Godlike Productions - Discussion Forum
Users Online Now: 2,210 (Who's On?)Visitors Today: 1,047,366
Pageviews Today: 1,452,557Threads Today: 394Posts Today: 6,973
12:02 PM


Rate this Thread

Absolute BS Crap Reasonable Nice Amazing
 

Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all

 
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 21707086
United States
12/05/2012 02:37 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
What do I do now? She knows. Yet she remains unresponsive. She has to know how much she meant to me. I felt her breathe and she felt mine. We synchronized and symphonized. She isn't just a didgereedoo call where the vibrations end. The breath is circular. Alas, now I wait; meditating in the minutes as time slowly falls around us like petals. But my mind constantly drifts back to her, like a fisherman teeming with anticipation at his line. I opened my heart. Time stood still; I loved you for an eternity.
Anonymous Coward (OP)
User ID: 21707086
United States
12/05/2012 02:43 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
Action Will and desire brought me you. You brought me you. Bring me you again.
Anonymous Coward (OP)
User ID: 21707086
United States
12/05/2012 02:48 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
Just speak to me.
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 24951761
France
12/05/2012 02:57 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
Its all mirrors, and you will find you again - a different reflection, different attractions, but the same undying love you have for yourself.

Don't forget.
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 29084883
United Kingdom
12/05/2012 03:02 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
love is like catching the cold, after 7 days your cured.
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 29115381
United States
12/05/2012 03:04 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
quit tossin rocks in the pond man. redirect your focus. the tide does pull away
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 29115381
United States
12/05/2012 03:06 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
also quit binary reflecting my mind from three months ago
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 28386399
Canada
12/05/2012 03:08 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
We are on the cusp of the end, my friend.alone
Anonymous Coward (OP)
User ID: 21707086
United States
12/05/2012 03:10 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
Its all mirrors, and you will find you again - a different reflection, different attractions, but the same undying love you have for yourself.

Don't forget.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 24951761


None I've met yet have fitso nicely. I'm afraid I've driven her away with this;

You shine, 
On the vessel of
My  meek mind
Navigating the
Treacherous waters
Beneath the moon;
I see you
Reflecting perfect rays
In a  magnificent conclusion
Where Time stands still.
Where,
The depths of your soul
Teeming in your 
tender gaze
Stir up my thoughts
Sending my vessel
Spiraling to the
Point. 

Maybe it was too much. We had only just begun.
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 24951761
France
12/05/2012 03:10 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
we seem to be echoing in the night. soon we will rejoin selves.
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 24951761
France
12/05/2012 03:13 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
Its all mirrors, and you will find you again - a different reflection, different attractions, but the same undying love you have for yourself.

Don't forget.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 24951761


None I've met yet have fitso nicely. I'm afraid I've driven her away with this;

You shine, 
On the vessel of
My  meek mind
Navigating the
Treacherous waters
Beneath the moon;
I see you
Reflecting perfect rays
In a  magnificent conclusion
Where Time stands still.
Where,
The depths of your soul
Teeming in your 
tender gaze
Stir up my thoughts
Sending my vessel
Spiraling to the
Point. 

Maybe it was too much. We had only just begun.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 21707086


Two that are one should stay distant until the final hour. She knows this even if you forget. You'll remember why, she'll remember you.

Anonymous Coward (OP)
User ID: 21707086
United States
12/05/2012 03:18 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
We are on the cusp of the end, my friend.alone
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 28386399


Ive felt the beauty, the love, the warmth. It brings me tears.
Anonymous Coward (OP)
User ID: 21707086
United States
12/05/2012 03:20 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
quit tossin rocks in the pond man. redirect your focus. the tide does pull away
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


quit tossin rocks in the pond man. redirect your focus. the tide does pull away
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


I feel like a kid skipping soul
stones into a whirlpool.
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 29115381
United States
12/05/2012 03:20 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
We are on the cusp of the end, my friend.alone
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 28386399


Ive felt the beauty, the love, the warmth. It brings me tears.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 21707086


Patience
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 29115381
United States
12/05/2012 03:24 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
man for real I can feel through your metaphors and the manner in which you slide your words around. I was there three months ago. mine entered into the room, slipped me some of the purest love you could find, then whispered patience and walked away once again. Your situation sounds similar. have faith
Anonymous Coward (OP)
User ID: 21707086
United States
12/05/2012 03:25 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
Its all mirrors, and you will find you again - a different reflection, different attractions, but the same undying love you have for yourself.

