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There was a young lady named Lil
who thought dynamite might give her a thrill;
they found her vagina in North Carolina
and parts of her tits in Brazil

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"Oh, uh, there won't be any money, but when you die, on your deathbed, you will receive total consciousness." So I got that goin' for me, which is nice.
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Sorry, used different laptop n wasn't signed in.
This is mine (edited.... and why I like memberships, so we can edit our mistakes)
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ahhh there ya go! valid entry ;)


I would be in trouble without the edit ability! lol
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Ahhhhh Thank you Dr. Acula, I've been wanting to do this for long time. You inspired me to write this just now.




I met him at Halloween party
he was Phantom of the Opera
I was Elvira, looking hearty
We instantly clicked and became chummy
Dumped the guy I was dating
because I'm no dummy
Then I contacted hubby to be impressed
He said my contacting him made him blessed
He shared of himself over phone talk
We met again for coffee and a walk
Our first date, he snuck a kiss on the cheek
We fell in love within one week We married 4 months later Always giving thanks to our Creator
We have so much in common…
Our love for the Lord, animals and each other
He was my strength for my dying brother
We now have 3 dogs and 2 cats that sleep with us
Bed is crowded but we don’t fuss
We see the insanity that is in the world
Read the word that is would be done
Doesn't mean we don't own a gun
He is my best friend forever more In sickness and health, We love one another to the core
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Why I love my Hubby
I met him at Halloween party
He was Phantom of the Opera
I was Elvira, looking hearty
We instantly clicked and became chummy
Dumped the guy I was dating
because I'm no dummy
Then I contacted hubby to be impressed
He said my contacting him made him blessed
He shared of himself over phone talk
We met again for coffee and a walk
Our first date, he snuck a kiss on the cheek
We fell in love within one week
We married 4 months later
Always giving thanks to our Creator
We have so much in common…
Our love for the Lord, animals and each other
He was my strength for my dying brother
We now have 3 dogs and 2 cats that sleep with us
Bed is crowded but we don’t fuss
We see the insanity that is in the world
Read the word that is would be done
Doesn't mean we don't own a gun
He is my best friend forever more
In sickness and health,
We love one another to the core



Sorry, used different laptop n wasn't signed in.
This is mine (edited.... and why I like memberships, so we can edit our mistakes)
 Quoting: Indysmindy


So sweet! Your life story all neatly wrapped in a few verses.
But the natural man receiveth not the things of the Spirit of God: for they are foolishness unto him: neither can he know them, because they are spiritually discerned.
I Corinthians 2:14

God doesn't choose favorites.. They choose HIM

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I want to thank you Doc and all of the other posters here. I haven't written anything in years. You guys with all of your creativity have gotten me inspired and I've been writing again, I would like to share with you the first poem I've written in about 15 years.



It's not as good as a lot I've seen in this thread, still I'm happy with it and I'm even more happy to find that when I sit down to be creative I'm not staring at a blank screen or sheet of paper till I quit out of frustration.

Once again thank you all. hf
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cheers

Thank you for sharing with us your art! :)

Any poem written from the soul is a good poem!

I am glad you found inspiration once again!

Keep writing!

cheers
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BTW Dr Acula, Im still in the contest. I was the early poster on first pages.
My subscription runs out in March so Id be happy to take a upgrade then if I win.
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Eating a dick or not eating a dick ,
You are still a worthless piece of shit,
The stupid shit you say,
The retarded troll games you play,
Make me hope I get a chance,
to slap the fuck out of you one day.
I Pray..
every moment of everyday,
that GOD makes your computer,
blow up in your face.
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Only at GLP
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BTW Dr Acula, Im still in the contest. I was the early poster on first pages.
My subscription runs out in March so Id be happy to take a upgrade then if I win.
 Quoting: ELNATHAN APOLLYON


cheers

Unless noted they did not want in it... All eligible posters are in the running.... that includes you.

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Come Hopi, come Shoshone, come Mayans and Mamos !!


Upon this sacred vein, the white men came,
Upon this wild land, along came his band,
Andebichi Woho Nee Bide Pe,
Who is they, Who am I
A Nabidengehdaigwahni.!


Who am I warrior to?


