Because I'm a Poet - A Poetry Thread | |
ElectricKoolaid (OP) User ID: 27383605 United States 06/03/2013 10:59 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | that's when you quit Quoting: octobersolstice and ? when you kept on going ? your own way in love toward love for love never minding what they say mostly fools anyway but you you are clearly no fool following your own heart following your own rules learning about love and hate naturally sincerely without wait or fear of failure here and good morning! Hi. :) :) _Part 1 It has been placed in us to be great. We put it there ourselves. Upon arriving to the Destination Our journey begins, And our senses come alive Smelling Creation, Seeing Creation, Touching Creation, Feeling it all in outward motion The waves behind the boats Leaving endless bitter ebbs Cresting up & back into itself Crashing into a new beginning The old being consumed by the new As the snake would eat its own tail. _Part 2 The curvature of the galaxy Tilting towards this Neanderthal, forcing the DNA To fire The smoldering consummation of atomic sex Creating new atoms That rebuild the entire face of history. Last Edited by ElectricKoolaid on 06/03/2013 11:00 AM -- EK |
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Anonymous Coward User ID: 41018560 United States 06/04/2013 09:00 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | it's in the most hidden spaces the emptiness where everything is possible and nothing isn't new it's in the underlying traces the fullness of grace and of you in the mirror on my wall it's in the catchment of breath the uplifting heavy need omnipresent ever wanting it's own seed to flower it's in the lover's eye the corner and the blink the search light beacon always never stopping always there and where are we now my stranger where were we then my friend will fire danger the shore where water calls for more heat more direct need to steam to meet us the looking ones with our eyes closed and our toes just beginning to get wet. hi EK. hope everything about you and your poetry is wonderful these days. thinking of you. |
ElectricKoolaid (OP) User ID: 27383605 United States 06/04/2013 09:24 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | it's in the most hidden spaces Quoting: octobersolstice the emptiness where everything is possible and nothing isn't new it's in the underlying traces the fullness of grace and of you in the mirror on my wall it's in the catchment of breath the uplifting heavy need omnipresent ever wanting it's own seed to flower it's in the lover's eye the corner and the blink the search light beacon always never stopping always there and where are we now my stranger where were we then my friend will fire danger the shore where water calls for more heat more direct need to steam to meet us the looking ones with our eyes closed and our toes just beginning to get wet. hi EK. hope everything about you and your poetry is wonderful these days. thinking of you. DAMN YOU'RE GOOD! Uhhhh...want. -- EK |
ElectricKoolaid (OP) User ID: 27383605 United States 06/06/2013 01:41 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Tonight the incantation began Thunderstorms gathering around the firepit Steely-orange flame Blanketing the air, chariots of gasps Arise, fuming Like mummified corpses tethered to the chant Twisting fully out into darkness. Last Edited by ElectricKoolaid on 06/06/2013 10:48 AM -- EK |
ElectricKoolaid (OP) User ID: 27383605 United States 06/06/2013 12:26 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | The jet-fuel of language Burns hotter each day) Passionate absence of the mind-built daydreams Wanton love peers out from the Heavens The word lithely wraps itself around us Lights inside us building in brightness The smell of her carried from the East Salty remnants of matter on my tongue (Four missing moments Memorized poetics I can feel the iron climb) Yesterday, we came out divided Sandbars separate – disconnected waves I dip into the air, waiting for her to jump And snatch her in my claws. (Five months of the war Battle-hardened The rescue mission begins) -- EK |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 41018560 United States 06/06/2013 12:56 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Tonight the incantation began Quoting: ElectricKoolaid Thunderstorms gathering around the firepit Steely-orange flame Blanketing the air, chariots of gasps Arise, fuming Like mummified corpses tethered to the chant Twisting fully out into darkness. "thunderstorms gathering around the firepit" the image is so striking that i can feel it even smell it i hear it and watch it disappear "out into the darkness" it's like when a piece of art , so fully performed, leaves an audience with their own silent moments before the applause begins. applause!!!!! |
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Anonymous Coward User ID: 41018560 United States 06/09/2013 06:29 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | tempering the red with a course of turquoise and a green frog with magenta heart spots and a pink underbelly go ahead oh tempestuous winds send all of my spices sailing round about the railroad track late at night deep in black seed me so tightly in the brown fertile ground where footprints left me to follow allow me to see where his ocean meets my shore and so much more than that ...so stand back... for the tempering of the red and the rest that already follows... |