Don't forget.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 24951761


None I've met yet have fitso nicely. I'm afraid I've driven her away with this;

You shine, 
On the vessel of
My  meek mind
Navigating the
Treacherous waters
Beneath the moon;
I see you
Reflecting perfect rays
In a  magnificent conclusion
Where Time stands still.
Where,
The depths of your soul
Teeming in your 
tender gaze
Stir up my thoughts
Sending my vessel
Spiraling to the
Point. 

Maybe it was too much. We had only just begun.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 21707086


Two that are one should stay distant until the final hour. She knows this even if you forget. You'll remember why, she'll remember you.


 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 24951761


I want to be with her. I want to feel her laughter. She's a princess ya know? The only thing more beautiful than her petals , Is the very fountain of life; her soul.
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 29115381
United States
12/05/2012 03:27 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
and even if this one isnt what she seems remain pure through the pain. she may simply be the one sent by the real her as a test of your truth.
Anonymous Coward (OP)
User ID: 21707086
United States
12/05/2012 03:28 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
man for real I can feel through your metaphors and the manner in which you slide your words around. I was there three months ago. mine entered into the room, slipped me some of the purest love you could find, then whispered patience and walked away once again. Your situation sounds similar. have faith
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


man for real I can feel through your metaphors and the manner in which you slide your words around. I was there three months ago. mine entered into the room, slipped me some of the purest love you could find, then whispered patience and walked away once again. Your situation sounds similar. have faith
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


Where are you now?
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 29115381
United States
12/05/2012 03:30 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
man for real I can feel through your metaphors and the manner in which you slide your words around. I was there three months ago. mine entered into the room, slipped me some of the purest love you could find, then whispered patience and walked away once again. Your situation sounds similar. have faith
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


man for real I can feel through your metaphors and the manner in which you slide your words around. I was there three months ago. mine entered into the room, slipped me some of the purest love you could find, then whispered patience and walked away once again. Your situation sounds similar. have faith
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


Where are you now?
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 21707086


on the cusp it feels. they have a fickle way of keeping us on the edge. I am currently back on the boat keeping my minds eye on the void
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 24951761
France
12/05/2012 03:30 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
Its all mirrors, and you will find you again - a different reflection, different attractions, but the same undying love you have for yourself.

Don't forget.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 24951761


None I've met yet have fitso nicely. I'm afraid I've driven her away with this;

You shine, 
On the vessel of
My  meek mind
Navigating the
Treacherous waters
Beneath the moon;
I see you
Reflecting perfect rays
In a  magnificent conclusion
Where Time stands still.
Where,
The depths of your soul
Teeming in your 
tender gaze
Stir up my thoughts
Sending my vessel
Spiraling to the
Point. 

Maybe it was too much. We had only just begun.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 21707086


Two that are one should stay distant until the final hour. She knows this even if you forget. You'll remember why, she'll remember you.


 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 24951761


I want to be with her. I want to feel her laughter. She's a princess ya know? The only thing more beautiful than her petals , Is the very fountain of life; her soul.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 21707086


I feel you - she is the most wonderful I've ever known - pure love. We are near ourself, she is we. We stay separate to prevent collapse.

