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a poem for the lonely

 
shakespearean monkey
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11/19/2012 11:37 AM
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a poem for the lonely
Another night lost in loneliness
wishing you were here,
huddled by the fire for warmth
flames reflecting off my tears.

this bitter cold feels worse inside,
will this torment never cease?
I lost the best thing in my life,
now shivering i beg for peace.

let my heart be forever numb,
lack of is better than pain,
i miss your touch more everyday
this yearning driving me insane.

blanket wrapped as you once were
sheltering me from cold
but as the wood cracks from the heat
all i wish is for you to hold.

the heat a reminder of your love,
i pull closer and closer still,
this moth flies to the flame of passion,
as natural as natures will.

alone, lonely but unafraid,
i sit by this fire,
for eternity i will wait,
for just one second of your desire.
141

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11/19/2012 11:42 AM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
beautiful, touched my heart deeply...
thanks so much for sharing your amazing heart
rose
just be love in truth...
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11/19/2012 11:44 AM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
beautiful, touched my heart deeply...
thanks so much for sharing your amazing heart
rose
 Quoting: 141


i read alot of your material, so indeed i am sincere when i say thank you from the bottom of my heart.

hf
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11/19/2012 11:46 AM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
hugs
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11/19/2012 11:52 AM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
hugs
 Quoting: PsycoCandy


back at ya candy.

hf
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Re: a poem for the lonely
beautiful, touched my heart deeply...
thanks so much for sharing your amazing heart
rose
 Quoting: 141


i read alot of your material, so indeed i am sincere when i say thank you from the bottom of my heart.

hf
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 28076914


We can only but share our hearts, that way others are inspired to do the same...
So eventually we will make sense here together, all heart to heart...
Would like to pin this, to bring some love and poetry to glp, would that be ok by you?

rose
just be love in truth...
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11/19/2012 11:56 AM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
beautiful, touched my heart deeply...
thanks so much for sharing your amazing heart
rose
 Quoting: 141


i read alot of your material, so indeed i am sincere when i say thank you from the bottom of my heart.

hf
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 28076914


We can only but share our hearts, that way others are inspired to do the same...
So eventually we will make sense here together, all heart to heart...
Would like to pin this, to bring some love and poetry to glp, would that be ok by you?

rose
 Quoting: 141


of course, though i am at library and have only 20 minutes left with my time.

thank you very much, you give me hope.

hf
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11/19/2012 11:59 AM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
scalding blood gushed foaming from the raging inferno of mine heart
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Re: a poem for the lonely
scalding blood gushed foaming from the raging inferno of mine heart
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 23952125


good flow amigo, let the torrent loose..
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Re: a poem for the lonely
thank you for the pin 141 and thank you for the stars, i needed a smile today.

my sincere love to all.
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11/19/2012 12:06 PM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
Another night lost in loneliness
wishing you were here,
huddled by the fire for warmth
flames reflecting off my tears.

this bitter cold feels worse inside,
will this torment never cease?
I lost the best thing in my life,
now shivering i beg for peace.

let my heart be forever numb,
lack of is better than pain,
i miss your touch more everyday
this yearning driving me insane.

blanket wrapped as you once were
sheltering me from cold
but as the wood cracks from the heat
all i wish is for you to hold.

the heat a reminder of your love,
i pull closer and closer still,
this moth flies to the flame of passion,
as natural as natures will.

alone, lonely but unafraid,
i sit by this fire,
for eternity i will wait,
for just one second of your desire.
 Quoting: shakespearean monkey 28076914


Wow. How I've been feeling all morning..can't believe you posted this.
WIshing you comfort..
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11/19/2012 12:07 PM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
Nice poetry; but, I'd be happy with just a nice fire!
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11/19/2012 12:08 PM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
Another night lost in loneliness
wishing you were here,
huddled by the fire for warmth
flames reflecting off my tears.

this bitter cold feels worse inside,
will this torment never cease?
I lost the best thing in my life,
now shivering i beg for peace.

let my heart be forever numb,
lack of is better than pain,
i miss your touch more everyday
this yearning driving me insane.

blanket wrapped as you once were
sheltering me from cold
but as the wood cracks from the heat
all i wish is for you to hold.

the heat a reminder of your love,
i pull closer and closer still,
this moth flies to the flame of passion,
as natural as natures will.

alone, lonely but unafraid,
i sit by this fire,
for eternity i will wait,
for just one second of your desire.
 Quoting: shakespearean monkey 28076914


Wow. How I've been feeling all morning..can't believe you posted this.
WIshing you comfort..
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 20898323


thank you my friend, and likewise.

hf
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11/19/2012 12:09 PM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
Nice poetry; but, I'd be happy with just a nice fire!
 Quoting: shenandoah


thank you, i hope you get your wish.

hf
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Re: a poem for the lonely
my time is up, i must depart
thank you all, from the depth of my heart.

hf
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11/19/2012 12:12 PM

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Re: a poem for the lonely
As I lay here in this lonely bed,

Remembering how you used to give me head,

I recall all the fun and chores,

Well fuck it I off to buy some whores!
I never forgive and I never forget

I am a licensed firearm holder. I will, under protection of law, use lethal force if attacked.

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11/19/2012 12:20 PM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
NICE poem, OP !