ElectricKoolaid (OP) User ID: 27383605 United States 06/12/2013 01:18 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | The Nuances of 3 A.M. Fed from her breasts She tucked his chin downward Exposing him to her, In this beautiful rutting Of exchange. The room grew warmer In a vacuum of peace And swarm of wild air I heard his lips pull gently from her Doe-eyed Gazing up at Mother In this timeless memory That is drawn from her. Could I ever hope to have this for myself? The pallor in her cheeks grow red Life refills the arid fasting Of this woman – Never having seen her Look so lovely as today. -- EK |
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Anonymous Coward User ID: 11401586 United States 06/12/2013 01:29 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I've tried writing a little poetry.... Most of it I've set to music...I guess that would be a song. I'm not sure I like the music I've tried to write to surround my poetry. anyway.... I tried...this feels a little risky .....to stick my neck out here with a group that can be harsh...... here's are examples I recently uploaded to youtube: [link to www.youtube.com] [link to www.youtube.com] [link to www.youtube.com] |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 11401586 United States 06/12/2013 01:30 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I've tried writing a little poetry.... Most of it I've set to music...I guess that would be a song. I'm not sure I like the music I've tried to write to surround my poetry. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 11401586 anyway.... I tried...this feels a little risky .....to stick my neck out here with a group that can be harsh...... here's are examples I recently uploaded to youtube: [link to www.youtube.com] [link to www.youtube.com] [link to www.youtube.com] in anycase....thanks for the tread. |
ElectricKoolaid (OP) User ID: 27383605 United States 06/12/2013 08:30 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I've tried writing a little poetry.... Most of it I've set to music...I guess that would be a song. I'm not sure I like the music I've tried to write to surround my poetry. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 11401586 anyway.... I tried...this feels a little risky .....to stick my neck out here with a group that can be harsh...... here's are examples I recently uploaded to youtube: [link to www.youtube.com] [link to www.youtube.com] [link to www.youtube.com] Very unique! Loved listening. Thank you! -- EK |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 41018560 United States 06/12/2013 08:55 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I've tried writing a little poetry.... Most of it I've set to music...I guess that would be a song. I'm not sure I like the music I've tried to write to surround my poetry. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 11401586 anyway.... I tried...this feels a little risky .....to stick my neck out here with a group that can be harsh...... here's are examples I recently uploaded to youtube: [link to www.youtube.com] [link to www.youtube.com] [link to www.youtube.com] Very unique! Loved listening. Thank you! yes! fun! i also enjoyed listening - both to your poetry and the musical surroundings thank you for sticking out your neck. got any more? |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 41018560 United States 06/12/2013 08:58 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | The Nuances of 3 A.M. Quoting: ElectricKoolaid Fed from her breasts She tucked his chin downward Exposing him to her, In this beautiful rutting Of exchange. The room grew warmer In a vacuum of peace And swarm of wild air I heard his lips pull gently from her Doe-eyed Gazing up at Mother In this timeless memory That is drawn from her. Could I ever hope to have this for myself? The pallor in her cheeks grow red Life refills the arid fasting Of this woman – Never having seen her Look so lovely as today. love. beauty. expression. human. love. |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 11401586 United States 06/12/2013 11:33 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I've tried writing a little poetry.... Most of it I've set to music...I guess that would be a song. I'm not sure I like the music I've tried to write to surround my poetry. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 11401586 anyway.... I tried...this feels a little risky .....to stick my neck out here with a group that can be harsh...... here's are examples I recently uploaded to youtube: [link to www.youtube.com] [link to www.youtube.com] [link to www.youtube.com] Very unique! Loved listening. Thank you! yes! fun! i also enjoyed listening - both to your poetry and the musical surroundings thank you for sticking out your neck. got any more? I do have more on my youtube channel.. I plan on putting more there....eventually. |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 41018560 United States 06/12/2013 02:30 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | sew me a poetry thread and let it quilt the bed of our divine she said to him this time we blanket the thickets this time my heart quickens against the field of one so hold me poetry maker for i've no forsaken land only this flowing garden into your sacred hand sew me a poetry thread and let it embroider our holy sign he said to his love as he wrapped her in his warmth there is no distorting this my honest intent so hold me blushing one until the fears are done and gone i meant all along that i am yours beyond the silken song sew me a poetry thread and let it our lives so entwine they said to somehow define all that ever already was and for reasons that we must trust, reasons all their own she and he find they are meant to be fine design comforting through eternity sew worry not of others they are of no threat to you better yet they support all the love that you report and wish you the happiest wish you the best wish you all that you wish and the rest that is yours, thread weavers. |