We will stay 3. Neutrality, Affinity, and Possibility. Her shape changes but she'll still be. This transition is the hardest one, we've reached critical mass.
Perseus7

User ID: 29091618
United States
12/05/2012 03:37 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
and even if this one isnt what she seems remain pure through the pain. she may simply be the one sent by the real her as a test of your truth.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


sounds like the book, "the magus"
1s 2s 2p 3s 3p 4s 3d 4p 5s 4d 5p 6s 4f 5d 6p 7s 5f 6d 7p
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 29115381
United States
12/05/2012 03:37 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
seems too strong to handle at the moment. other things must be taken care of before such bliss is allowed
Anonymous Coward (OP)
User ID: 21707086
United States
12/05/2012 03:37 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
It can't be the end. I see us.
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 24951761
France
12/05/2012 03:39 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
It can't be the end. I see us.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 21707086


It isn't. You see we.
Anonymous Coward (OP)
User ID: 21707086
United States
12/05/2012 03:40 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
man for real I can feel through your metaphors and the manner in which you slide your words around. I was there three months ago. mine entered into the room, slipped me some of the purest love you could find, then whispered patience and walked away once again. Your situation sounds similar. have faith
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


man for real I can feel through your metaphors and the manner in which you slide your words around. I was there three months ago. mine entered into the room, slipped me some of the purest love you could find, then whispered patience and walked away once again. Your situation sounds similar. have faith
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


Where are you now?
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 21707086


on the cusp it feels. they have a fickle way of keeping us on the edge. I am currently back on the boat keeping my minds eye on the void
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


It's true. My experience sounds like yours. I can't help but just want to dive in though. I suppose a turtle Would teach patience.
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 29115381
United States
12/05/2012 03:41 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
It can't be the end. I see us.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 21707086


hold on to it until it gives you the signal to let go. if it has yet to give you the signal to let go then be patient and jovial that she is there. you can not control, only accept. so be happy with the happiness and be happy with the soul crushing uncertainty
Anonymous Coward (OP)
User ID: 21707086
United States
12/05/2012 03:42 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
seems too strong to handle at the moment. other things must be taken care of before such bliss is allowed
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


seems too strong to handle at the moment. other things must be taken care of before such bliss is allowed
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


Work to be done?
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 29115381
United States
12/05/2012 03:43 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
seems too strong to handle at the moment. other things must be taken care of before such bliss is allowed
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


seems too strong to handle at the moment. other things must be taken care of before such bliss is allowed
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 29115381


Work to be done?
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 21707086


my messenger told me work must be done to deserve her
Anonymous Coward (OP)
User ID: 21707086
United States
12/05/2012 03:51 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
where to begin. That's what I keep asking myself. Where to begin, where to end. The nice compact Story of my struggle: too little too late. Maybe in this tale too much.. But.. Idk maybe the poem just wasn't worthy. I need more experience.
Anonymous Coward
User ID: 29115381
United States
12/05/2012 03:54 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
where to begin. That's what I keep asking myself. Where to begin, where to end. The nice compact Story of my struggle: too little too late. Maybe in this tale too much.. But.. Idk maybe the poem just wasn't worthy. I need more experience.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 21707086


acquire that experience by following your passions all the while seeing her face on the other end of the tunnel
Anonymous Coward (OP)
User ID: 21707086
United States
12/05/2012 03:55 AM
Report Abusive Post
Report Copyright Violation
Re: Is this the beginning; The end; or nothing at all
Its all mirrors, and you will find you again - a different reflection, different attractions, but the same undying love you have for yourself.

Don't forget.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 24951761


None I've met yet have fitso nicely. I'm afraid I've driven her away with this;

You shine, 
On the vessel of
My  meek mind
Navigating the
Treacherous waters
Beneath the moon;
I see you
Reflecting perfect rays
In a  magnificent conclusion
Where Time stands still.
Where,
The depths of your soul
Teeming in your 
tender gaze
Stir up my thoughts
Sending my vessel
Spiraling to the
Point. 

Maybe it was too much. We had only just begun.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 21707086


Two that are one should stay distant until the final hour. She knows this even if you forget. You'll remember why, she'll remember you.


 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 24951761



It would be neat to truly know why. Where will we meet?





GLP