Been meaning for days to start a poetry thread, but kept putting it off because of the heavy news from the ME !

May I contribute ?

Regrets ( To Susan Istzwan, whom I lost to 'money')

Regrets are born not unwed dreams,
'Oft conceived in romantic schemes;
But those who sow not dreams in time,
Will find loves withered, on the vine.

Nor with a user, would I tarry,
For smooth tongue losers, feign to marry;
But say to those, with whom they sleep,
" Who buys the cow, when creams so cheap ?"

Cleave then to one, who asks for naught,
Contented with, what God hath wrought;
Who needs your love, and in love will live,
To return tenfold, all that you give !

Eagle
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11/19/2012 12:22 PM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
bump hf
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Re: a poem for the lonely
Very nice
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11/19/2012 12:41 PM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
Regrets are born FROM unwed dreams ....
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Loving all the peotry may I?

Broken Hero (by:yoyo)
Siting in the darkness waiting for the light.....
Have these feelings of being alone...
Not even my shadow is there to warm me....
Screaming like a crazy woman.....
Begging to be heard only to fall on deaf ears...
Emotional vortex that sucks me in and leaves me dead inside....
No point in tears for they fall to silent ground....
No fear ....
This is my test to stand broken and yet unbreakable...
To see if I can truly stand alone...
I tape my self together.....
And fall right back apart...
When the foundation of the heart is weak nothing strong can stay....
I use to be wild and free...
I’m a slave to the pain...
These chains hold me....
Its the closest to being whole...
Gone are the carefree days of my youth.....
Gone is that superhero strength...
I sit weak and broken in my ring....
I wait for the light to shine in my darkness....
To know it will never be seen....
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Re: a poem for the lonely
poetry* damn typos!
BRIEF

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Re: a poem for the lonely
As I lay me down to rest,

I recall your lovely breasts...

My love for you did grow and even triple,

But what was best were your hard pink nipples...

I would have joyfully lived with you, even in a hut,

Had I only known that you were such a slut.

But, like a soda without its fizz,

Never again will you taste my jizz.
I never forgive and I never forget

I am a licensed firearm holder. I will, under protection of law, use lethal force if attacked.

Briefcut4892
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11/19/2012 01:00 PM
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Re: a poem for the lonely
As I lay me down to rest,

I recall your lovely breasts...

My love for you did grow and even triple,

But what was best were your hard pink nipples...

I would have joyfully lived with you, even in a hut,

Had I only known that you were such a slut.

But, like a soda without its fizz,

Never again will you taste my jizz.
 Quoting: BRIEF


Awwww, I knew Brief had a heart in there somewhere!
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Be GONE, horny Brief !
BRIEF

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Be GONE, horny Brief !
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 16389604


You don't appreciate the more crude side of poetry? grinning
I never forgive and I never forget

I am a licensed firearm holder. I will, under protection of law, use lethal force if attacked.

Briefcut4892
BRIEF

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Regrets are born FROM unwed dreams ....
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 16389604


and unsheathed swords...
I never forgive and I never forget

I am a licensed firearm holder. I will, under protection of law, use lethal force if attacked.

Briefcut4892
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Re: a poem for the lonely
Another night lost in loneliness
wishing you were here,
huddled by the fire for warmth
flames reflecting off my tears.

this bitter cold feels worse inside,
will this torment never cease?
I lost the best thing in my life,
now shivering i beg for peace.

let my heart be forever numb,
lack of is better than pain,
i miss your touch more everyday
this yearning driving me insane.

blanket wrapped as you once were
sheltering me from cold
but as the wood cracks from the heat
all i wish is for you to hold.

the heat a reminder of your love,
i pull closer and closer still,
this moth flies to the flame of passion,
as natural as natures will.

alone, lonely but unafraid,
i sit by this fire,
for eternity i will wait,
for just one second of your desire.
 Quoting: shakespearean monkey 28076914


red_heart
just be love in truth...
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scalding blood gushed foaming from the raging inferno of mine heart
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 23952125


LMFAO!
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Re: a poem for the lonely
The Dreamer's Dream

Somewhere in the universe
Far beyond the darkest dark
There where stars don't sparkle
And the moons don't shine
I hide my soul in emptiness
And cut the lifeless line

Somewhere down the waterfront
Far below the deepest deep
There where cold gets colder
And life is nowhere near
I hide my heart in loneliness
And cry the tearless tear

But somewhere in eternity
Far behind the timeless time
There where distance dominates
And silence rules the word
I'll save my soul from endlessnes
And fight the hurting hurt

For somewhere in the darkest skies
There shines my brightest bright
And I know I will rise again
Make sure my rays will beam
I'll soak my heart in happiness
And live the dreamer's dream

hf
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 Quoting: shakespearean monkey 28076914


I wrote this to my ex, never got a reply back tho lol:

Eternity is but, a blink of god's eye
how blind I'd be
to deny
not a day, an hour, a minute goes by,
i forget Your not by my side.
Time stretches on,
like a sapling reaching through the dark
canopied in the wilderness
Hoping to again be touched by your light.
So i lay low on forest floor
in this bed of fallen leaves
and see your face among all the creatures
that pass & creep
as i continue to grow, yet gently weep.





GLP