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*Music* First song I ever wrote. Please have a listen

 
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*Music* First song I ever wrote. Please have a listen
Hey all, I've had this video up for months. I have wrote about 30 songs over the past few years and this is the first one i wrote and recorded. So please be gentle, but all honest criticism welcome. [link to youtu.be]
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Re: *Music* First song I ever wrote. Please have a listen
OMG GET THAT CAT OUT OF THE BAG IM CALLING PETA ON YOU!!!!! that poor thing is screaming like it was just bathed in acid!!!

get a new hobby
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Re: *Music* First song I ever wrote. Please have a listen
OMG GET THAT CAT OUT OF THE BAG IM CALLING PETA ON YOU!!!!! that poor thing is screaming like it was just bathed in acid!!!

get a new hobby
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Lol thanks!
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Re: *Music* First song I ever wrote. Please have a listen
OMG GET THAT CAT OUT OF THE BAG IM CALLING PETA ON YOU!!!!! that poor thing is screaming like it was just bathed in acid!!!

get a new hobby
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Lol thanks!
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actually listened to it, and its not bad, a bit flat at some points but overall not too shabby. practice makes perfect
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Re: *Music* First song I ever wrote. Please have a listen
OMG GET THAT CAT OUT OF THE BAG IM CALLING PETA ON YOU!!!!! that poor thing is screaming like it was just bathed in acid!!!

get a new hobby
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At least you were honest
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Re: *Music* First song I ever wrote. Please have a listen
OMG GET THAT CAT OUT OF THE BAG IM CALLING PETA ON YOU!!!!! that poor thing is screaming like it was just bathed in acid!!!

get a new hobby
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 64128171


Lol thanks!
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 69464942


actually listened to it, and its not bad, a bit flat at some points but overall not too shabby. practice makes perfect
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 64128171


Appreciate it thank you
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Re: *Music* First song I ever wrote. Please have a listen
OMG GET THAT CAT OUT OF THE BAG IM CALLING PETA ON YOU!!!!! that poor thing is screaming like it was just bathed in acid!!!

get a new hobby
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 64128171


Lol thanks!
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 69464942


actually listened to it, and its not bad, a bit flat at some points but overall not too shabby. practice makes perfect
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 64128171


Appreciate it thank you
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 69464942



Keep at it! rockon
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Re: *Music* First song I ever wrote. Please have a listen
Hey all, I've had this video up for months. I have wrote about 30 songs over the past few years and this is the first one i wrote and recorded. So please be gentle, but all honest criticism welcome. [link to youtu.be]
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 69464942


I liked it, you have some talent. :)

A few suggestions - Get a mic for the guitar and your voice and record on different tracks. The guitar really drowns out your voice, and it's hard to follow the lyrics of the song.

Also, prepare for the hate - this is GLP bro (probably not the best place to ask for positive feedback).

Keep at it - like all things in life, practice practice practice!
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Re: *Music* First song I ever wrote. Please have a listen
Hey all, I've had this video up for months. I have wrote about 30 songs over the past few years and this is the first one i wrote and recorded. So please be gentle, but all honest criticism welcome. [link to youtu.be]
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 69464942


I liked it, you have some talent. :)

A few suggestions - Get a mic for the guitar and your voice and record on different tracks. The guitar really drowns out your voice, and it's hard to follow the lyrics of the song.

Also, prepare for the hate - this is GLP bro (probably not the best place to ask for positive feedback).

Keep at it - like all things in life, practice practice practice!
 Quoting: brokenhalo

Hahaha, I actually thought about it a lot. Honestly I didn't know where to post it. And might as well get all the bad out right? I have been on GLP enough to know how everyone is. That's ok though, but thanks so much for the time and the input!
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11/10/2015 09:24 PM
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Re: *Music* First song I ever wrote. Please have a listen
Actually sounds really good





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