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Are you a poet?..Place a poem here for all to see!!

 
~ Allie

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06/26/2007 05:24 PM
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The light pours from your eyes and in to mine
A stream of energy, splashing so deeply in the waters of Mother’s Nile
Heavy in the call of an opening blossom under unconditional sun’s light
I love you
Do you hear these words move through gentle eaves?
And brush across the tip of the tide caught steady in moons light?
Love, you do pour through this jet between your windows to my windows
So intensely do I answer this with energy from mine eyes
A circle between you and I
There is a connection when the sunrise does pour its love onto the Earth
Reaching, grasping, touching every inch
Only the shade can keep from this
And only those who hide admits it can keep from morning light’s caress
Only invisible speckles of diffracted warmth, bending around to touch
The light moves infinite, unwavering, uncontainable
We continue to move that high vibrational breath between us
With each out of mine and in of yours, this power does grow
I keep my eyes open like that of children
For without this innocent stare, I can miss that called unseen
I will not contribute to this, my friend
The light pours from your eyes and in to mine
I feel my heart expand with every intake
Grow wide with every outtake
Even as I let mine flow out I continue to feel strong
In not a moment is there a weakness
For I am standing amidst the field
My arms are wide open and I am ready to receive the light
Any anger that comes at me
Any hate that comes at me
My friend, I know this when I look with heart into yours
That diffracting energy of light source
It moves around the anger
It moves around the hate
It moves around and penetrates the shade
With heart, third eye, mind so open I can see this
I relish in it in every moment
See it all
Every single moment of the now
That I stare deeply into your eyes
My friend, my Buddha, my master unbounded
Because when I look deep into those windows
I see only myself
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06/26/2007 05:36 PM
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The light pours from your eyes and in to mine
A stream of energy, splashing so deeply in the waters of Mother’s Nile
Heavy in the call of an opening blossom under unconditional sun’s light
I love you
Do you hear these words move through gentle eaves?
And brush across the tip of the tide caught steady in moons light?
Love, you do pour through this jet between your windows to my windows
So intensely do I answer this with energy from mine eyes
A circle between you and I
There is a connection when the sunrise does pour its love onto the Earth
Reaching, grasping, touching every inch
Only the shade can keep from this
And only those who hide admits it can keep from morning light’s caress
Only invisible speckles of diffracted warmth, bending around to touch
The light moves infinite, unwavering, uncontainable
We continue to move that high vibrational breath between us
With each out of mine and in of yours, this power does grow
I keep my eyes open like that of children
For without this innocent stare, I can miss that called unseen
I will not contribute to this, my friend
The light pours from your eyes and in to mine
I feel my heart expand with every intake
Grow wide with every outtake
Even as I let mine flow out I continue to feel strong
In not a moment is there a weakness
For I am standing amidst the field
My arms are wide open and I am ready to receive the light
Any anger that comes at me
Any hate that comes at me
My friend, I know this when I look with heart into yours
That diffracting energy of light source
It moves around the anger
It moves around the hate
It moves around and penetrates the shade
With heart, third eye, mind so open I can see this
I relish in it in every moment
See it all
Every single moment of the now
That I stare deeply into your eyes
My friend, my Buddha, my master unbounded
Because when I look deep into those windows
I see only myself
 Quoting: ~ Allie

This was very beautiful to read. thanks for sharing it!!
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!
natasha25  (OP)

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06/26/2007 05:38 PM
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WHEN WE DISCONNECTED

Something is sleeping deep in us all, weeping for us when we fear we might fall.
Watching ever so closely so not to miss a beat. Of this heart light vibration resonating deep.
You feel it speaking and you think it's you all along. Close your eyes and start thinking that your not really here at all.
Thinking you can make it better was the first major fall of them all. But now your caught day dreaming and have to focus on the fall.
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Your very poetic, and i enjoy all of them very much, thanks!! I just love reading poetry of all kinds!!
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!
~ Allie

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This was very beautiful to read. thanks for sharing it!!
 Quoting: natasha25

Natasha25 ~

Thank you!! It was a joy to write =)!

