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Music Appreciation! Feed Back Needed, The song is set to private so only this forum will see.

 
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Music Appreciation! Feed Back Needed, The song is set to private so only this forum will see.
This is the first time I published a song online, with home studio recording.
I would really appreciate your feed back, i'm just kinda shy when it come to showing stuff like this.
And please criticism is welcomed here, to help improve my works.
Thank you. =]




You showed you didn't want me babe,
but now you want me back.
Don't you think its kinda strange,
that your hiding all the facts.

Oh, come one now
Oh baby, come on now
Cause everybody's talking,
and their all just talking about love.

You showed you didn't want me babe,
but now you want me back.
Don't you think its kinda strange,
that I saw you in the back,
of the hotel.

Oh baby, come on now
Cause everybody's talking,
and their all just talking about love.

You told me that you loved,
but I can tell i'm not the only one.
Don't you think its kinds crazy,
that I thought you were the one.

Come on now
Oh baby, come on now.
Cause everybody's talking,
and their all just talking about love.

Cause everybody's talking,
and their all just talking about love.

You showed you didn't want me babe,
but now you want me back.
Don't you think its kinda strange,
that your hiding all the facts.

Oh, come one now
Oh baby, come on now
Cause everybody's talking,
and their all just talking about love.

You showed you didn't want me babe,
but now you want me back.
Don't you think its kinda strange,
that your hiding all the facts.

Oh, come one now
Oh baby, come on now
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Or not. lol

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thanks for 5 star
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wow
i love your voice,
very soothing.
everything flows nicely.
:)

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Very good stuff!!

hfhfhf:
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Thank you! Both of you. :)
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your very welcome!
anytime!
:)
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[link to www.ustream.tv]
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Organic, nice op.

hf
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Organic, nice op.

hf
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Thank you. :)
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I love it, OP!
"And I know that when I leave savage wolves will come in among you and will not spare the flock. Even from your own number men will arise and distort the truth in order to draw away disciples after them. So be on your guard. We are not the wolves at the gate, we are the ones who face them."

And ye shall be hated of all men for my name's sake: but he that endureth to the end shall be saved. Matthew 10:22

Wake up, oh sleeper, and rise from the dead, and Christ will shine on you
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wow
i love your voice,
very soothing.
everything flows nicely.
:)
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Agree!
"And I know that when I leave savage wolves will come in among you and will not spare the flock. Even from your own number men will arise and distort the truth in order to draw away disciples after them. So be on your guard. We are not the wolves at the gate, we are the ones who face them."

And ye shall be hated of all men for my name's sake: but he that endureth to the end shall be saved. Matthew 10:22

Wake up, oh sleeper, and rise from the dead, and Christ will shine on you
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clappa


I love it, OP!
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Thank you very much. hf
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Very pleasantly surprised. A lot better than I thought it would be. You have a great voice.

In fact, the only criticism I would level against it is the same criticism that I level about every other song that's ever been written in the whole history of song-writing history...

Why do you have to include the word 'Baby'?

Can nobody write a song that doesn't contain the word 'baby'?

angryface

Shows a lack of imagination. Restriction.

Other than that...great song and great voice. 5a
union

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Very pleasantly surprised. A lot better than I thought it would be. You have a great voice.

In fact, the only criticism I would level against it is the same criticism that I level about every other song that's ever been written in the whole history of song-writing history...

Why do you have to include the word 'Baby'?

Can nobody write a song that doesn't contain the word 'baby'?

angryface

Shows a lack of imagination. Restriction.

Other than that...great song and great voice. 5a
 Quoting: Shoot straight Johnny


Well I have many other lyrics that don't contain the word baby. Lol. I was told as a musician to keep it simple because when you get used to perfection it makes it harder to write a song. But thank you! I'm glad for your comment. I will keep I'm mind not to use it again. :P
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01/05/2013 02:22 PM
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Loved it! Nice voice, nice song - no reason for you to be shy! Take off the "private" and let the world enjoy. You've got what it takes - keep going. And thanks for sharing.

Post some more when you have them.
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Good for you for posting, OP. Takes a lot of courage to lift the bushel basket and share your light. Nice job on all accounts. Keep following your calling. All best to you.
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I think the use of "baby" is fine in your song. Some of the greatest songs use that word.

Use it when the inspiration hits. If you limit words you can use it affects your creative flow.
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Loved it! Nice voice, nice song - no reason for you to be shy! Take off the "private" and let the world enjoy. You've got what it takes - keep going. And thanks for sharing.

Post some more when you have them.
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:) okay! ill take it off private. Thanks for your encouragement!
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So sweet, thank you! Maybe experiment with how you sing "baby." Like you you say, with syncopation, Lo a ah ov (for the word love.) then after another line and "Oh Baby" comes up again, just imitate what you did before, dove tail, wave it in our face how simple your thoughts are, it is attractive.
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Good for you for posting, OP. Takes a lot of courage to lift the bushel basket and share your light. Nice job on all accounts. Keep following your calling. All best to you.
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Thank you! That means a lot!
hf
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So sweet, thank you! Maybe experiment with how you sing "baby." Like you you say, with syncopation, Lo a ah ov (for the word love.) then after another line and "Oh Baby" comes up again, just imitate what you did before, dove tail, wave it in our face how simple your thoughts are, it is attractive.
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Hehe. Okay will do! Thank you for your kind words. tounge
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01/05/2013 03:31 PM
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Lets see what the judges thought.

Randy Jackson:
Yo dog. It was a save song but you did it well. It was a bit pitchy here and there but overall, good job dog.

Paula Abdul:
That was an incredible (hiccup) performance. As you can see on this thread we all support you. The song really touched me deeply and blah, blah, blah, blah, (hiccup), blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, (hiccup), blah, blah, blah. Thank you for your gift, the gift of music (hiccup).

