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I wrote lyrics...made a beat....and recorded it....

 
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The words that I wrote in the song are below the video in the 'show more' part of the page...

Please tell me what you think...?


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I'm a wee bit limited in the rap department but perhaps intro some singing to break the message up!

Or a guitar riff etc-

2Pac did get my attention with Dear Mama, I never get tired of that piece of Art.

Good luck in verturing into making Music, and the rap part is solved so next might be mixing in something more then just words and a beat.

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I'm a wee bit limited in the rap department but perhaps intro some singing to break the message up!

Or a guitar riff etc-
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Thanks for the suggestions and for listening... When I compare the amount of the words to, lets say for instance, a country song... It seems as if my song, if broken down, could make an entire album. lol

I just do this for fun and as a way to vent. I'm way too introverted to ever be on a stage performing music.

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I did all of this in my shitty, old ass, mobile home. Not the most appropriate location for clear vocal recordings.

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I did all of this in my shitty, old ass, mobile home. Not the most appropriate location for clear vocal recordings.
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I like the start a lot, it hints of a wonderful Tune that never arrives, so keep working on the start.
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I did all of this in my shitty, old ass, mobile home. Not the most appropriate location for clear vocal recordings.
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Some great Art has been done out of fancy studios, Estas Tonne comes to mind.
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I liked it. Do you ever collaborate with others?
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I liked it. Do you ever collaborate with others?
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Great advise and sometimes Solo not the path, I love Solo Sailing but my greatest moments been with company.
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Re: I wrote lyrics...made a beat....and recorded it....
I did all of this in my shitty, old ass, mobile home. Not the most appropriate location for clear vocal recordings.
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I like the start a lot, it hints of a wonderful Tune that never arrives, so keep working on the start.
 Quoting: Mewish


I can see what you mean.... this a better sounding version of the original.

Keep in mind it's the exact same melody, different drums and it needs some serious eq'ing.... The original can be heard here...

[link to soundcloud.com (secure)]

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I did all of this in my shitty, old ass, mobile home. Not the most appropriate location for clear vocal recordings.
 Quoting: notinfallible


I like the start a lot, it hints of a wonderful Tune that never arrives, so keep working on the start.
 Quoting: Mewish


I can see what you mean.... this a better sounding version of the original.

Keep in mind it's the exact same melody, different drums and it needs some serious eq'ing.... The original can be heard here...

[link to soundcloud.com (secure)]
 Quoting: notinfallible


Now we are talking!

You might find some inspiration in Ludovico Einaudi

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I liked it. Do you ever collaborate with others?
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I never have, but not saying that I wouldn't. I just feel very out of place and awkward when doing anything music related when there is other people around.
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Re: I wrote lyrics...made a beat....and recorded it....
I did all of this in my shitty, old ass, mobile home. Not the most appropriate location for clear vocal recordings.
 Quoting: notinfallible


I like the start a lot, it hints of a wonderful Tune that never arrives, so keep working on the start.
 Quoting: Mewish


I can see what you mean.... this a better sounding version of the original.

Keep in mind it's the exact same melody, different drums and it needs some serious eq'ing.... The original can be heard here...

[link to soundcloud.com (secure)]
 Quoting: notinfallible


Now we are talking!
 Quoting: Mewish


If you look around, in either of the those pages. at the other stuff I've uploaded ... there might be something else that sounds decent to some of you...

There is only like one or two with vocals recorded to them. The majority of the tracks that I upload are just instrumentals.

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I did all of this in my shitty, old ass, mobile home. Not the most appropriate location for clear vocal recordings.
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I like the start a lot, it hints of a wonderful Tune that never arrives, so keep working on the start.
 Quoting: Mewish


I can see what you mean.... this a better sounding version of the original.

Keep in mind it's the exact same melody, different drums and it needs some serious eq'ing.... The original can be heard here...

[link to soundcloud.com (secure)]
 Quoting: notinfallible


Now we are talking!

You might find some inspiration in Ludovico Einaudi
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Primavera or something like that was definitely inspiring.
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I liked it. Do you ever collaborate with others?
 Quoting: Nova's Dad


I never have, but not saying that I wouldn't. I just feel very out of place and awkward when doing anything music related when there is other people around.
 Quoting: notinfallible


I was scared as hell when young and first Villa to be judgedhiding

It was a hit, but it took years ans many more before I relaxed.

Then I was sabotaged by another Artists so went living in the Jungle a lot since perhaps what I needed.

I am addicted to many things, and Music can save Life's so A Powerful adventure.
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Here's one of those beats that start off great, but fail to feel like a complete beat when all is said and done...

The intro is amazing in this track, but something is missing after about 1:20 go by...


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You just suprised me so Thank You and I hope You find Happiness and the key to puking endless Hit's even if not need more then 1.
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Maybe I should go back and try to finish it today or something?
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You just suprised me so Thank You and I hope You find Happiness and the key to puking endless Hit's even if not need more then 1.
 Quoting: Mewish


You surprised me by mentioning, Ludovico Einaudi. I don't think anyone that I've ever communicated with has ever referenced Ludovico Einaudi.

I'm very happy that listening to my music, made you think of Ludovico Einaudi. That is the coolest shit ever.
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Re: I wrote lyrics...made a beat....and recorded it....
Here's one of those beats that start off great, but fail to feel like a complete beat when all is said and done...

The intro is amazing in this track, but something is missing after about 1:20 go by...


[link to www.youtube.com (secure)]
 Quoting: notinfallible


You are without doubt Gifted, and I agree with Your own critic.

Perhaps more contrast is needed?

Sometimes even big drums can let a great Tune in.
Have You ever listen to Kaizers Orchestra ?

[email protected] was a great performance and Ompa til du dør my fav

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Here's one of those beats that start off great, but fail to feel like a complete beat when all is said and done...

The intro is amazing in this track, but something is missing after about 1:20 go by...


[link to www.youtube.com (secure)]
 Quoting: notinfallible


You are without doubt Gifted, and I agree with Your own critic.

Perhaps more contrast is needed?

Sometimes even big drums can let a great Tune in.
Have You ever listen to Kaizers Orchestra ?

[email protected] was a great performance and Ompa til du dør my fav
 Quoting: Mewish


I don't think so.... I'll definitely give them a listen!
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Never be afraid to copy a wee bit!

I spent loads of time on a Villa I thought was only minem then in the middle of nowhere in North of Thailand I find almost an exact copy alien

My Love just lol when I asked WTF!

Life is strange around me sort off.
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This is my favorite track that I've made so far this year....
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You also seem to love Miaus so You will never be lonely if have one around.

If not travel to much, I would keep one around 24h.
And my Dogs too, I been lucky to have Animals sort of adore me.

Some people are afraid of big dogs and cats, I just start talking to them if aggressive and they calm down.

Only bitten once, and the dog had Brain cancer.
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My cat, when he was kitten, makes an appearance in this one...


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That's him more grow up above ^^^^
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This is my favorite track that I've made so far this year....
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Agree even if first one has a Potential to be something I never heard before.

You might get a liftoff from a Partner!

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