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Message Subject JUST IN:The OBITUARY of Mother American Liberty-Very Sad!!!
Poster Handle Anonymous Coward
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you need to rewrite this and be more concise, shorten the length and reconsider your continuity (how it logically flows.) Then you might have a masterpiece.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 14449944


HAHA....you're quite an idiot, aren't you? Or put another way, a critique like yours is of no value. A pity....for you, that is.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 10303850


actually I meant a masterpiece that could go farther than GLP. GLP is awesome, don't get me wrong, but I meant somewhere where the writer could get professional acclaim for the work under their actual name. I assumed the writer, having the intelligence to write such a piece, would understand what I was saying, cuz we can write what WE like but we ALWAYS get edited and need more eyes for suggestions.

As it turns out, the writer DID understand what I meant. And telling someone they might have a masterpiece with a little rewrite/editing is no small thing. Very few people are capable of it.
 
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