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Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!

 
natasha25
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Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
Should it matter what you think of me, or did it seem to slip your mind
I do not lay down and roll over, just cause you think you have the power
Things are what they are for all reasons unknown
And i do not give up for i seek the truth untold

Should i care if you see me or even take a glance in my direction
I couldn't be bothered by your fake love or false affection
Don't matter to me who you are or where you came from
I don't think its time just yet for me to open up to you or anyone

I don't hate nor could i ever but i do dislike the way things have been
And to have you at my side is a tease to you on my part
Won't do you or i no good to be fake within love
It really don't matter to me anyways cause the truth was not there to begin with

You can't call for me or help me from this dark cloud i've placed myself on
Screaming for me will do you no good so i ask you to move on
Just forget anything i've said as i will do for you in return
I've got a broken heart and it really does burn

Just clear your thoughts of any kind of future you think we could have
For i am not falling for your wishful hopes or lies
I'll run away from you and close the door to all life i see
I just ask that you stay clear away from me

I'm not who i am or you would want me to be
I have children to care for and they need me more
Could you stay away from any hurt i can cause you
Never look back and don't think of any of it

I'm wrong for you in many ways
And washing it all away would be the best approach
Feel free to move on for you know i will with my head hung down
And don't look back for there's nothing to be found.
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!
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06/26/2007 01:19 PM
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Re: Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
No! Please God don't!
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06/26/2007 01:20 PM
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Re: Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
that is a sad one
and took my breath away
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06/26/2007 01:20 PM
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Re: Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
well that was pretting effing depressing.
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06/26/2007 01:21 PM
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Re: Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
would that be an anti-love poem?
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06/26/2007 01:22 PM
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that is a sad one
and took my breath away
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 256832

thanks, but i love reading poetry, and i'm hoping to see some by this thread.
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natasha25  (OP)

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06/26/2007 01:23 PM
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well that was pretting effing depressing.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 58

I was very happy writing it actualy!
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06/26/2007 01:24 PM
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Re: Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
some of us write poetry
two lines at a time
natasha25  (OP)

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06/26/2007 01:25 PM
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Re: Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
some of us write poetry
two lines at a time
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 256832

which ever way ... it makes no difference..
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06/26/2007 01:26 PM
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Re: Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
then you can go from thread to thread
gathering up the bread crumbs of inspiration
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then you can go from thread to thread
gathering up the bread crumbs of inspiration
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 256832

no my dear i have another!!
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!
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06/26/2007 01:29 PM
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Re: Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
Its all i had and now its gone
What ever did i do to be wrong
He left without even saying good bye
I lay in bed and tears i cry

Still i wonder what did i do
To of lost a man just like you
Perhaps it wasn't something i did
Perhaps its the way life is

Wondering what went wrong
Thinking about the days we had
Never stop thinking about how it is
Can't just brush this feeling away

Will i understand what did i do or didn't do
Should i ever get over this feeling of lost
Will he come back to me and start over
Or is this just it Gone forever

I wish him well with all he'll ever do
I wish him all the best in life
Even tho he's gone and i have no clue
I only want the best for you

Shedding tears of many per night
Never knowing whats wrong or right
Praying there will be someone to care
Someone i will have a life to share

I shall remember all we had
And never forget them days we were sad
You have left and possibly moved on
And my heart has sunk and has fully Gone

Good-bye to you
Good-bye my friend
My life will go on
Its not ready to stop or end

See you later my friend
See you later my love
I too am leaving this feeling
Since its all Gone
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06/26/2007 01:31 PM
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Sleeping with the stars

He slept under a blanket of stars
Taken by a point of light in a dream
he and the stars caught by the night
all bound by a destiny of a dream
one more hole in the blanket of darkness
And another star shall peek through
The fire of another reality shining through
In the dream he wrestled with the darkness
Until he shouted in his sleep
At the same time the hole let through the light
The blanket torn by a restless sleeper and dreamer
And he awakes to the dawn...to paradise
His dream...tied to the stars.
Retarded Alien

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06/26/2007 01:34 PM
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roses are red
violets is blue
poetry is gay
can i get aids from this?
natasha25  (OP)

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06/26/2007 01:35 PM
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roses are red
violets is blue
poetry is gay
can i get aids from this?
 Quoting: Retarded Alien

lmaooooooooo
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06/26/2007 01:35 PM
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Re: Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
I would, but my poems aren't copy writed and I've become paranoid about people stealing my stuff. Especially since whatever clothing style I came up with people tend to steal and it's not longer unique and cool, it's mainstream and crappy and I look like I fit in all of a sudden.

Ok I'll share a not some not so great poems. But I swear if anyone steals any of them I'll hunt you down string you up by your toes and find out where you're most ticklish and you will suffer a feathery wrath!!! And don't think I won't do it!!

