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Take 2 of the immediately liked and quickly pinned write a story thread that seems to have... Well, run off course.. I renamed it to test phase and have decided that for more success and fairness there needs to be some rules for the thread.

The idea is to create a story written by as many people that will participate. All posters should post with the intention of carrying on from the previous post and will be limited to posting... Let's say 30 words. Posts longer than 30 words will be skipped. This will limit the expansion of the story so that no single person can run away with the story arc.
By all means use your imagination and flare but please try to evolve on the previous post without hindering the next.

So let's give it another try with phase 2 of GLP write a story thread

dance

Taking a final sip from her glass of champagne, she sat up from the wicker garden chair and walked over to the low wall overlooking the river.
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Perhaps they should have visited Room Two, which featured a rusty knife once used for castrations ,
Tomb raiders and dildos Not that sexual urges were missing from a eunuch's life.
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Something had caught her eye. It took a moment for it to click, but when it did she drew in a quick breath.
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as an aside, it's worth mentioning the nearby Fahai Temple, a Ming Dynasty temple almost entirely rebuilt within the last decade, is worth seeing primarily for the outstanding 550-year-old murals.
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She would rather not leave her champagne -- it was sweet, and tingly -- but the river… the river was inviting.
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She would rather not leave her trusty stallion -- it was sweet, and tingly -- but the horses cock… the cock was inviting.
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So she turned to the left and started down the walk leading to the river.

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She would rather not leave her champagne -- it was sweet, and tingly -- but the river… the river was inviting.
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So fatsnatch mcgee set out to the river to investigate what caught her eye. On her way down to the river she heard a loud ringing and a bang and she was instantly knocked off of her feet. Moments later she looks up and see's a GIANT mushroom cloud over her once beloved city, fatsnatch then feels a great pain as she looks down to figure out what is wrong, she finds that she....... CONTINUE!
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Take 2 of the immediately liked and quickly pinned write a story thread that seems to have... Well, run off course.. I renamed it to test phase and have decided that for more success and fairness there needs to be some rules for the thread.

The idea is to create a story written by as many people that will participate. All posters should post with the intention of carrying on from the previous post and will be limited to posting... Let's say 30 words. Posts longer than 30 words will be skipped. This will limit the expansion of the story so that no single person can run away with the story arc.
By all means use your imagination and flare but please try to evolve on the previous post without hindering the next.

So let's give it another try with phase 2 of GLP write a story thread

dance

Taking a final sip from her glass of champagne, she sat up from the wicker garden chair and walked over to the low wall overlooking the river.
 Quoting: Three26


Perhaps they should have visited Room Two, which featured a rusty knife once used for castrations ,
Tomb raiders and dildos Not that sexual urges were missing from a eunuch's life.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 10230878


Something had caught her eye. It took a moment for it to click, but when it did she drew in a quick breath.
 Quoting: Storm*


Something had caught her eye. It took a moment for it to click, but when it did she drew in a quick breath.
 Quoting: Storm*


and choked on the huge thrusting horse cock in her mouth
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1109033


as an aside, it's worth mentioning the nearby Fahai Temple, a Ming Dynasty temple almost entirely rebuilt within the last decade, is worth seeing primarily for the outstanding 550-year-old murals.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 10230878


She would rather not leave her champagne -- it was sweet, and tingly -- but the river… the river was inviting.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1576172


She would rather not leave her trusty stallion -- it was sweet, and tingly -- but the horses cock… the cock was inviting.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1576172

 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1109033


So she turned to the left and started down the walk leading to the river.
 Quoting: Oh Kay


She would rather not leave her champagne -- it was sweet, and tingly -- but the river… the river was inviting.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1576172


So fatsnatch mcgee set out to the river to investigate what caught her eye. On her way down to the river she heard a loud ringing and a bang and she was instantly knocked off of her feet. Moments later she looks up and see's a GIANT mushroom cloud over her once beloved city, fatsnatch then feels a great pain as she looks down to figure out what is wrong, she finds that she....... CONTINUE!
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Great idea, but usually ends with one upmanships messing up the theme.
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Is standing in a blackhole. She starts to fall and..?.?? (magic poff)
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an alien jumped up and began probing her
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Re: GLP write a story thread *take 2*
Take 2 of the immediately liked and quickly pinned write a story thread that seems to have... Well, run off course.. I renamed it to test phase and have decided that for more success and fairness there needs to be some rules for the thread.