O,

~ Allie
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06/26/2007 05:51 PM
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06/26/2007 05:53 PM
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I've not written anything in a while, but here's an oldie...


Why it's great to be a guy,
hangin' tough and looking fly;
Tall tales told about our bravery,
jokes we tell which are unsavoury.

We can't look weak and act all prissy,
lest our homies scoff and call us cissy.
We say our women must be homely but wild,
but above all, understand our inner child.

Enigmas to ourselves and women beside,
on the surface our skin's like a raw cow hide;
Underneath it all we're not that wide,
hiding adeptly our feminine side.

Crying's for women our motto should read,
our place in society promotes that we lead;
I disagree with the above, I hope you'll agree?
But if you don't, you can just come bite me!!


blink
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06/26/2007 05:56 PM
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Dust and ashes of the earth
'Til the moment of rebirth,
When the phoenix shall take flight,
Vanquishing the dark of night.

Phoenix gazes towards the skies,
Singing its melodic cries.
Wings of feathers crimson, gold
Shroud the moon as they unfold.

Now aurora phoenix brings,
Beating incandescent wings,
Soaring to majestic heights,
Radiating Heaven's lights.

Legendary near and far,
This eternal avatar
Navigates the world alone,
In the cosmos on its own.

One exists in time and space;
Thus, to propagate its race,
It must gather wood and spice:
Frankincense and myrrh suffice.

With these, phoenix builds a nest;
'Tis its place of final rest,
Where it sets itself afire,
Immolated on the pyre.

Once the flames have come and gone,
Then appears the phoenix spawn,
Rising from the ashes gray,
Heralding a brand new day.

Sign of immortality
Now and always thou shalt be:
Dust and ashes of the earth
'Til the moment of rebirth.


:phoenixlgo:
~ Allie

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06/26/2007 05:59 PM
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Dust and ashes of the earth
'Til the moment of rebirth,
When the phoenix shall take flight,
Vanquishing the dark of night.

...
 Quoting: Phoenix 2012

Phoenix ~

Beautiful, my friend! Beautiful!!!

O,

~ Allie
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06/26/2007 06:01 PM
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Thankyou Allie :)
I love yours as well!
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06/26/2007 06:06 PM
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BALANCE.......

Is to know and understand,
that both light and dark;

- white and black,
- good and evil,
- beliefs and disbelieves,
- hopes and desperations,
- happiness and sorrow,
- pride and shame,
- trust and treason
- love and hate,
- forgiveness and revenge

is coexisting.

If not,
you had not been you.

Neither now, - nor before.

Your consciousness experience this now.

What choices do you make?
What do you seek?
What do you prefer?

What have you done?
How do you feel?


You should know.

It was, after all, - your own choice…
natasha25  (OP)

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06/26/2007 06:14 PM
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I've not written anything in a while, but here's an oldie...


Why it's great to be a guy,
hangin' tough and looking fly;
Tall tales told about our bravery,
jokes we tell which are unsavoury.

We can't look weak and act all prissy,
lest our homies scoff and call us cissy.
We say our women must be homely but wild,
but above all, understand our inner child.

Enigmas to ourselves and women beside,
on the surface our skin's like a raw cow hide;
Underneath it all we're not that wide,
hiding adeptly our feminine side.

Crying's for women our motto should read,
our place in society promotes that we lead;
I disagree with the above, I hope you'll agree?
But if you don't, you can just come bite me!!


blink
 Quoting: 4by2

WAS A PLEASURE TO READ AND HONESTLY I EVEN HAD A LAUGH FOR THE ENDING!! THANKS
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!
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06/26/2007 06:14 PM
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From Dawn 'til Dusk

Burning in the fields of scattering ash,
I think to myself,
Searching for something,
Who are we, why are we here,
And why do we live in fear?

Breathing in the smell of pure ecstasy,
I still find myself,
Begging for mercy,
Swirling in the echoes of silver laces,
I can't remember memory.

Waking from the shallows of unconsciousness,
Is this a dream,
Is it reality,
Searching for the answers from heaven's questions,
What becomes of me?

