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I've had a shitty day, wrote some lyrics cuz that's how I deal...

 
KimberGal
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I've had a shitty day, wrote some lyrics cuz that's how I deal...
I think I need to learn the guitar, too. This little southern gal feels like I've been invaded by BB King and my piano just won't cut it. (Rough day and I feel like the sadness I've felt my entire life is about to burst out of me).

Keeping that in mind...
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I'm a weepin' willow
I've been weepin' all my life

I am a weeping willow, baby
Been weepin' all my life

When I was a sinner
The saints made me feel so wrong
When I was a bleedin' in sin
I was still naive and all alone
Now I'm older and doing it right, yeah
And you STILL don't get my song.

GRRRRRRR (some type of guitar solo) GRRRRR

I'm a big, low, black cloud
'Bout to bust a rain all over you
I'm a BIG, MAD, SAD cloud, baby
'Bout to cry out loud the blues.

Lord, you know me my whole life.
What else is left to do?
LORD YOU HAVE KNOWN ME ALL MY LIFE
And I'm done with this burden, too.

Gonna look both ways sideways
And walk right on through...
_________________________________

Rough draft but it's a start...

Life is so f'ing hard sometimes. Feels good to get it all out.
AC Reborn
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02/05/2019 01:27 AM
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Re: I've had a shitty day, wrote some lyrics cuz that's how I deal...
I think I need to learn the guitar, too. This little southern gal feels like I've been invaded by BB King and my piano just won't cut it. (Rough day and I feel like the sadness I've felt my entire life is about to burst out of me).

Keeping that in mind...
____________________________________
I'm a weepin' willow
I've been weepin' all my life

I am a weeping willow, baby
Been weepin' all my life

When I was a sinner
The saints made me feel so wrong
When I was a bleedin' in sin
I was still naive and all alone
Now I'm older and doing it right, yeah
And you STILL don't get my song.

GRRRRRRR (some type of guitar solo) GRRRRR

I'm a big, low, black cloud
'Bout to bust a rain all over you
I'm a BIG, MAD, SAD cloud, baby
'Bout to cry out loud the blues.

Lord, you know me my whole life.
What else is left to do?
LORD YOU HAVE KNOWN ME ALL MY LIFE
And I'm done with this burden, too.

Gonna look both ways sideways
And walk right on through...
_________________________________

Rough draft but it's a start...

Life is so f'ing hard sometimes. Feels good to get it all out.
 Quoting: KimberGal


"'Bout to bust a rain all over you"

...getting a bit erotic...
KimberGal  (OP)

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Re: I've had a shitty day, wrote some lyrics cuz that's how I deal...
I think I need to learn the guitar, too. This little southern gal feels like I've been invaded by BB King and my piano just won't cut it. (Rough day and I feel like the sadness I've felt my entire life is about to burst out of me).

Keeping that in mind...
____________________________________
I'm a weepin' willow
I've been weepin' all my life

I am a weeping willow, baby
Been weepin' all my life

When I was a sinner
The saints made me feel so wrong
When I was a bleedin' in sin
I was still naive and all alone
Now I'm older and doing it right, yeah
And you STILL don't get my song.

GRRRRRRR (some type of guitar solo) GRRRRR

I'm a big, low, black cloud
'Bout to bust a rain all over you
I'm a BIG, MAD, SAD cloud, baby
'Bout to cry out loud the blues.

Lord, you know me my whole life.
What else is left to do?
LORD YOU HAVE KNOWN ME ALL MY LIFE
And I'm done with this burden, too.

Gonna look both ways sideways
And walk right on through...
_________________________________

Rough draft but it's a start...

Life is so f'ing hard sometimes. Feels good to get it all out.
 Quoting: KimberGal


"'Bout to bust a rain all over you"

...getting a bit erotic...
 Quoting: AC Reborn 71318064


Not my intention. So far from where I was inside when I wrote these lyrics.

However...whatever you think it is, it is. That's how it goes and it's cool.
KimberGal  (OP)

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bump my own thread. Just wanna be heard today. flower
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02/05/2019 02:40 AM
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Re: I've had a shitty day, wrote some lyrics cuz that's how I deal...
What happened if you don’t mind to (talk) it out?
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02/05/2019 02:47 AM
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Re: I've had a shitty day, wrote some lyrics cuz that's how I deal...
Im a dark cloud

Pouring down rain

Pouring down tears

Its all the same

Dark old road

Dont wanna go down

Its gonna rain

We all gon drown.

Feel ya op. Cheers.

Headin to the likka sto in a few hours soon as it open..

Pro songwriter here.. Few extra bars..

Deep old ocean

Full of pain

Hurts so much

It aint the same

You can have my lyrics...


We old souls ya dig...

This aint nothin but a sad carousel.
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02/05/2019 02:50 AM
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De = this sig but uh..


I just wanna give ya a hug..

One blues person to the other..

We get no rest till we at the pearly gates..

So just keep rowin your boat to shore in the storm
KimberGal  (OP)

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02/05/2019 08:37 AM
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What happened if you don’t mind to (talk) it out?
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 76722963


Well, I posted so you deserve a good explanation.

It isn't one thing, though some of it had to do with work.

It's like...every single day I know what I need to do to be at a better place in myself and every single day passes by and I do nothing.

But last night I bawled my eyes out. It's the sadness of the years. The days. The hours. And I keep it all inside. That's how I live, everything bundled inside. And last night I had had enough. I took everything in me and put it into words. Issues with my church growing up, being blindsided when half my family died, losing lovers, missing friends. Being an idiot for throwing away time, at times.

You know...what everyone goes through and it just hit me last night and I did not want to hide that part of myself any longer.

This morning I have a great cup of coffee by my side, my furry cats and dogs all greeted me so sweetly this AM, I can hear my hubby snoring away and it's alright. More than alright.

peace
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Re: I've had a shitty day, wrote some lyrics cuz that's how I deal...
Im a dark cloud

Pouring down rain

Pouring down tears

Its all the same

Dark old road

Dont wanna go down

Its gonna rain

We all gon drown.

Feel ya op. Cheers.

Headin to the likka sto in a few hours soon as it open..

Pro songwriter here.. Few extra bars..

Deep old ocean

Full of pain

Hurts so much

It aint the same

You can have my lyrics...


We old souls ya dig...

This aint nothin but a sad carousel.
 Quoting: De 75850699


Yep, yep! We should write a sad bastard song together. send it to Disney.
KimberGal  (OP)

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02/05/2019 08:43 AM
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Re: I've had a shitty day, wrote some lyrics cuz that's how I deal...
De = this sig but uh..


I just wanna give ya a hug..

One blues person to the other..

We get no rest till we at the pearly gates..

So just keep rowin your boat to shore in the storm
 Quoting: Deplorable_American_patriot 75850699


Thank you. hugs

Here's some better lyrics I wrote a while back. Good morning. hf



Open up the paisley lot,

The light outshines each question.

The quiet droves a'call ye home,

The meadows of your destination.


From thin, silvery lines of see,

To crackling dry ground of sorrow.

Unleash this peasant's lashing rain,

Lead me o'er unto the morrow.


A golden sparrow's bountiful sky,

A red dove's rainbow shining.

The reed's last stumble left away,

Across the midnight pining.
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Re: I've had a shitty day, wrote some lyrics cuz that's how I deal...
bump my own thread. Just wanna be heard today. flower
 Quoting: KimberGal


There’s nothing wrong with wanting to be heard
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