I've had a shitty day, wrote some lyrics cuz that's how I deal... | |
AC Reborn User ID: 71318064 United States 02/05/2019 01:27 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I think I need to learn the guitar, too. This little southern gal feels like I've been invaded by BB King and my piano just won't cut it. (Rough day and I feel like the sadness I've felt my entire life is about to burst out of me). Quoting: KimberGal Keeping that in mind... ____________________________________ I'm a weepin' willow I've been weepin' all my life I am a weeping willow, baby Been weepin' all my life When I was a sinner The saints made me feel so wrong When I was a bleedin' in sin I was still naive and all alone Now I'm older and doing it right, yeah And you STILL don't get my song. GRRRRRRR (some type of guitar solo) GRRRRR I'm a big, low, black cloud 'Bout to bust a rain all over you I'm a BIG, MAD, SAD cloud, baby 'Bout to cry out loud the blues. Lord, you know me my whole life. What else is left to do? LORD YOU HAVE KNOWN ME ALL MY LIFE And I'm done with this burden, too. Gonna look both ways sideways And walk right on through... _________________________________ Rough draft but it's a start... Life is so f'ing hard sometimes. Feels good to get it all out. "'Bout to bust a rain all over you" ...getting a bit erotic... |
KimberGal (OP) User ID: 75870715 United States 02/05/2019 01:30 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I think I need to learn the guitar, too. This little southern gal feels like I've been invaded by BB King and my piano just won't cut it. (Rough day and I feel like the sadness I've felt my entire life is about to burst out of me). Quoting: KimberGal Keeping that in mind... ____________________________________ I'm a weepin' willow I've been weepin' all my life I am a weeping willow, baby Been weepin' all my life When I was a sinner The saints made me feel so wrong When I was a bleedin' in sin I was still naive and all alone Now I'm older and doing it right, yeah And you STILL don't get my song. GRRRRRRR (some type of guitar solo) GRRRRR I'm a big, low, black cloud 'Bout to bust a rain all over you I'm a BIG, MAD, SAD cloud, baby 'Bout to cry out loud the blues. Lord, you know me my whole life. What else is left to do? LORD YOU HAVE KNOWN ME ALL MY LIFE And I'm done with this burden, too. Gonna look both ways sideways And walk right on through... _________________________________ Rough draft but it's a start... Life is so f'ing hard sometimes. Feels good to get it all out. "'Bout to bust a rain all over you" ...getting a bit erotic... Not my intention. So far from where I was inside when I wrote these lyrics. However...whatever you think it is, it is. That's how it goes and it's cool. |
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De User ID: 75850699 United States 02/05/2019 02:47 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Im a dark cloud Pouring down rain Pouring down tears Its all the same Dark old road Dont wanna go down Its gonna rain We all gon drown. Feel ya op. Cheers. Headin to the likka sto in a few hours soon as it open.. Pro songwriter here.. Few extra bars.. Deep old ocean Full of pain Hurts so much It aint the same You can have my lyrics... We old souls ya dig... This aint nothin but a sad carousel. |
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KimberGal (OP) User ID: 75870715 United States 02/05/2019 08:37 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Well, I posted so you deserve a good explanation. It isn't one thing, though some of it had to do with work. It's like...every single day I know what I need to do to be at a better place in myself and every single day passes by and I do nothing. But last night I bawled my eyes out. It's the sadness of the years. The days. The hours. And I keep it all inside. That's how I live, everything bundled inside. And last night I had had enough. I took everything in me and put it into words. Issues with my church growing up, being blindsided when half my family died, losing lovers, missing friends. Being an idiot for throwing away time, at times. You know...what everyone goes through and it just hit me last night and I did not want to hide that part of myself any longer. This morning I have a great cup of coffee by my side, my furry cats and dogs all greeted me so sweetly this AM, I can hear my hubby snoring away and it's alright. More than alright. |
KimberGal (OP) User ID: 75870715 United States 02/05/2019 08:38 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Im a dark cloud Quoting: De 75850699 Pouring down rain Pouring down tears Its all the same Dark old road Dont wanna go down Its gonna rain We all gon drown. Feel ya op. Cheers. Headin to the likka sto in a few hours soon as it open.. Pro songwriter here.. Few extra bars.. Deep old ocean Full of pain Hurts so much It aint the same You can have my lyrics... We old souls ya dig... This aint nothin but a sad carousel. Yep, yep! We should write a sad bastard song together. send it to Disney. |
KimberGal (OP) User ID: 75870715 United States 02/05/2019 08:43 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | De = this sig but uh.. Quoting: Deplorable_American_patriot 75850699 I just wanna give ya a hug.. One blues person to the other.. We get no rest till we at the pearly gates.. So just keep rowin your boat to shore in the storm Thank you. Here's some better lyrics I wrote a while back. Good morning. Open up the paisley lot, The light outshines each question. The quiet droves a'call ye home, The meadows of your destination. From thin, silvery lines of see, To crackling dry ground of sorrow. Unleash this peasant's lashing rain, Lead me o'er unto the morrow. A golden sparrow's bountiful sky, A red dove's rainbow shining. The reed's last stumble left away, Across the midnight pining. |
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