY the non-asshole thing to do would be to NOT insult them calling their work 'shitty' or implying they are some two-bit hack 'wannabe' musician. Just for future reference. You seem like the type that cringes and scowls at couples who hold hands in public.
I might be kind of irritable cuz I haven't had a cigarette in a while, but...
pouring your heart into something doesn't automatically make it good, it just makes it full of effort and good intentions
and maybe that was an asshole move on my part, but sometimes that's what a lot of people need in there lives...
when you have a bunch of people telling you something is black when it's really white you'll go no where in life because you're seeing an illusion.
but what I am even talking about, this is poetry right?
and just to let you know, i'm not the type that cringes and scowls at couples in public, I'm the type that cringes and scowls at bullshit.
as in, oh look at that tool, she's acting all nice and holding his hand and treating him good because she needs a ride home and some money to go shopping.
bullshit is what I scowl at