We build it up and we won't stop...

We build it up
And we won't stop

In mid air
The wave will start

The Truth's begun
Can't hide the sound

To make us fly
and stop the fall

kiss the sky with love
the love we live
Is the hope we give

We build it up
not just here and there

Hold the sacred key
To the blissful sea

music's in your core
It's singing everywhere

all the secrets shown
Through the mist and haze
all through which we gaze

In the essence you
To make it right and true

Into what's alive
Stories to be told

Beyond the chains
It's now an open door

wings to unfold
path we walk
No more empty talk

can here the tone
Beyond the golden stairs

the mountain top
Sun's arising there

All of us who dare
Nothing can stop us
To make it right and true

Pick it up and go
for love we care

For day and night
through dark and light

rain and snow and you




141, please excuse the edit, but this poem had so much to offer. Apologies, but I have never read one of your poems that was so litter with extraneous and's, for's and to's.

I believe, I have incorporated all the lines from the original poem. I have also made several small word changes to reflect nouns properly. Please excuse my intrusion, thank you.

Hey no apologies needed, thank you from the heart my friend - love the version you created...
And you're right there was a lot of and's and to's in the original, perhaps wrote it just a little too fast but had fun with it, your version gives a depth to it :)

Much love to you and yours :)

You have always been nothing but gracious.

Thank you... what you see in others is what you hold :)
Much love to you dear heart