When Upon these veins of Blue
Upon these veins where copper Bliss,
When they mixed these people, and they kissed,
Forming this blue turqouise stone,
You Shoshone, are not Jewelers borne
Trade off your stones, Shoshone,

I am the White Buffalo Dainah that holds the Sun, I am the grasper of the sand released to the Wind,
the directions of semme, wahatehwe, bahaitee and watsewite


Come Hopi, come Shoshone, come Mayans and Mamos !!


Find this White turqouise stone, Who did not blend with the Iron, that took your green home,
We made it green, this turqouise blend,


The strangers made a promise, and claimed to be your friend
Taking land, breaking contracts and deeds,
Banishing you to exile, you were no longer free !
Who took the power, These men of iron won,


Who will cry out to creator, to the Dabai of Sun.


The Dainah comes for Wa'ipi, she is his Muh
This prophecy of this Oneness, to restore the land that was took.

Come Father Sun, and Mother Moon,

Restore the Lands of these ancestors, from when the Iron came
Blue Turqouise and Green, where in the Dry Creek
do you long for the White turqouise of your seed?
Do you long for Copper and Iron free?


Unite this WE, ALL TURQOUISE shall sing !


I bear this staff of the Buffalo Skull,
I hold the Dabai in my hand,
To the winds of the four directions, I release these sands.
Flow your tears of BAA,
Do the Sacred dance of Sun,


Unite O Shundahai, till we are all the ONE !!
 Quoting: ELNATHAN APOLLYON


Wow, that one was good, and I don't even like poetry, you got talent.
Spread the word, change the collective conscious......
THERE IS MORE THAN ENOUGH OF EVERYTHING TO GO AROUND

When you are undisciplined, the universe is extremely forgiving and when you are disciplined, the universe is extremely generous. Me

One doesn't discover new lands without consenting to lose sight, for a very long time, of the shore. Andre Gide
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BTW Dr Acula, Im still in the contest. I was the early poster on first pages.
My subscription runs out in March so Id be happy to take a upgrade then if I win.
 Quoting: ELNATHAN APOLLYON


cheers

Unless noted they did not want in it... All eligible posters are in the running.

:)
 Quoting: Dr. Acula


Thanks !hf
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There was a Scott from Dundee,
Who was bouncing a whore on his knee;
While she discussed price, he popped once or twice,
Then exclaimed Hootman; there will be no FEE !

There was a lady from York,
In whom the king was popping his cork:
Said the queen who was plastered, I'll not raise your bastard,
AND, go back to pounding your pork !
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Obama is A.K.A. Barry,
he wants equal rights for each fairy
he'll take all our guns
and butt fuck our sons
this shit is gettin' real scary!
"Oh, uh, there won't be any money, but when you die, on your deathbed, you will receive total consciousness." So I got that goin' for me, which is nice.
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Thanks Dr Aucula for the opportunity to poetisize...

The Arrest
You took me from my home
to prove your power.
In front of my children and neighbors
you led me away,
but as I sit in handcuffs I see the fear
in your weak eyes.

Everywhere I see your weakness.
The more you arm yourselves,
the more fragile your world becomes.

I see it in the eyes of the zombies that run
the scanners in your airports and your courthouses.

I hear it in the voices of the newscasters on television and radio.

You have no answers, only vain desperation.
Your shills rail ineffectively
across the internest.

The harder you grasp,
the less you hold.

You will never live in peace. You will never walk alone.

All I wanted was to be left alone,
to live peaceably,
but you were afraid that you couldn’t trust me
to allow you to continue to run your corrupt games,
your lies, your false flags, your investment bubbles, your ritual abuse, your nameless countless crimes.

But it wasn’t good enough that I ignored your corrupt stench,
and carved out my own small redoubt.

If you continue your offenses,
and put me in this world
I will rule it.

Then I will free the slaves that live here
in this pitiful, lightless realm,
and send them to your door,
hungry and insane with vengeance and desire.

Your move.

130202 Beltane
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Wow, this was good too, Doc, you're gonna have a hard time.
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LOVE WITHIN WATER

Love Within Water,
Form with Structure and Order.
The Illusion of a Dance into Beauty.

