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Message Subject My husband said i should log out of GLP and finally write my book, so I made this thread. 48k words - almost half!
Poster Handle green_girl
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Click on the "Random line generator" on the same link.
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[link to www.languageisavirus.com]

It generates random lines. A group of words that only seem to make a sentence. If you are a budding writer, (like me) then you can use that to practise your writing skills.
I hit that link twice , and I got these two lines;

•Apple red rosy brown Moon Shadow Shooting star Milk honey torso
•smiles white strawberry rent gold glow kiss lemon freeze moon rain


So here's a short paragraph I wrote using those two lines of words. You have to use those words in your story , not necessarily in the order its presented.
This was typed in quickly, so no edit , and probably lots of literary mistakes.

DOWNTOWN
by Abhie
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The candle light danced its enchanting yellow gold light across her face.We were seated near the window, and the streetlights added an edge of purple and green across the side of her face. For a moment she was my diva, a long forgotten Godess, now shining in front of me in ethereal spleandor, as if projected in holographic reality across from me. Except Laurie was no hologram. She was real. I had to keep reminding myself of that. Because everything that happened in the last few days seemed more like a story, a
fantasy come true. Magical moments that seemed to push reality away creating an impossible momentary lapse.
The rose petals on the water tumbler gave it that exotic touch. Lauries normally auburn hair shimmered rosy-brown in the night lights of the city. The apple red sequined gown she wore, clung to her body enhancing the contours and the sequin work glittering everytime she moved.
Laurie broke into my reverie.
"What are you thinking about..?" She asked, her voice seeming to have the texture of milk and honey.
"Nothing....in particular. I was looking at you. You look so beautiful in the night light. You look like magic".
She smiled, turning her head toward the window trying to hide her feeling of happiness. The smile lingered. The corners of her lips , with their permanent lilt upwards, seemed to shine with a light of their own.
"And...." She asked, "What kind of magic?
"Downtown is my favorite place for dinner. Always has been. Ted's place serves the best food. Adding you into the mix is sheer magic. The pleasurable kind" I said.
She smiled again, this time it was a sort of secretive smile. A hint like the flash of a shooting star. She reached for the drink, the dark velvety fabric of her gown contrasted sharply with the bright soft flesh of her torso.
"You are magic too" She said. Taking a sip of her wine.
She smiled her strawberry smile again, this time hooking me deeper into her trance. I was a willing apprentice. Where she wanted me to go, I would go. Voluntarily. "I like it when you blow me kisses" I said. She probably saw a twinkle in my eye. She smiled again, and blew me another strawberry kiss. And I felt it too.Grazing my face. Brushing across me like a soft Moon shadow.

 Quoting: abhie


wow that was very well done! Such a shame it ended, i would have kept reading!!
that sentence generator sounds like a lot of fun/inspiration. i will use it today and let you know if it helps me out.
btw - quite envious of your talents!!!
hf
 
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