Rising Sparks (Poem)

Lovely, my friend.

thanks, inch.!

I always wished that I could do that. The thoughts are in my head,but they don't come out right on paper. :Smiley:

So beautiful
Appreciate it deeply my friend
Right now there is 10 threads pinned, will pin this as soon as possible

Lots of love to you
You shine!!!!!!

it just takes practice (and reading a lot)

thanks

The world really needs love and light like this

I have the vocabulary, abd I appreciate poetry. I'm just not a poet, I guess.

you're probably something better

You are a poet. That is special, my friend.

For poetry.

Falling Water (Mope)

When I saw the Spirit move
In what men called the beginning
I knew it was the end

He pulled the light from within me
And with this willful act
Left behind an empty darkness

So when the sun and sky conspire
To steal away my substance piece by piece
I command my children to fall again

There are some souls who see and feel
This returning as their despair
But I
For a time
Have filled my heart

thanks!

Tikkun olam

Tikkun olam

Tikkun olam

What We Do

the land and the sea and the sky up so high,
the clouds and the rains and the storms that do lie,
the rivers,the streams, the canals that do flow,
the land we were given to nurture and grow.

the mountains,the valleys,the sun in the sky,
the depleting ozone, need we ask why?
the forests and desserts, just wasting away
for mans careless deeds, our earth does decay.

the beaches,the country,the beauty spots we need,
all covered in litter, from the food we did feed,
the fauna,the wildlife, just wasting away,
from mans careless deeds, our earth in decay.

the tigers,the elephants,the whales are a few,
just killed off by man, nothing better to do!!
for the riches of others, causing poverty in more,
the slums of our earth, where life is so raw.

our happiness,our luxuries,our need to live nice,
for this mother earth, is paying the price.
do we need this? and do we need that?
without these things, would life be so bad?

to love and to cherish and do all one can,
to repair mother earth, the saviour of man,
the rewards will be endless, and life be divine,
to stay on this earth, this sweet home of mine.

thanks!
i hope you don't mind a correction -- we weren't "given" canals -- we made them

For luck.

Put some more of your stuff on here Swin.

beautiful!
thanks for sharing

I'd guess you are. Just look at how much you love it and admire it. I think you will get your voice.

Love is in the air!





Thank you for sharing your love so beautifully. ;o)