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An old woman´s poem

 
Spiritual Freedom
12/01/2004 05:30 AM
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How true this is.....

When an old lady died in the geriatric ward of a small hospital near
Dundee, Scotland, it was felt that she had nothing left of any value.
Later, when the nurses were going through her meager possessions, they
found this poem. Its quality and content so impressed the staff that
copies were made and distributed to every nurse in the hospital. One nurse
took her copy to Ireland. The old lady´s sole bequest to posterity has
since appeared in the Christmas edition of the News Magazine of the North
Ireland Association for Mental Health. A slide presentation has also been
made based on her simple, but eloquent, poem. And this little old Scottish
lady, with nothing left to give to the world, is now the author of this
"anonymous" poem winging across the Internet.

~An Old Lady´s Poem~

What do you see, nurses, what do you see?
What are you thinking when you´re looking at me?
A crabby old woman, not very wise,
uncertain of habit, with faraway eyes?
Who dribbles her food and makes no reply
When you say in a loud voice, "I do wish you´d try!"
Who seems not to notice the things that you do,
and forever is losing a stocking or shoe.....
Who, resisting or not, lets you do as you will,
with bathing and feeding, the long day to fill....

Is that what you´re thinking?
Is that what you see?
Then open your eyes, nurse;
you´re not looking at me

I´ll tell you who I am
as I sit here so still,
as I do at your bidding,
as I eat at your will.

I´m a small child of ten ..
with a father and mother,
brothers and sisters,
who love one another

A young girl of sixteen,
with wings on her feet,
dreaming that soon now
a lover she´ll meet.

A bride soon at twenty --
my heart gives a leap,
remembering the vows
that I promised to keep.

At twenty-five now,
I have young of my own,
who need me to guide
and a secure happy home.

A woman of thirty,
my young now grown fast,
bound to each other
with ties that should last.

At forty, my young sons
have grown and are gone,
but my man´s beside me
to see I don´t mourn.

At fifty once more,
babies play round my knee,
again we know children,
my loved one and me.

Dark days are upon me,
my husband is dead;
I look at the future,
I shudder with dread.

For my young are all rearing
young of their own,
and I think of the years
and the love that I´ve known.

I´m now an old woman ..
and nature is cruel;
´Tis jest to make old age
look like a fool.

The body, it crumbles,
grace and vigor depart,
there is now a stone
where I once had a heart.

But inside this old carcass
a young girl still dwells,
and now and again,
my battered heart swells.

I remember the joys,
I remember the pain,
and I´m loving and living
life over again.

I think of the years ....
all too few, gone too fast,
and accept the stark fact
that nothing can last.

So open your eyes, people,
open and see,
not a crabby old woman;
look closer ..see ME!!

Remember this poem when you next meet an old person
who you might brush aside without looking at the young soul
within....
We will one day be there, too!

***PLEASE SHARE THIS POEM.........ITS SOMETHING WE ALL
NEED
~Marianne~
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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Oh yes, this is lovely, I remember reading it when i was a young trainee.. very touching
syzygy
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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how very sweet and sad, and how very true...
syzygy
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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hi marianne!!
Spiritual Freedom
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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Good Morning. I have never seen this but sure can relate. They say inside every old person is a young person wondering what the hell happened.
So true.
~Marianne~
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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hi syzygy.. Hi SF...

I have always loved that poem, it touched me deeply and made me very aware when i was with my patients
patient
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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im forty but feel that old. thanks.
the thinker
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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That Poem was so beautiful and we all should remember our turn shall come too if we live to get old. Inside their feeble, worn out bodies is truly an eternal soul that feels and does sees those years that went by. I know a 90 year old man who can tell you clearly his past. Getting old only means a person is getting closer to their next dimension, their next journey. A journey we all will one day take too.
Faydra.
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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The real person is not a tangible thing.

I just pray that I die before my husband (or kids). I don´t want to face that pain.
an old woman
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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truth is you won´t remeber it until you are old and there. sad because if you would understand it now than you would never be there.
I write this in the hope that maybe just one would than there might be hope for change.
Think the op does but forgot the name. Sorry i am old.
Anonymous Coward
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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Ah yes spirtual freedom. yes indeed it is yours. thanks for sharing flower
peace to the planet
Spiritual Freedom
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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Bumping for evening GLPer´s.
Omega Pointed
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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Thanks for the bump S-F.
Grease!
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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Whoa, that is one of the most amazing things I´ve ever read. Whew, drying tears now. Might should put a warning to grab some tissues in the title, lol.
neti
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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Yes.... This one should be bumped....




There are eyes behind every countenance..


.. a sensitive nature inside...


I care about what you think and feel.. other!
Spiritual Freedom
12/08/2005 10:09 AM
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We are all important to the creator who does not want to lose a single one of us to his opponent.





GLP