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Message Subject My husband said i should log out of GLP and finally write my book, so I made this thread. 48k words - almost half!
Poster Handle green_girl
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So at this point, I decided to ask dearest husband for his opinion. Waiting for him to read through thirty pages was intensely terrifying and also embarrassing! I was pacing around, wondering if he was thinking I was an idiot!
when he finally finished he let me have his honest opinion. I trust his opinions. This is the guy that once near broke my heart by telling me a picture i drew wasn't very good, lol. He is always honest - one of the reasons i love him so.
So his feedback was very positive on this one. There were a few things he picked up on, that i expected him to. A few scenes that he wished were a bit longer or more descriptive. A few moments that could have been awesome with a bit of tweaking. Aside from that he said it was very very good. He wanted to read more, and he cant wait to find out how it ends!
As for the criticisms he had to offer, i agreed with them all. But that is why this is just a "first" draft. When I do the second draft, i will be able to make those changes.
So yay! I survived the critiquing!!!
 
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