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Rising Sparks (Poem)

 
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Rising Sparks (Poem)
Rising Sparks


The words of creation
Are spoken once forever,
Like a star sends its fire
Over distance and time

They are falling in order
They are burning a border
Their letters
Scorching senselessness
To sign

In our trying,
Our crying,
Sparks fall down:
Sounding from sky,
Sounding out ground

In our crying,
Our dying,
We raise them again:
Lifting light to
The lightless hearts of men

The words of creation
Are spoken new each morning
As the sun sends its light
When the world turns to see

They are falling like torches
Turning prison cells to porches
Syllables
That set the captives
Free

In our trying,
Our crying,
Sparks fall down:
Sounding from sky,
Sounding out ground

In our crying,
Our dying,
We raise them again:
Lifting light to
The lightless hearts of men
Inch.
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11/22/2012 04:08 PM
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Lovely, my friend. applause hf
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thanks, inch.!
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I always wished that I could do that. The thoughts are in my head,but they don't come out right on paper. Smiley
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So beautiful
Appreciate it deeply my friend
Right now there is 10 threads pinned, will pin this as soon as possible

Lots of love to you
You shine!!!!!!

rose
Truth and Love...
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I always wished that I could do that. The thoughts are in my head,but they don't come out right on paper. Smiley
 Quoting: Inch. 28062909


it just takes practice (and reading a lot)
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Re: Rising Sparks (Poem)
So beautiful
Appreciate it deeply my friend
Right now there is 10 threads pinned, will pin this as soon as possible

Lots of love to you
You shine!!!!!!

rose
 Quoting: 141


thanks

hf
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So beautiful
Appreciate it deeply my friend
Right now there is 10 threads pinned, will pin this as soon as possible

Lots of love to you
You shine!!!!!!

rose
 Quoting: 141


thanks

hf
 Quoting: Swinburnian


The world really needs love and light like this
hf
Truth and Love...
Inch.
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I always wished that I could do that. The thoughts are in my head,but they don't come out right on paper. Smiley
 Quoting: Inch. 28062909


it just takes practice (and reading a lot)
 Quoting: Swinburnian

I have the vocabulary, abd I appreciate poetry. I'm just not a poet, I guess. hf
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I always wished that I could do that. The thoughts are in my head,but they don't come out right on paper. Smiley
 Quoting: Inch. 28062909


it just takes practice (and reading a lot)
 Quoting: Swinburnian

I have the vocabulary, abd I appreciate poetry. I'm just not a poet, I guess. hf
 Quoting: Inch. 28062909


you're probably something better

hf
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You are a poet. That is special, my friend. smile_kiss
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bump For poetry. applause
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Falling Water (Mope)

When I saw the Spirit move
In what men called the beginning
I knew it was the end

He pulled the light from within me
And with this willful act
Left behind an empty darkness

So when the sun and sky conspire
To steal away my substance piece by piece
I command my children to fall again

There are some souls who see and feel
This returning as their despair
But I
For a time
Have filled my heart
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Falling Water (Mope)

When I saw the Spirit move
In what men called the beginning
I knew it was the end

He pulled the light from within me
And with this willful act
Left behind an empty darkness

So when the sun and sky conspire
To steal away my substance piece by piece
I command my children to fall again

There are some souls who see and feel
This returning as their despair
But I
For a time
Have filled my heart
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 17101375


thanks!
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11/22/2012 05:04 PM
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Tikkun olam
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Tikkun olam
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Tikkun olam
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11/22/2012 05:06 PM

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What We Do

the land and the sea and the sky up so high,
the clouds and the rains and the storms that do lie,
the rivers,the streams, the canals that do flow,
the land we were given to nurture and grow.

the mountains,the valleys,the sun in the sky,
the depleting ozone, need we ask why?
the forests and desserts, just wasting away
for mans careless deeds, our earth does decay.

the beaches,the country,the beauty spots we need,
all covered in litter, from the food we did feed,
the fauna,the wildlife, just wasting away,
from mans careless deeds, our earth in decay.

the tigers,the elephants,the whales are a few,
just killed off by man, nothing better to do!!
for the riches of others, causing poverty in more,
the slums of our earth, where life is so raw.

our happiness,our luxuries,our need to live nice,
for this mother earth, is paying the price.
do we need this? and do we need that?
without these things, would life be so bad?

to love and to cherish and do all one can,
to repair mother earth, the saviour of man,
the rewards will be endless, and life be divine,
to stay on this earth, this sweet home of mine.
enigma116
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Tikkun olam
 Quoting: Osaka 22769356


hf
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What We Do

the land and the sea and the sky up so high,
the clouds and the rains and the storms that do lie,
the rivers,the streams, the canals that do flow,
the land we were given to nurture and grow.

the mountains,the valleys,the sun in the sky,
the depleting ozone, need we ask why?
the forests and desserts, just wasting away
for mans careless deeds, our earth does decay.

the beaches,the country,the beauty spots we need,
all covered in litter, from the food we did feed,
the fauna,the wildlife, just wasting away,
from mans careless deeds, our earth in decay.

the tigers,the elephants,the whales are a few,
just killed off by man, nothing better to do!!
for the riches of others, causing poverty in more,
the slums of our earth, where life is so raw.

our happiness,our luxuries,our need to live nice,
for this mother earth, is paying the price.
do we need this? and do we need that?
without these things, would life be so bad?

to love and to cherish and do all one can,
to repair mother earth, the saviour of man,
the rewards will be endless, and life be divine,
to stay on this earth, this sweet home of mine.
 Quoting: enigma116


thanks!
i hope you don't mind a correction -- we weren't "given" canals -- we made them

hf
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bump
Inch.
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bump For luck. smile_hear
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bump
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Put some more of your stuff on here Swin. rose
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11/23/2012 11:25 AM

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beautiful!
thanks for sharing
hf
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beautiful!
thanks for sharing
hf
 Quoting: Ellusion


hf
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I always wished that I could do that. The thoughts are in my head,but they don't come out right on paper. Smiley
 Quoting: Inch. 28062909


it just takes practice (and reading a lot)
 Quoting: Swinburnian

I have the vocabulary, abd I appreciate poetry. I'm just not a poet, I guess. hf
 Quoting: Inch. 28062909




I'd guess you are. Just look at how much you love it and admire it. I think you will get your voice. hf
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Love is in the air! red_heart





Thank you for sharing your love so beautifully. ;o)
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What We Do

the land and the sea and the sky up so high,
the clouds and the rains and the storms that do lie,
the rivers,the streams, the canals that do flow,
the land we were given to nurture and grow.

the mountains,the valleys,the sun in the sky,
the depleting ozone, need we ask why?
the forests and desserts, just wasting away
for mans careless deeds, our earth does decay.

the beaches,the country,the beauty spots we need,
all covered in litter, from the food we did feed,
the fauna,the wildlife, just wasting away,
from mans careless deeds, our earth in decay.

the tigers,the elephants,the whales are a few,
just killed off by man, nothing better to do!!
for the riches of others, causing poverty in more,
the slums of our earth, where life is so raw.

our happiness,our luxuries,our need to live nice,
for this mother earth, is paying the price.
do we need this? and do we need that?
without these things, would life be so bad?

to love and to cherish and do all one can,
to repair mother earth, the saviour of man,
the rewards will be endless, and life be divine,
to stay on this earth, this sweet home of mine.
 Quoting: enigma116





hf

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