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need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday

 
ThePhrophet2012
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need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
so im in the army in newyork had to send my wife home and its her birthday im seending her flowers with this message all bullshit aside trying to get some feed back on it let me know what you think thanks for the help


Happy birthday beautiful,
I love you and miss you more than words could explain.
Your Beauty shines like the morning sun. Your personality resonates like a shooting star. Your heart is filled with Love and Joy, and when I think of you nothing else in the world matters. Because OUR love is eternal never ending as if it (was)(were) frozen in time.

any feed back would be cool thanks good or bad

Last Edited by ThePhrophet2012 on 11/29/2012 10:58 PM
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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
so im in the army in newyork had to send my wife home and its her birthday im seending her flowers with this message all bullshit aside trying to get some feed back on it let me know what you think thanks for the help


Happy birthday beautiful,
I love you and miss you more than words could explain.
Your Beauty shines like the morning sun. Your personality resonates like a shooting star. Your heart is filled with Love and Joy, and when I think of you nothing else in the world matters. Because our love is eternal never ending as if it was frozen in time.

any feed back would be cool thanks good or bad
 Quoting: ThePhrophet2012


It's a beautiful sentiment. I do apologize for the bold, my inner grammar Nazi sometimes escapes. :)
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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
so im in the army in newyork had to send my wife home and its her birthday im seending her flowers with this message all bullshit aside trying to get some feed back on it let me know what you think thanks for the help


Happy birthday beautiful,
I love you and miss you more than words could explain.
Your Beauty shines like the morning sun. Your personality resonates like a shooting star. Your heart is filled with Love and Joy, and when I think of you nothing else in the world matters. Because our love is eternal never ending as if it was frozen in time.

any feed back would be cool thanks good or bad
 Quoting: ThePhrophet2012


It's a beautiful sentiment. I do apologize for the bold, my inner grammar Nazi sometimes escapes. :)
 Quoting: Meggarea


lol thanks yeah Im not to worried about my shitty grammer the florist im sure will know how to spell it out right when I do it over the phone thanks for the feed back
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11/29/2012 10:50 PM
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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
She's an Army wife?

Send something to her boyfriend, too.
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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
so im in the army in newyork had to send my wife home and its her birthday im seending her flowers with this message all bullshit aside trying to get some feed back on it let me know what you think thanks for the help


Happy birthday beautiful,
I love you and miss you more than words could explain.
Your Beauty shines like the morning sun. Your personality resonates like a shooting star. Your heart is filled with Love and Joy, and when I think of you nothing else in the world matters. Because are love is eternal never ending as if it was frozen in time.

any feed back would be cool thanks good or bad
 Quoting: ThePhrophet2012


Because OUR love is eternal.

Otherwise very beautiful, well done and nicely written. She will be all melty.
"For once you have tasted flight you will walk the earth with your eyes turned skywards, for there you have been and there you will long to return"
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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
She's an Army wife?

Send something to her boyfriend, too.
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nice joke but alot of times you would be right but not in this case
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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
so im in the army in newyork had to send my wife home and its her birthday im seending her flowers with this message all bullshit aside trying to get some feed back on it let me know what you think thanks for the help


Happy birthday beautiful,
I love you and miss you more than words could explain.
Your Beauty shines like the morning sun. Your personality resonates like a shooting star. Your heart is filled with Love and Joy, and when I think of you nothing else in the world matters. Because are love is eternal never ending as if it was frozen in time.

any feed back would be cool thanks good or bad
 Quoting: ThePhrophet2012


Because OUR love is eternal.

Otherwise very beautiful, well done and nicely written. She will be all melty.
 Quoting: Rochelle


thank you just wanted to see if it was coming off the same way i when I wrote it and heard it in my head
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11/29/2012 10:53 PM

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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
Good job Soldier, God bless you!

Last Edited by rosekitty on 11/29/2012 10:53 PM
"For once you have tasted flight you will walk the earth with your eyes turned skywards, for there you have been and there you will long to return"
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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
Gross and overdone.

If she has a low IQ, she might like it.

Like attracts like, I guess.

You're cheating on her, aren't you?
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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
I would capitalize Beautiful.

Other than that, and of course changing 'are love' to 'our love', I think it will knock her socks off. Be sure to draw a couple of hearts on it, too.
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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
so im in the army in newyork had to send my wife home and its her birthday im seending her flowers with this message all bullshit aside trying to get some feed back on it let me know what you think thanks for the help


Happy birthday beautiful,
I love you and miss you more than words could explain.
Your Beauty shines like the morning sun. Your personality resonates like a shooting star. Your heart is filled with Love and Joy, and when I think of you nothing else in the world matters. Because are love is eternal never ending as if it was frozen in time.

any feed back would be cool thanks good or bad
 Quoting: ThePhrophet2012


Because OUR love is eternal.

Otherwise very beautiful, well done and nicely written. She will be all melty.
 Quoting: Rochelle


thank you just wanted to see if it was coming off the same way i when I wrote it and heard it in my head
 Quoting: ThePhrophet2012



Oh, sorry. I see you're all delusional. Carry on.
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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
Gross and overdone.

If she has a low IQ, she might like it.

Like attracts like, I guess.

You're cheating on her, aren't you?
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1610510


Ha ha, I'll bet you don't have a woman. Women love this kind of over the top romance.
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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
Gross and overdone.

If she has a low IQ, she might like it.

Like attracts like, I guess.

You're cheating on her, aren't you?
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1610510


there will always be trolls I take it your not married dont have any kids and have never been in my shoes being in the army deoploying all the time for a year at a time can break a relationship or bring it togather closer than you could imagine or even understand we need more love in the world
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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
You asked for feedback on what you wrote.

Try to focus.



Gross and overdone.

If she has a low IQ, she might like it.

Like attracts like, I guess.

You're cheating on her, aren't you?
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1610510


there will always be trolls I take it your not married dont have any kids and have never been in my shoes being in the army deoploying all the time for a year at a time can break a relationship or bring it togather closer than you could imagine or even understand we need more love in the world
 Quoting: ThePhrophet2012
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11/29/2012 10:59 PM

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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
You asked for feedback on what you wrote.

Try to focus.



Gross and overdone.

If she has a low IQ, she might like it.

Like attracts like, I guess.

You're cheating on her, aren't you?
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1610510


there will always be trolls I take it your not married dont have any kids and have never been in my shoes being in the army deoploying all the time for a year at a time can break a relationship or bring it togather closer than you could imagine or even understand we need more love in the world
 Quoting: ThePhrophet2012

 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1610510


Fuck off
"For once you have tasted flight you will walk the earth with your eyes turned skywards, for there you have been and there you will long to return"
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Re: need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday
You asked for feedback on what you wrote.

Try to focus.



Gross and overdone.

If she has a low IQ, she might like it.

Like attracts like, I guess.

You're cheating on her, aren't you?
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1610510


there will always be trolls I take it your not married dont have any kids and have never been in my shoes being in the army deoploying all the time for a year at a time can break a relationship or bring it togather closer than you could imagine or even understand we need more love in the world
 Quoting: ThePhrophet2012

 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1610510


your right and im not lashing out I knew that would come but at the same time I have to voice my opinion back

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