ElectricKoolaid (OP) User ID: 27383605 United States 06/12/2013 02:48 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | sew me a poetry thread and let it quilt the bed of our divine Quoting: octobersolstice she said to him this time we blanket the thickets this time my heart quickens against the field of one so hold me poetry maker for i've no forsaken land only this flowing garden into your sacred hand sew me a poetry thread and let it embroider our holy sign he said to his love as he wrapped her in his warmth there is no distorting this my honest intent so hold me blushing one until the fears are done and gone i meant all along that i am yours beyond the silken song sew me a poetry thread and let it our lives so entwine they said to somehow define all that ever already was and for reasons that we must trust, reasons all their own she and he find they are meant to be fine design comforting through eternity sew worry not of others they are of no threat to you better yet they support all the love that you report and wish you the happiest wish you the best wish you all that you wish and the rest that is yours, thread weavers. WOW!!!! YOUR BEST!!! I am blown away...wow. -- EK |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 1561325 United States 06/12/2013 02:57 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Thread an eye Through ye time Yield a try Your yuletide Blissful day Beckon bore Stark, ye say Silver shore Reflecting Nevermore Retracting Evermore Too thin to Size, descry Wise path through Pearls of why Before swine Cut sinew After dine Cast anew A net true To you, made Martyred, blue Sea you've wade |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 41018560 United States 06/13/2013 05:59 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | sew me a poetry thread and let it quilt the bed of our divine Quoting: octobersolstice she said to him this time we blanket the thickets this time my heart quickens against the field of one so hold me poetry maker for i've no forsaken land only this flowing garden into your sacred hand sew me a poetry thread and let it embroider our holy sign he said to his love as he wrapped her in his warmth there is no distorting this my honest intent so hold me blushing one until the fears are done and gone i meant all along that i am yours beyond the silken song sew me a poetry thread and let it our lives so entwine they said to somehow define all that ever already was and for reasons that we must trust, reasons all their own she and he find they are meant to be fine design comforting through eternity sew worry not of others they are of no threat to you better yet they support all the love that you report and wish you the happiest wish you the best wish you all that you wish and the rest that is yours, thread weavers. WOW!!!! YOUR BEST!!! I am blown away...wow. i am so glad that you like it! in truth, i wrote it to you and your love. |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 41018560 United States 06/13/2013 06:27 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Thread an eye Quoting: Inspector Wadjet Through ye time Yield a try Your yuletide Blissful day Beckon bore Stark, ye say Silver shore Reflecting Nevermore Retracting Evermore Too thin to Size, descry Wise path through Pearls of why Before swine Cut sinew After dine Cast anew A net true To you, made Martyred, blue Sea you've wade a friend, true to you, be i distanced, new touch the sky my pearls stay close to skin oyster's way holding in before you i am whole beside you an open soul each breath i take in turn each step toward i learn my heart evermore leaves you nevermore wishful day wanting more hope you'll stay open door thread of i to thread of you tell me why and i'll tell you. |
ElectricKoolaid (OP) User ID: 27383605 United States 06/13/2013 09:10 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | sew me a poetry thread and let it quilt the bed of our divine Quoting: octobersolstice she said to him this time we blanket the thickets this time my heart quickens against the field of one so hold me poetry maker for i've no forsaken land only this flowing garden into your sacred hand sew me a poetry thread and let it embroider our holy sign he said to his love as he wrapped her in his warmth there is no distorting this my honest intent so hold me blushing one until the fears are done and gone i meant all along that i am yours beyond the silken song sew me a poetry thread and let it our lives so entwine they said to somehow define all that ever already was and for reasons that we must trust, reasons all their own she and he find they are meant to be fine design comforting through eternity sew worry not of others they are of no threat to you better yet they support all the love that you report and wish you the happiest wish you the best wish you all that you wish and the rest that is yours, thread weavers. WOW!!!! YOUR BEST!!! I am blown away...wow. i am so glad that you like it! in truth, i wrote it to you and your love. I just shared it with her. Thank you. That's seriously beautiful...seriously seriously. I'm even at a loss for words, which isn't like me. Impressive indeed. This especially, OH MY GOODNESS!! "so hold me blushing one until the fears are done and gone/i meant all along that i am yours beyond the silken song" -- EK |