Simon Cowell:
First of all, I want to thank you. Thanks to your song I got some needed sleep. OK. This song didn't display your range but you appear to have a decent voice. Not sure if it's unique and strong enough to stand on it's own but if you are willing, maybe I can add you to the next boy-band I am gonna to contract and annoy the world with.
Editing needs some work. The guitar on the right channel was sometimes off beat. One sample is just ahead of the beat and another sample is lagging behind a bit. Same applies to the vocals. 2:52 is one example.



Seriously though. I think it's one of the best demo we have heard here on GLP. Keep it up and looking forward to the next one.


EDIT: Upload higher quality audio to YouTube next time. It really makes a difference.

Last Edited by Psych on 01/05/2013 03:32 PM
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Lets see what the judges thought.

Randy Jackson:
Yo dog. It was a save song but you did it well. It was a bit pitchy here and there but overall, good job dog.

Paula Abdul:
That was an incredible (hiccup) performance. As you can see on this thread we all support you. The song really touched me deeply and blah, blah, blah, blah, (hiccup), blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, (hiccup), blah, blah, blah. Thank you for your gift, the gift of music (hiccup).

Simon Cowell:
First of all, I want to thank you. Thanks to your song I got some needed sleep. OK. This song didn't display your range but you appear to have a decent voice. Not sure if it's unique and strong enough to stand on it's own but if you are willing, maybe I can add you to the next boy-band I am gonna to contract and annoy the world with.
Editing needs some work. The guitar on the right channel was sometimes off beat. One sample is just ahead of the beat and another sample is lagging behind a bit. Same applies to the vocals. 2:52 is one example.



Seriously though. I think it's one of the best demo we have heard here on GLP. Keep it up and looking forward to the next one.


EDIT: Upload higher quality audio to YouTube next time. It really makes a difference.
 Quoting: Psych


Lol wow, thanks for the tips. Btw I'm sorta a one MAN band at the moment. So yeah. But I'll surely upload it to higher quality audio next time. It's sorta the first song I ever did. So I'm still learning the producing part.
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Lets see what the judges thought.

Randy Jackson:
Yo dog. It was a save song but you did it well. It was a bit pitchy here and there but overall, good job dog.

Paula Abdul:
That was an incredible (hiccup) performance. As you can see on this thread we all support you. The song really touched me deeply and blah, blah, blah, blah, (hiccup), blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, (hiccup), blah, blah, blah. Thank you for your gift, the gift of music (hiccup).

Simon Cowell:
First of all, I want to thank you. Thanks to your song I got some needed sleep. OK. This song didn't display your range but you appear to have a decent voice. Not sure if it's unique and strong enough to stand on it's own but if you are willing, maybe I can add you to the next boy-band I am gonna to contract and annoy the world with.
Editing needs some work. The guitar on the right channel was sometimes off beat. One sample is just ahead of the beat and another sample is lagging behind a bit. Same applies to the vocals. 2:52 is one example.



Seriously though. I think it's one of the best demo we have heard here on GLP. Keep it up and looking forward to the next one.


EDIT: Upload higher quality audio to YouTube next time. It really makes a difference.
 Quoting: Psych


Dude, you crack me up, Spencer.

1rof1
"And I know that when I leave savage wolves will come in among you and will not spare the flock. Even from your own number men will arise and distort the truth in order to draw away disciples after them. So be on your guard. We are not the wolves at the gate, we are the ones who face them."

And ye shall be hated of all men for my name's sake: but he that endureth to the end shall be saved. Matthew 10:22

Wake up, oh sleeper, and rise from the dead, and Christ will shine on you
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EDIT: Upload higher quality audio to YouTube next time. It really makes a difference.
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Here is the high quality audio. Background noise doesn't sound as bad anymore.

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Lol wow, thanks for the tips. Btw I'm sorta a one MAN band at the moment. So yeah. But I'll surely upload it to higher quality audio next time. It's sorta the first song I ever did. So I'm still learning the producing part.
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You're welcome.

What do you mean sorta a one man band? Like this? tounge




EDIT: Upload higher quality audio to YouTube next time. It really makes a difference.
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Here is the high quality audio. Background noise doesn't sound as bad anymore.


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Excellent. Sounds much better, clearer.
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Lol wow, thanks for the tips. Btw I'm sorta a one MAN band at the moment. So yeah. But I'll surely upload it to higher quality audio next time. It's sorta the first song I ever did. So I'm still learning the producing part.
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You're welcome.

What do you mean sorta a one man band? Like this? tounge




EDIT: Upload higher quality audio to YouTube next time. It really makes a difference.
 Quoting: Psych




Here is the high quality audio. Background noise doesn't sound as bad anymore.


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Excellent. Sounds much better, clearer.
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Lol that video made me laugh. Hopefully I'll be just like him! Haha jkjk
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Very pleasantly surprised. A lot better than I thought it would be. You have a great voice.

In fact, the only criticism I would level against it is the same criticism that I level about every other song that's ever been written in the whole history of song-writing history...

Why do you have to include the word 'Baby'?

Can nobody write a song that doesn't contain the word 'baby'?

angryface

Shows a lack of imagination. Restriction.

Other than that...great song and great voice. 5a
 Quoting: Shoot straight Johnny


Well I have many other lyrics that don't contain the word baby. Lol. I was told as a musician to keep it simple because when you get used to perfection it makes it harder to write a song. But thank you! I'm glad for your comment. I will keep I'm mind not to use it again. :P
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yoda
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i would change or remove those two bass notes in succession that repeat throughout the song between the chords. i feel like they add a layer of dissonance that your song isnt going for, but maybe it is...

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