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Julian's Surrender

 
NothingFancy

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11/28/2012 09:27 PM
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Wow!

You have talent. I will be reading more of your work.

Thank you for sharing.
ParallaxPam

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11/28/2012 09:29 PM
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A family whose member's names all begin with J? C'mon...
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Mine do. All J's. Joe, Joanna, Julie, Jennifer. It happens.
Bluebird

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11/28/2012 09:40 PM
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Excellent! Fantastic writing!

Hope you can get published if that's what you want.

The old Alfred Hitchcock magazine is still around I believe. I think they would jump at the chance to get your stories.

Will read more as time allows.
One of the most important aspects of conspiracy theories is being able to discern when there isn't one.

Oh yeah, like you'd understand anyway.

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Alexi
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11/28/2012 09:58 PM
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This story is rather.. Volatile. It held my attention. Intriguing.
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11/28/2012 09:58 PM
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This story is rather.. Volatile. It held my attention. Intriguing.
Turtles Voice  (OP)

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11/28/2012 10:05 PM
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A family whose member's names all begin with J? C'mon...
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 26991073


Yes, in America folks do that, lol. Seriously!
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Turtles Voice  (OP)

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11/28/2012 10:13 PM
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Excellent! Fantastic writing!

Hope you can get published if that's what you want.

The old Alfred Hitchcock magazine is still around I believe. I think they would jump at the chance to get your stories.

Will read more as time allows.
 Quoting: Bluebird


What a cool idea - I'll check out Aflred Hitchcock - his books used to scare the crap out of me when I was a kid chuckle

Thanks hf
"In order to arrive at what you are not,
You must go through the way in which you are not."

-TS Eliot

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Momma Said Write A Book About It - New novel [link to www.amazon.com (secure)]

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Ralph--a house dog

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11/28/2012 10:29 PM
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Why the Fuck are you posting your stories here? Do you not realize that this is a conspiracy site?

Go to writersdigest.com or somewhere similar and research where you can submit your stories. Don't waste time here as you won't get constructive feedback. Research writing groups (in your local area AND online) and get your critiques from people who are fellow writers.
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Trust me, I've been on this site for more than 5 or 7 years - great feedback! I love GLP!!
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Some good fiction is a positive addition to the mix!
Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
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11/28/2012 10:36 PM
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Interesting. I think I would have taken out the little psycopath a little earlier. Like at 7.
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11/28/2012 10:51 PM
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Excellent! Fantastic writing!

Hope you can get published if that's what you want.

The old Alfred Hitchcock magazine is still around I believe. I think they would jump at the chance to get your stories.

Will read more as time allows.
 Quoting: Bluebird


What a cool idea - I'll check out Aflred Hitchcock - his books used to scare the crap out of me when I was a kid chuckle

Thanks hf
 Quoting: Turtles Voice


Alfred Hitchcock did not author any books. He did, on the other hand, pen screenplays.

There have been biographies written about him; but I doubt those are the books that scared you. In fact, I am at a loss as to what books they were that scared you.
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11/28/2012 10:51 PM
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I clicked the thread cause i think the world of Turtles....

hf

Wow...all the resistance on page one..

makes even me wonder

see..the don't like when you start pulling threads..cause they know where it will lead..

Love ya Turtles!
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11/28/2012 10:55 PM
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Excellent! Fantastic writing!

Hope you can get published if that's what you want.

The old Alfred Hitchcock magazine is still around I believe. I think they would jump at the chance to get your stories.

Will read more as time allows.
 Quoting: Bluebird


What a cool idea - I'll check out Aflred Hitchcock - his books used to scare the crap out of me when I was a kid chuckle

Thanks hf
 Quoting: Turtles Voice


Alfred Hitchcock did not author any books. He did, on the other hand, pen screenplays.

There have been biographies written about him; but I doubt those are the books that scared you. In fact, I am at a loss as to what books they were that scared you.
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Perhaps you are thinking of Robert Arthur Jr.?
Ralph--a house dog

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11/28/2012 11:46 PM
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Re: Julian's Surrender
Excellent! Fantastic writing!

Hope you can get published if that's what you want.

The old Alfred Hitchcock magazine is still around I believe. I think they would jump at the chance to get your stories.

Will read more as time allows.
 Quoting: Bluebird


What a cool idea - I'll check out Aflred Hitchcock - his books used to scare the crap out of me when I was a kid chuckle

Thanks hf
 Quoting: Turtles Voice


Alfred Hitchcock did not author any books. He did, on the other hand, pen screenplays.

There have been biographies written about him; but I doubt those are the books that scared you. In fact, I am at a loss as to what books they were that scared you.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 2718410


I think I remember a couple of pulp fiction collections of short stories by various authors that he (or his representatives)compiled; maybe they were the stories from which screen plays for his TV shows were taken?
"Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night.....Rage, rage against the dying of the light"-----Dylan Thomas

HIS NAME IS SETH RICH

[link to biblicalselfdefense.com]

[link to forum.1111ers.blog]


Always remember that "for the greater good" will not include YOU.

"Who decides?"
---Robert A. Heinlein


-'Whoever would overthrow the liberty of a nation must begin by subduing the freeness of speech.'—Benjamin Franklin

[link to www.westcoasttruth.com]

The only thing worth paying full retail for is pantyhose.

You cannot do all of the good the world needs, but the world needs all of the good you can do.
Turtles Voice  (OP)

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11/29/2012 10:09 AM
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Re: Julian's Surrender
Excellent! Fantastic writing!

Hope you can get published if that's what you want.

The old Alfred Hitchcock magazine is still around I believe. I think they would jump at the chance to get your stories.

Will read more as time allows.
 Quoting: Bluebird


What a cool idea - I'll check out Aflred Hitchcock - his books used to scare the crap out of me when I was a kid chuckle

Thanks hf
 Quoting: Turtles Voice


Alfred Hitchcock did not author any books. He did, on the other hand, pen screenplays.

There have been biographies written about him; but I doubt those are the books that scared you. In fact, I am at a loss as to what books they were that scared you.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 2718410


I think I remember a couple of pulp fiction collections of short stories by various authors that he (or his representatives)compiled; maybe they were the stories from which screen plays for his TV shows were taken?
 Quoting: Ralph--a house dog


Yep, and there were some aimed at kids I checked out from the library - scared the crap out of me.
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You must go through the way in which you are not."

-TS Eliot

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