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Poetry etc. Thread for Creativity

 
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04/04/2014 10:59 AM
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One for 'Flapjacks' and this morning's 'Flour power' thread :)




'Entitled' was a fascinating read, Otsana. It's not often I find myself lost within a reading and having to finish and then return to seek out clues on how to piece layers and images together. Quite the taste of my own medicine, I would reckon hf


"Find a Clue"

Of life that's left to give
Gift beckoning to sieve
Sits full a glass to own
Oft empty has been known

Has been is what I am
Lost sight to write a sham
Shed hope for what's to come
The solitude I've won

Sheltered behind the walls
Denying none of falls
Owning all of the self
To shield me from the wealth

Of lights flashing here, there
I cease to show a care
For questions never end
Answers they never send

Special or not I've fought
In others' eyes been sought
What ought be seen within
Not in recycle bin

Flushed away, discarded
Facing the day I dread
When all I have to be
Is what they think of me

Fingers enough to count
The ones left to dismount
To be rid of this void
With me too long has toyed

Honing skills worthless task
Nothing more left to ask
It can't go on like this
Giving of self remiss

To reckon a time come
To see inward wholesome
Without a mirror there
For another to care

So little work to do
Why can't I find a clue
How to sit, be at ease
Without my little trees

Shaking leaves down on me
Endless colors to see
And purposes to be
No emptiness to flee

Into words wove not heard
Absurd silence of bird
That knows not it's own call
Nor which flock to bear pall

Holding reflections tossed
A life's thoughts be the cost
To lose myself in sound
So that it might be found
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goddddanmmmn that video stirs up some feelings.

Thank you. I am glad you felt moved by entitled.

I love this poem here "find a clue"

it speaks so much to the desperation we all feel in this generation. the empty restlessness.

please keep sharing, my friend. it is very inspiring for me as well.
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04/06/2014 10:15 PM
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Interestingly enough, 2 days after the day of my Venus return and 2 days before celebrating the day my sister was born.

8/24/13

Again beyond a brink
Wondering how it came to be
Flushing down 'nother sink
For all the world to see

The tables turned and churned
On my own soliloquy
Tread careful not to burn
Through mirrored parts of me

But karma so it seems
A bitch with lesson
To teach of failing dreams,
Hopes, and expectations spun

Through deceitful web bring
Lies inside my mind
Pressing, second-guessing
Is it me or other's haze?

I have been here before
Intent to share, not to save
Time to settle the score
Close my heart and take to grave

There's two who won't brood
Nor distrust my honesty
Celibate hermit mood
For them, my daughters, I see

Needs fostered without friends
To share generosity
For wrongs I've brought, amends
To shake pain and suffering

It finally makes sense
This, my fated endless strife
Love for another whence
An empty soul lives his life





GLP