The idea is to create a story written by as many people that will participate. All posters should post with the intention of carrying on from the previous post and will be limited to posting... Let's say 30 words. Posts longer than 30 words will be skipped. This will limit the expansion of the story so that no single person can run away with the story arc.
By all means use your imagination and flare but please try to evolve on the previous post without hindering the next.

So let's give it another try with phase 2 of GLP write a story thread

dance

Taking a final sip from her glass of champagne, she sat up from the wicker garden chair and walked over to the low wall overlooking the river.
 Quoting: Three26


Something had caught her eye. It took a moment for it to click, but when it did she drew in a quick breath.
 Quoting: Storm*


as an aside, it's worth mentioning the nearby Fahai Temple, a Ming Dynasty temple almost entirely rebuilt within the last decade, is worth seeing primarily for the outstanding 550-year-old murals.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 10230878


So she turned to the left and started down the walk leading to the river.
 Quoting: Oh Kay


Quickening her steps as she approached the river, she dived head first into the water. Her wedding dress - soaked - was so heavy but she somehow managed to surface.
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I just want to say that this is GLP... A conspiracy forum! with loads of material to fuel a story. Lets use it to push the story along..
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Re: GLP write a story thread *take 2*
Take 2 of the immediately liked and quickly pinned write a story thread that seems to have... Well, run off course.. I renamed it to test phase and have decided that for more success and fairness there needs to be some rules for the thread.

The idea is to create a story written by as many people that will participate. All posters should post with the intention of carrying on from the previous post and will be limited to posting... Let's say 30 words. Posts longer than 30 words will be skipped. This will limit the expansion of the story so that no single person can run away with the story arc.
By all means use your imagination and flare but please try to evolve on the previous post without hindering the next.

So let's give it another try with phase 2 of GLP write a story thread

dance

Taking a final sip from her glass of champagne, she sat up from the wicker garden chair and walked over to the low wall overlooking the river.
 Quoting: Three26


Something had caught her eye. It took a moment for it to click, but when it did she drew in a quick breath.
 Quoting: Storm*


as an aside, it's worth mentioning the nearby Fahai Temple, a Ming Dynasty temple almost entirely rebuilt within the last decade, is worth seeing primarily for the outstanding 550-year-old murals.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 10230878


So she turned to the left and started down the walk leading to the river.
 Quoting: Oh Kay


Quickening her steps as she approached the river, she dived head first into the water. Her wedding dress - soaked - was so heavy but she somehow managed to surface.
 Quoting: Three26


She swam hard towards the mysterious object floating above the rivers surface. She didn't quite know what she was doing, her arms and legs seemed to move of their own accord.
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She bent down to see what it was, Looking a little odd she goes to pick it up, and explosion
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Re: GLP write a story thread *take 2*
Take 2 of the immediately liked and quickly pinned write a story thread that seems to have... Well, run off course.. I renamed it to test phase and have decided that for more success and fairness there needs to be some rules for the thread.

The idea is to create a story written by as many people that will participate. All posters should post with the intention of carrying on from the previous post and will be limited to posting... Let's say 30 words. Posts longer than 30 words will be skipped. This will limit the expansion of the story so that no single person can run away with the story arc.
By all means use your imagination and flare but please try to evolve on the previous post without hindering the next.

So let's give it another try with phase 2 of GLP write a story thread

dance

Taking a final sip from her glass of champagne, she sat up from the wicker garden chair and walked over to the low wall overlooking the river.
 Quoting: Three26


Something had caught her eye. It took a moment for it to click, but when it did she drew in a quick breath.
 Quoting: Storm*


as an aside, it's worth mentioning the nearby Fahai Temple, a Ming Dynasty temple almost entirely rebuilt within the last decade, is worth seeing primarily for the outstanding 550-year-old murals.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 10230878


So she turned to the left and started down the walk leading to the river.
 Quoting: Oh Kay


Quickening her steps as she approached the river, she dived head first into the water. Her wedding dress - soaked - was so heavy but she somehow managed to surface.
 Quoting: Three26


She swam hard towards the mysterious object floating above the rivers surface. She didn't quite know what she was doing, her arms and legs seemed to move of their own accord.
 Quoting: Three26