You Asked me How I Remembered You.
When the Rain fell, I told you I Loved You
I Told You I Will Wait Until the Waters Gathered
Do you Understand, Siphon the Sea?
Within it Life and Memories.
From Where my Body First Came.
And the Land Mass Soaks up the Downpour.
It Nourishes the Ground of the Dead
The Same Hexagon of the Sea,
The Same Body that Once Was Me.

Your Last Words Left an Imprint,
of Form , Structure and Order
It United my Mission to be Within and All
My Soul Within the Water.
I Told you, My Love Within a Drop
Not a Galaxy of Whirling Mist Carried Love
But the Waters of Earth Did.
Within You and I Forever, ONE.
Till that Forever Kingdom Comes.
Your Tears were My Ecstasy , the Hidden Part of Me
Within a Drop, Speak your Promises
The Water within your Toes I Would Never Forget
And the Rain Never Stopped Coming Down,
All We Knew Fell Apart into the Sea.

The Men of Earth Water their Crops
Within it was My Soul
The Thirsty Drink when they are Parched
But Lacking Love, I Forbid them Sight to Know
Within You I Am Made Whole Once Again
And Now You Understand My Promises
That We Were Meant to Be
The Heaven Veils let Down the Rain
The Children Remember Our Pain
The Veins of Fire is my Anger
I Had to Release Long Ago
Our Blood Within the Oceans
United with Your Name and Mine
The Land is Dry, I Can See Your Feet Once Again
And Now it is the Begining of Our Time
The Spirit in the Skies
Is Your Love Within Water
Such as Your Body on Earth
Is My Memory Made Real

I Will Never Leave You While Eternity Exists
Overlapping Endlessly Beyond Sight,
Creating But One Possibility,
Yet Harnising Many Within the Form of Thought
Love is the Action of One Desire
Continuing Eternity Within Its Spirals
If You Ever Perceived it Stopped
I Continued it Onward in Purpose of the Word,
The Name Always Spoken, But Never Understood
I Never Left Accept in the Form of Spirit
Taken Back to the Heavens
To Fall Down to Earth Again
In Form of My Blood Within the Sea
In The Form of My Promise in the Rain
 Quoting: ELNATHAN APOLLYON


OMG, fantastic
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I wrote this when I was young....

"Need some help dad?"

All he cared about was his 12 ounce can,
and you call yourself a man.
You said I was your best friend.
Yet you let me down to the end,
time and time again.

I gave you my love and loyalty.
Only to open my eyes and see,
that daddy had no love for me.
I held on to your hand,
even when you dragged me through the sand.
I always had your back,
until I felt my heart crack.
I was there when no one else was around,
yet you repeatedly stomped my heart into the ground.
I picked you up when you fell down,
as you stood and watched me drown.
I gave you heat when you were cold,
but you always gave up and said, "I fold."
I helped you like no other,
treated you like my brother.

Gave you chance after chance,
but you left me dry like unwatered plants.
Leaving my soul tattered and bruised.
My mind lost and confused,
to find again I was used.
I gave my life away,
every fucken day.

Why?

So you could drop me into hell,
leave me there to dwell.
Yeah, you may be in jail,
stuck there without bail.
But it's me that's screwed,
left here bitter, numb and crude.
Because you couldn't be a man,
to your old number 1 fan.

That's me,
guess I'll see you when you're free,
DADDY!!!
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Words of Mass Detritus

I understand we earthlings
seek order amongst things.
An analogy with ants ~
their mother wears the pants,
yet nothing parasitic
clips her subjects’ ticket.

Her warriors die in battle,
not like docile cattle.
Falling for a social nest ~
not some pointless quest,
like double-you-em-dees
not hidden overseas.

A faceless nation employs
children... it then deploys
with guns in hands to arid lands,
where blood stains sun-baked sands
shaded by whose banner, oh queen?
who lives a life so serene.

With soldiers to secure your soil,
leeching off the workers toil.
trusting to an aged tradition
of using fear to condition.
The cattles contributions clipped,
all clip evaders whipped!

‘But everyone’s the same’
we hear, ‘it’s a numbers game.’
We’re not fucking ants
or homicidal sycophants!
Okay, let’s play by the rules,
but not those writ by fools.
 Quoting: fellowearthling


Excellent, GLP, I'm dumbfounded, and I'm only on page one, WOW!
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Come Hopi, come Shoshone, come Mayans and Mamos !!


