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LADIES: A POEM FOR MY WIFE...What do you think? Guys, you probably should not read this!

 
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LADIES: A POEM FOR MY WIFE...What do you think? Guys, you probably should not read this!
His steps moved slowly, something other than strength seemed to carry him along. This love he felt for her was so strong. He thought in his heart, if this is not love, then let me never, feel its grasp, for the pain I feel from this alone is more than I can bear.

Soon her cottage was in sight. He paced himself, his heart starting to race. Still he could not see her, was she journeying? Did she not know of his soon arrival? Fear crept where love was most felt, surely she was safe.

Approaching her dwelling he heard the fire crackling within, the sound took him back to an earlier time. His joy knew no bounds as he thought of her, his memory of them together, nestled near the fire, its warmth filling their bodies.

She told him a story, a tale of her travels, it was before they met. She was still to young to be away from her fathers house, but found herself roaming the great woods near their abode. She new she was not alone that day, tiny creatures moved close by her feet. They to knew that she was unusual, it was as if she was more than a woman. They had no fear of her yet traveled along even as she quickened her pace.

He knew of these stories about her, they had come far and wide. He knew also that it was rumored that the moon even refused to shine, and the sun would not compete in the display of its rays when she was near. But it was not this alone that caused his pain, for this love he felt for her was something that he had not sought, it was as if...It fell from heaven above, bursting into his heart...

Oh God, please keep her in the path of life, he felt sure he could not live without her. Would his hand stay steady at her harm, could he go on without her? These were thoughts he did not want to entertain.

Often when he traveled, he felt her near, and when they traveled together, it didn't escape his notice that she had an odd effect, even upon nature, when she walked, the snow itself melted underneath her feet, as if to help her upon her way... continued
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Re: LADIES: A POEM FOR MY WIFE...What do you think? Guys, you probably should not read this!
no advice yet?
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His steps moved slowly, something other than strength seemed to carry him along. This love he felt for her was so strong. He thought in his heart, if this is not love, then let me never, feel its grasp, for this pain I feel from this alone is more than I can bear.

Soon her cottage was in sight. He paced himself, his heart starting to race. Still he could not see her, was she journeying, did she not know of his soon arrival? Fear crept where love was most felt, surely she was safe.

Approaching her dwelling he heard the fire crackling within, the sound took him back to an earlier time. His joy knew no bounds as he thought of her, his memory of them together, nestled near the fire, its warmth filling their bodies.

She told him a story, a tale of her travels, it was before they met. She was still to young to be away from her fathers house, but found herself roaming the great woods near their abode. She new she was not alone that day, tiny creatures moved close by her feet. They knew too that she was unusual, it was as if she was more than a woman. They had no fear of her yet traveled along even as she quickened her pace.

He knew of these stories about her, they had come far and wide. He knew also that it was rumored that the moon even refused to shine, and the sun would not compete in the display of its rays when she was near. But it was not this alone that caused his pain, for this love he felt for her was something that he had not sought, it was as if...It fell from heaven above, bursting into his heart...

Oh God, please keep her in the path of life, he felt sure he could not live without her. Would his hand stay steady at her harm, could he go on without her? These were thoughts he did not want to entertain.

Often when he traveled, he felt her near, and when they traveled together, it didn't escape his notice that she had an odd effect upon nature, even as she walked, the snow itself melted underneath her feet, as if to help her upon her way... continued
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I loved it, its sweet!
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Re: LADIES: A POEM FOR MY WIFE...What do you think? Guys, you probably should not read this!
Will you dump her for me?

I sick of living with/dating a complete total asshole who sits around on his ass all day playing video games while I'm working two jobs to pay for food and our teeny tiny studio apartment. And on top of that he has the audacity to disrespect me, give me attitude and mooch off of me even more.

Please save me!
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Oh yeah, and I like your poem, your lucky girlfriend will really like it.
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*sigh*

now make sure she is well armed under her midnight blue robe, trimmed in silver fox fur, that whispers as it trails behind her like a mermaid's tail in the snow.
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Oh yeah, and I like your poem, your lucky girlfriend will really like it.
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Thanks...for the kind reply...
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Will you dump her for me?

I sick of living with/dating a complete total asshole who sits around on his ass all day playing video games while I'm working two jobs to pay for food and our teeny tiny studio apartment. And on top of that he has the audacity to disrespect me, give me attitude and mooch off of me even more.

Please save me!
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 558892




Man that is sad...I'm so sorry for your struggle..

I'm to old to date...Can't dump her...She has been so faithful to me...But I hoped you liked my poem..any advice?
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Will you dump her for me?

I sick of living with/dating a complete total asshole who sits around on his ass all day playing video games while I'm working two jobs to pay for food and our teeny tiny studio apartment. And on top of that he has the audacity to disrespect me, give me attitude and mooch off of me even more.

Please save me!
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 558892


You don't need a man to save you.

It sounds as though you can support yourself. Gather up some guts and leave him.

Get on your own and spend time rebuilding your self worth before getting into another relationship.
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Will you dump her for me?

I sick of living with/dating a complete total asshole who sits around on his ass all day playing video games while I'm working two jobs to pay for food and our teeny tiny studio apartment. And on top of that he has the audacity to disrespect me, give me attitude and mooch off of me even more.

Please save me!


You don't need a man to save you.

It sounds as though you can support yourself. Gather up some guts and leave him.

Get on your own and spend time rebuilding your self worth before getting into another relationship.
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I HOPE you don't think men are evil?

You know like the "NOW" GALS? The national organization of women?

That old stuff didn't help men and woman relate to each other AT ALL...

YOU SEE: I love woman, I don't want them to be like men...I love the things about them...LIKE femininity, gentleness, that love that only a woman can show...Nor can they be like men...They are different and I want them different than me...

EX: Can you be a woman and be stronger than some men? YES...Can you be a woman and be stronger than most men, or compete against the worlds strong man competition? NO...

Why can't women be happy, being women...I love them in all ways, physically, emotionally, their qualities are stunning...BUT men do not like, women who are angry, or who are trying to take their place...YOU see what I mean...
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Why didn't I listen!!!





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Re: LADIES: A POEM FOR MY WIFE...What do you think? Guys, you probably should not read this!
rodm...

it's just lovely. From my heart, you have a way to speak that she will love, but she would love anything that will come from you, I think.


Be blessed, because I feel blessed in reading that...


In Gratitude,


PT
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rodm...

it's just lovely. From my heart, you have a way to speak that she will love, but she would love anything that will come from you, I think.


Be blessed, because I feel blessed in reading that...


In Gratitude,


PT
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Thank You...Kind words...and Passing through to where? LOL... I know....BECUZHELIVES....Bless you
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Re: LADIES: A POEM FOR MY WIFE...What do you think? Guys, you probably should not read this!
Will you dump her for me?

I sick of living with/dating a complete total asshole who sits around on his ass all day playing video games while I'm working two jobs to pay for food and our teeny tiny studio apartment. And on top of that he has the audacity to disrespect me, give me attitude and mooch off of me even more.

Please save me!
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 558892

gee lady...are ya stupid or something?





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