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Message Subject Illogical ramblings courtesy of sleep deprivation.
Poster Handle muckuh
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Insomnia rages as sleepless eyes read the computer screen. The hours spent awake have now surpassed the 24 hour mark. What keeps the avid computer user stimulated into the early morning hours?

Anticipation for tomorrows events fills me with anxiety. I have some tasks to complete but have forgotten what they are.

Regret will be the hallmark of the new day that is but a few hours away. A day defined by failure and bitter disappointment.
 Quoting: ghostly screams


THIS IS VERY GOOD..JUST HAVE TO CHANGE THE FORMAT.
 Quoting: muckuh


Hi Muckuh...uh...how would one go about changing the format?
 Quoting: ghostly screams


WHAT I MEAN IS RE-WRITE IT IN A POEM PAGE STYLE ..LIKE WALT WHITMAN DID. PULL JUS' A COUPLE UN-NECESSARY WORDS..I ALMOST DID THIS FOR YOU THIS MORNING...I'LL START IT HERE NOW


INSOMNIA RAGES AS SLEEPLESS EYES
READ THE COMPUTER SCREEN
HOURS SPENT AWAKE..HAVE NOW
SURPASSED THE 24-HR MARK

WHAT KEEPS THE AVID COMPUTER USER
STIMULATED...INTO THE EARLY HOURS?

ANTICIPATION..FOR TOMMORROWS EVENTS
FILL ME WITH ANXIETY
I HAVE 'TASKS' TO COMPLETE
BUT..FORGOTTEN WHAT THEY ARE.

REGRET....
WILL BE THE 'HALLMARK'..
OF THE NEW DAY.. THAT
IS BUT HOURS AWAY
A DAY
DEFINED BY FAILURE
AND BITTER REGRET


BETTER THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD TURN OUT
NOT SURE IF 'YOU' WANT 'DETERMIND' RATHER THAN 'DEFINED'
DETERMINED IS MORE FATALISTIC..AND 'KNOWN' IN POETRY AND
PHILOSOPHY CAPS.
 Quoting: muckuh


ONE LAST SUGGESTION..IS TO START THE LINE 'I HAVE 'TASKS'
TO ..HAVE 'TASKS' TO COMPLETE THE 'FAILURE' OF THE AUTHOR TO FORM OR PERFORM A PROPER SENTANCE..'CONVEYS'..A MORE HAUNTING OR HAUNTED 'EXPERIENCE'..HE KNOWS IT SHOLD START WITH AN 'I' BUT...JUST 'WONT' DO IT...
 
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