ElectricKoolaid (OP) User ID: 27383605 United States 06/13/2013 09:11 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | We Don't Grow Up There was a space underneath the bridge as a boy Connecting our towns, above some forgotten river We were caught smoking cigarettes before daylight And asking change of the younger kids We broke out of our frustrated youth Clamoring at the insulations of our deliverance But somehow, in the midst of Everything The thickness of our beards hefted up Dark lines of passage carved across our chests And we breathed fireflies at the nite As if we had swam among invisible sharks Barely having lived to tell the tale. -- EK |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 41018560 United States 06/13/2013 02:27 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | We Don't Grow Up Quoting: ElectricKoolaid There was a space underneath the bridge as a boy Connecting our towns, above some forgotten river We were caught smoking cigarettes before daylight And asking change of the younger kids We broke out of our frustrated youth Clamoring at the insulations of our deliverance But somehow, in the midst of Everything The thickness of our beards hefted up Dark lines of passage carved across our chests And we breathed fireflies at the nite As if we had swam among invisible sharks Barely having lived to tell the tale. this is great. i enjoy your work. i look forward to anything you share. |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 41018560 United States 06/13/2013 02:43 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Thread an eye Quoting: Inspector Wadjet Through ye time Yield a try Your yuletide Blissful day Beckon bore Stark, ye say Silver shore Reflecting Nevermore Retracting Evermore Too thin to Size, descry Wise path through Pearls of why Before swine Cut sinew After dine Cast anew A net true To you, made Martyred, blue Sea you've wade a friend, true to you, be i distanced, new touch the sky my pearls stay close to skin oyster's way holding in before you i am whole beside you an open soul each breath i take in turn each step toward i learn my heart evermore leaves you nevermore wishful day wanting more hope you'll stay open door thread of i to thread of you tell me why and i'll tell you. concrete a truthful friend i am it's all new this communication via the skyways i consider our friendship to be unique and not replicable and of protective value like pearls held close to the heart my intent is to be fully me in relation to you honest and without purposeful manipulation i am learning alot communicating with and getting to know you i have no thought to leave i have no pressing need my wish today is to hear from you i am my own and you are yours too and we can confide, however we do |
ElectricKoolaid (OP) User ID: 27383605 United States 06/14/2013 11:39 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | The charred hand, the burning fist Comparisons are none of this A fitted dash, a painful ash Arid songs on life’s police Innuendo – thoughts on Plato Arugula with ripe tomato Triaminic dissolution Wal-Mart’s sale on this conclusion Pointed pens and puckered pies Each disguise a vetted vein Romantic rain and symphony The uttered love in tragedy Post-war traumas, new-war dreams Hung from collars ‘bove the stream Mankind’s progress Mankind’s regress Where will we end? With our friends. -- EK |
ElectricKoolaid (OP) User ID: 27383605 United States 06/14/2013 12:43 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Wiser tries were made that day Uncomplicated ebb-and-flow (the less you know) To-and-fro The seas they chose, the gilded rose And frosted throes Still it goes a-pitter pat How dare I stare at that and say (with every word just tossed away) “Relax…” A sexy swarm of rapid-fire Cupid’s arrows, my desire Do you tire? (Tantric spells & wishing wells) The second greeting Nothing fleeting, hence our meeting Thirsty Cursed and bursting Ah, the air is full of you Like a diamond fortress draped in ebony. -- EK |
ElectricKoolaid (OP) User ID: 27383605 United States 06/15/2013 12:40 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Feeling fashioned by the loom Knotty thread of desolate Breathing out & in – consume Bedazzled by your aggregate Kniving tribal planted pines Reductions of my politic Open borders closed, defined Spirits do arithmetic Squawking gulls dive in & swim Our lust of calling Freedom falls The German steel, a bullet’s whim George Washington would have the balls Potato fields turn up the sun All eyes & ears & NSA Wasted endings have begun Pretending to have gone away Needl’ng in the guttered gaze Mankind subtle in its ways Tripping hard against the phrase Eternity begins today. -- EK |
Hypertiger User ID: 12277324 Canada 06/15/2013 12:51 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Window Pain Traveling at the speed of light through Glass corridors of information Then thrusting forth invisible waves towards infinity's Culmination Signals the windows have reached their intended Destination The Billions who've been fed for years by the enlightened few Have succumbed to the ethereal coercion Which led to the gates of slaughter in pursuit of the latest version All the others are kept in line by codependent confusion While the unbelievers risk being left out of the synthetic Revolution. Control of the media, banks, payments, entertainment, Wireless data, and the super highway Is the next justification for monetary domination A computer in every house and on every desk Is just one king's new form of taxation We've thrown off our chains of oppression And exchange them for the puppet master's strings of persuasion One mans dream for humanity Or a megalomaniac's salvation? |