Living in a dream of sweet ecstasy,
Shattered by the world,
God please have mercy,
Living on the edge of insanity,
Please just leave me be.
natasha25  (OP)

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06/26/2007 06:17 PM
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Dust and ashes of the earth
'Til the moment of rebirth,
When the phoenix shall take flight,
Vanquishing the dark of night.

Phoenix gazes towards the skies,
Singing its melodic cries.
Wings of feathers crimson, gold
Shroud the moon as they unfold.

Now aurora phoenix brings,
Beating incandescent wings,
Soaring to majestic heights,
Radiating Heaven's lights.

Legendary near and far,
This eternal avatar
Navigates the world alone,
In the cosmos on its own.

One exists in time and space;
Thus, to propagate its race,
It must gather wood and spice:
Frankincense and myrrh suffice.

With these, phoenix builds a nest;
'Tis its place of final rest,
Where it sets itself afire,
Immolated on the pyre.

Once the flames have come and gone,
Then appears the phoenix spawn,
Rising from the ashes gray,
Heralding a brand new day.

Sign of immortality
Now and always thou shalt be:
Dust and ashes of the earth
'Til the moment of rebirth.


:phoenixlgo:
 Quoting: Phoenix 2012

Was nice to read, and i did enjoy it, i hope you get good responses for it also... very nice writing.
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!
natasha25  (OP)

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06/26/2007 06:27 PM
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From Dawn 'til Dusk

Burning in the fields of scattering ash,
I think to myself,
Searching for something,
Who are we, why are we here,
And why do we live in fear?

Breathing in the smell of pure ecstasy,
I still find myself,
Begging for mercy,
Swirling in the echoes of silver laces,
I can't remember memory.

Waking from the shallows of unconsciousness,
Is this a dream,
Is it reality,
Searching for the answers from heaven's questions,
What becomes of me?

Living in a dream of sweet ecstasy,
Shattered by the world,
God please have mercy,
Living on the edge of insanity,
Please just leave me be.
 Quoting: stygian apothegm 230032

Almost sounded like a song, very well written, thanks for sharing!!!!
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!
natasha25  (OP)

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06/26/2007 06:30 PM
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I've not written anything in a while, but here's an oldie...


Why it's great to be a guy,
hangin' tough and looking fly;
Tall tales told about our bravery,
jokes we tell which are unsavoury.

We can't look weak and act all prissy,
lest our homies scoff and call us cissy.
We say our women must be homely but wild,
but above all, understand our inner child.

Enigmas to ourselves and women beside,
on the surface our skin's like a raw cow hide;
Underneath it all we're not that wide,
hiding adeptly our feminine side.

Crying's for women our motto should read,
our place in society promotes that we lead;
I disagree with the above, I hope you'll agree?
But if you don't, you can just come bite me!!


blink
 Quoting: 4by2

You've got style 4by2, and i enjoyed reading it, made me chuckle some too!! thanks for sharing!!
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06/26/2007 06:33 PM
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Still pond
Frog jumps in
Kerplunk
natasha25  (OP)

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06/26/2007 06:44 PM
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Still pond
Frog jumps in
Kerplunk
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 226069

very cute, even that has meaning you know!!!
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!
natasha25  (OP)

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06/26/2007 06:58 PM
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CAN I HELP THAT......

Can i help that i was given a heart
that shines like the sun to others
that aches when hurt as it should
and cares for all who enters it

Can i help that i was taught to share
for its how one should be or try to be
and is what makes others smile through out their day
showing that i can lend a hand in them of need

Can i help that i was blessed by knowing affection
to love all those around me
no matter who they are or what life has been for them
to open my mind up to them and hear them speak

Can i help that this is dedicated to all my loved ones
whom i cherish the most, all my friends
who i have grown attached to over time
and whom i look forward to seeing at the pearly gates of heaven

Can you help but see this poem for what it is
and not judge for what it could be or could stand for
for i know that in my heart deep down
this place GLP is my true family
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Thanks to all my friends here at glp for making me smile and for showing me you truly care. Each day that passes by i'm grateful of knowing each and everyone one of you.
A woman's heart may hold you close, but her smell of sex can hold you even closer!!





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