*Music* First song I ever wrote. Please have a listen | |
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Anonymous Coward User ID: 64128171 United States 11/10/2015 09:51 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | OMG GET THAT CAT OUT OF THE BAG IM CALLING PETA ON YOU!!!!! that poor thing is screaming like it was just bathed in acid!!! Quoting: Anonymous Coward 64128171 get a new hobby Lol thanks! actually listened to it, and its not bad, a bit flat at some points but overall not too shabby. practice makes perfect |
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Anonymous Coward (OP) User ID: 69464942 United States 11/10/2015 09:52 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | OMG GET THAT CAT OUT OF THE BAG IM CALLING PETA ON YOU!!!!! that poor thing is screaming like it was just bathed in acid!!! Quoting: Anonymous Coward 64128171 get a new hobby Lol thanks! actually listened to it, and its not bad, a bit flat at some points but overall not too shabby. practice makes perfect Appreciate it thank you |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 64128171 United States 11/10/2015 09:53 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | OMG GET THAT CAT OUT OF THE BAG IM CALLING PETA ON YOU!!!!! that poor thing is screaming like it was just bathed in acid!!! Quoting: Anonymous Coward 64128171 get a new hobby Lol thanks! actually listened to it, and its not bad, a bit flat at some points but overall not too shabby. practice makes perfect Appreciate it thank you Keep at it! |
brokenhalo User ID: 134216 United States 11/10/2015 09:54 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Hey all, I've had this video up for months. I have wrote about 30 songs over the past few years and this is the first one i wrote and recorded. So please be gentle, but all honest criticism welcome. [link to youtu.be] Quoting: Anonymous Coward 69464942 I liked it, you have some talent. :) A few suggestions - Get a mic for the guitar and your voice and record on different tracks. The guitar really drowns out your voice, and it's hard to follow the lyrics of the song. Also, prepare for the hate - this is GLP bro (probably not the best place to ask for positive feedback). Keep at it - like all things in life, practice practice practice! I'm a Cyperpunk - Ask me what it means sometime. ------- “All the speed he took, all the turns he'd taken and the corners he'd cut in Night City, and still he'd see the matrix in his sleep, bright lattices of logic unfolding across that colorless void...” -- William Gibson, Neuromancer |
Anonymous Coward (OP) User ID: 69464942 United States 11/10/2015 10:08 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Hey all, I've had this video up for months. I have wrote about 30 songs over the past few years and this is the first one i wrote and recorded. So please be gentle, but all honest criticism welcome. [link to youtu.be] Quoting: Anonymous Coward 69464942 I liked it, you have some talent. :) A few suggestions - Get a mic for the guitar and your voice and record on different tracks. The guitar really drowns out your voice, and it's hard to follow the lyrics of the song. Also, prepare for the hate - this is GLP bro (probably not the best place to ask for positive feedback). Keep at it - like all things in life, practice practice practice! Hahaha, I actually thought about it a lot. Honestly I didn't know where to post it. And might as well get all the bad out right? I have been on GLP enough to know how everyone is. That's ok though, but thanks so much for the time and the input! |
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