O' Sing unto God
Thy heavens open above
But hell's fire laps at thy feet
and tortures mine own soul
Dreams will begin as they fade into chaos.
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Re: Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
Sleeping with the stars

He slept under a blanket of stars
Taken by a point of light in a dream
he and the stars caught by the night
all bound by a destiny of a dream
one more hole in the blanket of darkness
And another star shall peek through
The fire of another reality shining through
In the dream he wrestled with the darkness
Until he shouted in his sleep
At the same time the hole let through the light
The blanket torn by a restless sleeper and dreamer
And he awakes to the dawn...to paradise
His dream...tied to the stars.
 Quoting: * last sign of life 215827

very lovely!!!
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!
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Re: Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
roses are red
violets is blue
poetry is gay
can i get aids from this?
 Quoting: Retarded Alien


If you like music then you like poetry ....same damn thing. Everyone loves music so everyone must be gay.
natasha25  (OP)

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Re: Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
I would, but my poems aren't copy writed and I've become paranoid about people stealing my stuff. Especially since whatever clothing style I came up with people tend to steal and it's not longer unique and cool, it's mainstream and crappy and I look like I fit in all of a sudden.

Ok I'll share a not some not so great poems. But I swear if anyone steals any of them I'll hunt you down string you up by your toes and find out where you're most ticklish and you will suffer a feathery wrath!!! And don't think I won't do it!!

O' Sing unto God
Thy heavens open above
But hell's fire laps at thy feet
and tortures mine own soul
 Quoting: Jett

thats fine, sharing is something some people like to do, but if its a caution for you then its fine!!
thanks anyways!!!
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!
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roses are red
violets is blue
poetry is gay
can i get aids from this?


If you like music then you like poetry ....same damn thing. Everyone loves music so everyone must be gay.
 Quoting: * last sign of life 215827

i agree, music is poetry placed into song....
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06/26/2007 01:38 PM
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Re: Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!
i just wrote one:

O' Sing unto God
Thy heavens open above
But hell's fire laps at thy feet
and tortures mine own soul
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06/26/2007 01:38 PM
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I once wrote a poem in the 70's but I have since forgotten most of it except that it was named "the little toy soldier" and it ended with these words:

When our boys march off no more
When the man in the white house stops winding his soldier toys
Only then can we close our eyes
and pretend that people like you and me
are at last truly free.
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Sanity...my misunderstood friend

In a quiet place...where i traced my dream
Its roots exist with a soft contented sound
where i imagine the peaceful world
where my sore body can heal
Where my broken heart can find what was lost
Where i need not look over my shoulder...
For danger doesnt arrive
A place where i can free the spirit of love inside
So i can share what i cannot here
In a world at war
Where so many look to see another's armor
And seek weaknesses in your defenses
We all have the critical eye
But who has the sense to see where we are ALL at
And where we are ALL headed.
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06/26/2007 01:39 PM
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If New Years Eve is bright and clear,
on the next day comes New Year
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06/26/2007 01:40 PM
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i give away my poetry
and then hear it on the radio about a year later
it's fun!
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06/26/2007 01:43 PM
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Fire and Death

Soon the final day arrives,
You see the nukes overhead and know you're gonna die!

Witness the beautiful mushroom clouds,
They will burn you like Jesus wrapped in shroud.

Oh sweet fire flower of destruction loom,
baptize us with your flame, ever so soon!

The end.
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As long as you don't consider yourself poets
"he who is the author of a war, lets loose the whole contagion of hell, and opens a vein that bleeds a nation to death." - Thomas Paine (the crisis)
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I once wrote a poem in the 70's but I have since forgotten most of it except that it was named "the little toy soldier" and it ended with these words:

When our boys march off no more
When the man in the white house stops winding his soldier toys
Only then can we close our eyes
and pretend that people like you and me
are at last truly free.
 Quoting: Elliot Moose

very nice!!
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!
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06/26/2007 01:44 PM
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How can we love thy neighbor when....

God said to love thy neighbor
But how can we do so
When poverty can put you out of favor
It hurts when they see only the numbers
We've been broken down
Sifted in cheap calculators
told to suck it up and get some
the mark of the beast has always been
We've been stained to our soul
Window dressing has become sacred
the numbers have become holy
And too many will rip it all apart
Just to get admired in a world wired
Wired to an adding machine
Sold to the rules of engagement
Submitted for your approval
The old dirty is the new clean
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Sanity...my misunderstood friend

In a quiet place...where i traced my dream
Its roots exist with a soft contented sound
where i imagine the peaceful world
where my sore body can heal
Where my broken heart can find what was lost
Where i need not look over my shoulder...
For danger doesnt arrive
A place where i can free the spirit of love inside
So i can share what i cannot here
In a world at war
Where so many look to see another's armor
And seek weaknesses in your defenses
We all have the critical eye
But who has the sense to see where we are ALL at
And where we are ALL headed.
 Quoting: * last sign of life 215827

touching words, i liked reading it, thanks and i hope others like it too!!
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!
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If New Years Eve is bright and clear,
on the next day comes New Year
 Quoting: Dil 51202

nice, see two lines can develope anything you want to say!!
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!





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