Upon this sacred vein, the white men came,
Upon this wild land, along came his band,
Andebichi Woho Nee Bide Pe,
Who is they, Who am I
A Nabidengehdaigwahni.!


Who am I warrior to?


When Upon these veins of Blue
Upon these veins where copper Bliss,
When they mixed these people, and they kissed,
Forming this blue turqouise stone,
You Shoshone, are not Jewelers borne
Trade off your stones, Shoshone,

I am the White Buffalo Dainah that holds the Sun, I am the grasper of the sand released to the Wind,
the directions of semme, wahatehwe, bahaitee and watsewite


Come Hopi, come Shoshone, come Mayans and Mamos !!


Find this White turqouise stone, Who did not blend with the Iron, that took your green home,
We made it green, this turqouise blend,


The strangers made a promise, and claimed to be your friend
Taking land, breaking contracts and deeds,
Banishing you to exile, you were no longer free !
Who took the power, These men of iron won,


Who will cry out to creator, to the Dabai of Sun.


The Dainah comes for Wa'ipi, she is his Muh
This prophecy of this Oneness, to restore the land that was took.

Come Father Sun, and Mother Moon,

Restore the Lands of these ancestors, from when the Iron came
Blue Turqouise and Green, where in the Dry Creek
do you long for the White turqouise of your seed?
Do you long for Copper and Iron free?


Unite this WE, ALL TURQOUISE shall sing !


I bear this staff of the Buffalo Skull,
I hold the Dabai in my hand,
To the winds of the four directions, I release these sands.
Flow your tears of BAA,
Do the Sacred dance of Sun,


Unite O Shundahai, till we are all the ONE !!
 Quoting: ELNATHAN APOLLYON


Wow, that one was good, and I don't even like poetry, you got talent.
 Quoting: Isis One


Thank you Isis ! It was my gift to the native Americans, from my heart.blwkss

I was inspired after my visit to the White Buffalo in Janesville Wisconsin.
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Dr. Acula damn you for this thread. With any other type you can skim over and assess the facts before commenting, but not this one. A poetry thread requires someone to read and interpret every post for it to be important. At this rate it'll be a day or so before I can respond.

Good thread though I still need to go back and reread some of the posts.

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So Dr. Acula starts a thread
With the assumption it's fastly read
But what he doesn't know
Is the truth does show
When the mind is efficiently fed.

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something i regretfully wrote for radio after a green room competition.. the board went red with christians saying it was naughty......



c>g> g rif.....

grab a cat rip out it's heart,
rape a virgin for a start,
jump upon that hellish cart....

and take a ride with satan....

clap you hands for 666,
stamp your feet for bealzibub,
bang your head for zameale mate,
and here's to my friend for satan.....

become born again for that's the way,
to make yours and satan's day,
pretend you happy good and gay,
and steal some souls for satan.

clap you hands for 666,
stamp your feet for bealzibub,
bang your head for zameale mate,
so here's to my friend for satan.....

who's the one that's got you on the run?,
sell your soul for lots of fun,
come and join us every one,
and STEAL some souls for satan....

sooooooooo.............

clap you hands for 666,
stamp your feet for bealzibub,
bang your head for zameale mate,
so here's to my friend for satan.....

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Where is my liberal democracy
amid these strange manipulations
losing elegance
in this establishment of injustice.
Where's the poetry
wrenched from the heart of our nation?

Do we hear choked and strangled cries of protest
or shouts of unbridled jubilation
as the carriages wheels roll over
the corpse of our freedom?

The media feeds and promotes the agenda
of hfcs and phramaceutical panaceaes,
bringing us more bottled and packaged consumption
and grows in ever increasing abundance,
while our resources drain away into refuse.
In another place another country another land
there are those who have no strength left
to cry out in hunger and desolation.
Something is better than nothing, pay attention, it's still free. Lead by example.
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Love is the lotus.
Velvet petals unfurling,
Redolent, in star-formation.
Christened with dewdrops of generosity,
Emergent, I offer up my soul.

We float adrift in this sea of fragility,
Undulate, storm-struck,
All for a chance
To linger again in the odour of its perfumes.