But then, even in her eyes, there was a big tsunami to see, which was coming out of that object! What was it? Could it be that flying TV-monster missed?
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She bent down to see what it was, Looking a little odd she goes to pick it up, and explosion
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Walking over to the wall where his beautiful new wife had been standing only moments before, John looked around for her. *Splash* "Carie!? Carie!? What are you doing?" John shouted as he ran down the path to the river.
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She bent down to see what it was, Looking a little odd she goes to pick it up, and explosion
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Walking over to the wall where his beautiful new wife had been standing only moments before, John looked around for her. *Splash* "Carie!? Carie!? What are you doing?" John shouted as he ran down the path to the river.
 Quoting: Three26


she looked up to him running down the steps to get to her
she heard another set of footsteps in the other direction and turned and saw her true love , the man that held her heart , Adam Ant ! Her heartbeat fast..
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"Hi, John!", said a voice coming out of the monster object. Johns blood did frozen to ice, while the sun was burning red coloured like a gleeming alien spaceship light.
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She bent down to see what it was, Looking a little odd she goes to pick it up, and explosion
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Walking over to the wall where his beautiful new wife had been standing only moments before, John looked around for her. *Splash* "Carie!? Carie!? What are you doing?" John shouted as he ran down the path to the river.
 Quoting: Three26


she looked up to him running down the steps to get to her
she heard another set of footsteps in the other direction and turned and saw her true love , the man that held her heart , Adam Ant ! Her heartbeat fast..
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The expolsion implies she's dead. your adding holes! SHE MUST BE AN ALIEN! ZOMG!
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Last Edited by EarthKin on 02/06/2012 07:09 PM
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She bent down to see what it was, Looking a little odd she goes to pick it up, and She Falls inexplosion
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Walking over to the wall where his beautiful new wife had been standing only moments before, John looked around for her. *Splash* "Carie!? Carie!? What are you doing?" John shouted as he ran down the path to the river.
 Quoting: Three26


Carrie is thrashing around in the Water and Crying out 'hELP!"
===John Dives in===
Carrie Screams in pain.

The Explosion was a Sonic blast...
Men in Combat Suits are coming down the Long Stairway

Last Edited by EarthKin on 02/06/2012 07:14 PM
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She bent down to see what it was, Looking a little odd she goes to pick it up, and explosion
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Walking over to the wall where his beautiful new wife had been standing only moments before, John looked around for her. *Splash* "Carie!? Carie!? What are you doing?" John shouted as he ran down the path to the river.
 Quoting: Three26


she looked up to him running down the steps to get to her
she heard another set of footsteps in the other direction and turned and saw her true love , the man that held her heart , Adam Ant ! Her heartbeat fast..
 Quoting: ttowngirl


It beat so fast, it forced out the most noxious fart known to man. Unfortunately, she was wearing rubber pants which trapped the air, causing it to look like she had two butts. Adam Ant keeled over from the fumes. She stood there sobbing in her rubber pants with the two butts as she just literally blew her chance with Adam Ant.
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Axor swung his plasma-plane into an arching loop, as the fragments of the comet came crashing through the vortex of the worm-hole. Light filled the cockpit while a steady audio hum vibrated his quantum connection.
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Great idea, but usually ends with one upmanships messing up the theme.
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I'm sorry OP, but this person is right. The only way to get a good final product of this is to have a team of talented people put it together. The problem is finding talented people. All you have to have is one or two jackasses mess up the whole flow which has already happened. The evolution and predictive nature of man, is it not grand?
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She bent down to see what it was, Looking a little odd she goes to pick it up, and explosion
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Walking over to the wall where his beautiful new wife had been standing only moments before, John looked around for her. *Splash* "Carie!? Carie!? What are you doing?" John shouted as he ran down the path to the river.
 Quoting: Three26


she looked up to him running down the steps to get to her
she heard another set of footsteps in the other direction and turned and saw her true love , the man that held her heart , Adam Ant ! Her heartbeat fast..
 Quoting: ttowngirl


It beat so fast, it forced out the most noxious fart known to man. Unfortunately, she was wearing rubber pants which trapped the air, causing it to look like she had two butts. Adam Ant keeled over from the fumes. She stood there sobbing in her rubber pants with the two butts as she just literally blew her chance with Adam Ant.
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To her suprise Adam Ant looked her straight in the eye and said 'How Beautiful'
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As soon as her eyes met Adam Ants eyes, she fell into a comatose trance. Adam brought out his phone and called in the collection team. She had seen too much and needed to be investigated. Either she would be eliminated, or brought on board for the final stage of the masterplan.
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...and so it begins...





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