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Message Subject Dr. Acula's Poetry Contest! Contest Ended. Click for Link to Poll Thread, Vote For Your Favorite!
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SANCTUM SANCTORUM


Beyond the veil in the Sanctum Sanctorum,
there is a face that she longs to touch.
In the innermost cube and the olivewood doors
The curtains hang like a bridal veil

There is his eyes which she longs to peer into
the cherubims wings spread wide, sits holy..
In this innermost room he waits...

When the veil is parted they will all see his face
The vanity of vanities is wise in his expression
Our King of Kings, and Lord of Lords,
The Scripture and logos has taken on flesh.

He purified himself as the High Priest
who secretly longed for his High Priestess
In a holy embrace they became one.

The Sanctum Sanctorum in reverential awe
The passions incomparable in the face of love
The Secret of the light is finaly revealed

Compassionate eyes will gaze down upon her..
The Face of God for all of time....
she had longed to caress.






I don't know the words to describe good poetry, but if I did, I would be using all of them to describe your work. I think, to be able to get through to someone like me who knows nothing about poetry and never really got it, is amazing, you are gifted.
-By Apollo
 Quoting: ELNATHAN APOLLYON
 
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