But, nothing to drown an ideal so pure,
Nothing to stop a heart so wanting--
We brave the tempest, sunburn at sea
To clutch its triumphs, victories upon the leaves
Bloom gilt in the graces of tomorrow,
A thousand lotuses.
Our inheritance.
 Quoting: Junkyard Lily


Lily, that was beautiful, wow, I can't believe how good these poems are, all the ones above yours too, just awesome.
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Quiet Down! by simultaneous_final

The laughter of children
At once a fright
A shrilly shriek
On a peaceful night

Is too a relief
When daddy so tries
To stymie the flow
Of their teary eyes

When chortles and chuckles
Disturb a man's rest
It only reminds him
It's only a test

Will a man so rugged
And focused and wise
Laugh along with his children
Or rather hear cries?

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A subject observes itself observing itself observing itself observing itself observing itself observing itself observing itself observing itself ad infinitum.
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I wrote this when I was young....

"Need some help dad?"

All he cared about was his 12 ounce can,
and you call yourself a man.
You said I was your best friend.
Yet you let me down to the end,
time and time again.

I gave you my love and loyalty.
Only to open my eyes and see,
that daddy had no love for me.
I held on to your hand,
even when you dragged me through the sand.
I always had your back,
until I felt my heart crack.
I was there when no one else was around,
yet you repeatedly stomped my heart into the ground.
I picked you up when you fell down,
as you stood and watched me drown.
I gave you heat when you were cold,
but you always gave up and said, "I fold."
I helped you like no other,
treated you like my brother.

Gave you chance after chance,
but you left me dry like unwatered plants.
Leaving my soul tattered and bruised.
My mind lost and confused,
to find again I was used.
I gave my life away,
every fucken day.

Why?

So you could drop me into hell,
leave me there to dwell.
Yeah, you may be in jail,
stuck there without bail.
But it's me that's screwed,
left here bitter, numb and crude.
Because you couldn't be a man,
to your old number 1 fan.

That's me,
guess I'll see you when you're free,
DADDY!!!
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THERE IS MORE THAN ENOUGH OF EVERYTHING TO GO AROUND

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Thread: Give Me Something to Break!
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im watching the magnetic poles shift
im watching the new madrid fault line quake
im stepping on dead birds
im smelling dead fish

give me something to break

im hearing H.A.A.R.P. sing
im feeling the dollar sinking
im watching lunar eclipse 12, 21, twenty-ten
im watching H1N1 back again.

give me something to break

im finding crystal skulls
im looking up for planet X
im sizing up FEMA caskets
im eating a flouride breakfast

give me something to break

im reading bible passages
im finding ancient aliens
im meeting with the bilderburgs
im hiding from the free masons

give me something to break

im watching missles streak the sky
im hearing the Magic Bullet whizzing by
im finding D.U.M.B.S underground
im watching building 7 falling down

give me something to break

im watching Zeitgeist on the internet
im doubting blavatsky and j maxwell's thinking
im finding the Strawman breathing
im hearing mcveigh and bill cooper gets dead

give me something to break

i'm looking for Jesus Christ
im hoping not to find Marshal Applewhite
im reading and searching for the truth
im spinning and ending up more confused

give me something to break


- a.s.
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there ya go i added it to this thread...
but you need an account to be eligible to win the prize
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 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 24672198



im watching the magnetic poles shift
im watching the new madrid fault line quake
im stepping on dead birds
im smelling dead fish

give me something to break

im hearing H.A.A.R.P. sing
im feeling the dollar sinking
im watching lunar eclipse 12, 21, twenty-ten
im watching H1N1 back again.

give me something to break

im finding crystal skulls
im looking up for planet X
im sizing up FEMA caskets
im eating a flouride breakfast

give me something to break

im reading bible passages
im finding ancient aliens
im meeting with the bilderburgs
im hiding from the free masons

give me something to break

im watching missles streak the sky
im hearing the Magic Bullet whizzing by
im finding D.U.M.B.S underground
im watching building 7 falling down

give me something to break

im watching Zeitgeist on the internet
im doubting blavatsky and j maxwell's thinking
im finding the Strawman breathing
im hearing mcveigh and bill cooper gets dead

give me something to break

i'm looking for Jesus Christ
im hoping not to find Marshal Applewhite
im reading and searching for the truth
im spinning and ending up more confused

give me something to break


- a.s.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 24672198


there ya go i added it to this thread...
but you need an account to be eligible to win the prize
 Quoting: Dr. Acula


nice :)
It's life as we know it, but only just.
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There was a young lady named Lil
who thought dynamite might give her a thrill;
they found her vagina in North Carolina
and parts of her tits in Brazil

