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Poem - Societies Creation

 
drevenkaine
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02/19/2010 11:44 PM
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Poem - Societies Creation
I don't believe in coincidences. You and I and
every other connection our like minds make will
lead to an ultimate outcome which will not benefit
those whom of which feel that they are owed benefit.
They're always wanting to reap what they themselves
have not sown. This imbalance of power will soon be
correcting itself. There will be darkness in the future,
but do not ever doubt in the dark what you know in the light.

I offer to you a poem I wrote in 1998 and it has been
edited over the years hence. It began as two different
poems, but I read between the lines and devised a remedy.
One was dark and full of hate, the other little nothing but
varying shades of gray. Combined and purged they soon
began to bear light.

Societies Creation

Our Lives are full of Death and Hate
This world makes me suffocate.
Hate sinks in, and love does pass.
Darkness gathers in its mass
Soon, you begin to wish it were all over.

Society blackens our soul
Constantly we're being mind controlled
There are still plenty of followers left to mold
Still a surplus of souls left to be sold.

Society fucks, and it destroys
Much judgment and pain does it deploy
To Government we are all just toys
Totally expendable, completely disposable
Just faceless numbers, to them, are we.
They burn, they break, they rape, and they take
But, soon its destruction will be at hand.

Curse man made religions, and their bullshit gods.
They are Society's way to control and inslave the sheep
All that they are, and do is a mockery.
And like a plague, its poison infects more everyday.

Soon this will all end; a great ascension draws near.
Soon all their lies and travesty's will emerge.
Society's eyes unveiled, Ignorance shall be no more.
Satisfied, Unified, no longer Terrorized

Learn to love, without hate,
we all are children of an infinite creator.
Don't allow them to mold and control you.
Break away from the herd, dispose of your masters.
Think for yourselves and question Authority.

Look into the Mirror, walk to the other side
In you peace does abide, in you hate subsides.
Listen to your heart, learning to love is Art.
We are merely sparks of a soon unified light.

5a

Last Edited by drevenkaine on 02/20/2010 12:08 AM
All matter is energy condensed through vibration.
drevenkaine  (OP)

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02/19/2010 11:54 PM
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Re: Poem - Societies Creation
Does no one appreciate poetry in on this damn forum?
All matter is energy condensed through vibration.
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02/20/2010 12:21 AM
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All matter is energy condensed through vibration.
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02/20/2010 12:24 AM
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Re: Poem - Societies Creation
uhhh maybe you should give them time to read it and reflect on it first?

also, keep in mind that most of us here have written "rant poetry" before and have notebooks filled with similar sentiments.

it's good to let things out.





GLP