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oops2
You accept the love you think you deserve~~~

Love cannot live where there is no trust~~~

Truth has no temperature~~~

Love like it's never gonna hurt~~~

Have no regrets~~~
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NAM

On this Memorial day , I pick up this card.
Domain of the Golden Dragon, 180th Meridian Afar.
Latitude of 25 degrees North, under the stars.
. Longitude 180, you were out to sea.
Protecting our nation, patrolling the seas.

Duly initiated , call of duty you served.
Laos, Cambodia, Vietnam conflict occurred.
Boarding the Chinooks over the jungles of Nam.
The Huey in production with modified guns,
The napalm bombs, hotter than the sun,

The Seawolf team and the river patrol,
Mekong Delta beneath Aircraft wings guarding below.

Riverboat mounted flamethrowers emit,
Amidst the smoke they feared,. They submit
the white phosphorus added a burn,
that compounded their fears, that added their tears,

Learn Peace my son, observe and learn.
The fight for freedom , and how its earned
Praying to God beneath the explosive skies.
On the sea and land, where many died.
Our colors were the blue and gold
Anchors aweigh, our story told.
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SUNSETS

Susets are a time for two,
The Masters work to share;
With pinks and blues, and purple hues,
His love He does declare.

Alas that I, but mortal be,
Love flows like blood, devoid of clot;
Adrift in time, my only crime,
In love with one, who loves me NOT !

Now shadows lengthen in my heart,
As your sunshine fades away;
Deprived of light, from blue eyes bright,
Warm were your kisses, yesterday !

As Earth from sun will turn away,
Yet golden beams flood each new day;
So waits my love, like His above,
My heart is true, my feet are CLAY !

Eagle
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Beautiful
Spread the word, change the collective conscious......
THERE IS MORE THAN ENOUGH OF EVERYTHING TO GO AROUND

When you are undisciplined, the universe is extremely forgiving and when you are disciplined, the universe is extremely generous. Me

One doesn't discover new lands without consenting to lose sight, for a very long time, of the shore. Andre Gide
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The laughter of children
At once a fright
A shrilly shriek
On a peaceful night

Is too a relief
When daddy so tries
To stymie the flow
Of their teary eyes

When chortles and chuckles
Disturb a man's rest
It only reminds him
It's only a test

Will a man so rugged
And focused and wise
Laugh along with his children
Or rather hear cries?
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awwwww
Spread the word, change the collective conscious......
THERE IS MORE THAN ENOUGH OF EVERYTHING TO GO AROUND

When you are undisciplined, the universe is extremely forgiving and when you are disciplined, the universe is extremely generous. Me

One doesn't discover new lands without consenting to lose sight, for a very long time, of the shore. Andre Gide
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On wisdom lay there is a desert vast
Of time a circle travelled
Lost to sand in darkness sought
Shines a universe unravelled
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very cool
Spread the word, change the collective conscious......
THERE IS MORE THAN ENOUGH OF EVERYTHING TO GO AROUND

When you are undisciplined, the universe is extremely forgiving and when you are disciplined, the universe is extremely generous. Me

One doesn't discover new lands without consenting to lose sight, for a very long time, of the shore. Andre Gide
[link to www.godlikeproductions.com]
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alternative view
degenerates too
mentally ill
troll and shill
come together
join the stew

tard and moran
Bible and Koran
get out of hand
why the hell am I banned?

anonymous poster
topic roaster
a roller coaster
these ads are getting grosser

damn tonight's crowd sure is tough
I've had it with this rhymin' stuff
I love this place, it ain't no bluff
but this GLP jungle is wild and rough
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rockon
You accept the love you think you deserve~~~

Love cannot live where there is no trust~~~

Truth has no temperature~~~

Love like it's never gonna hurt~~~

Have no regrets~~~





GLP