WHAT I MEAN IS RE-WRITE IT IN A POEM PAGE STYLE ..LIKE WALT WHITMAN DID. PULL JUS' A COUPLE UN-NECESSARY WORDS..I ALMOST DID THIS FOR YOU THIS MORNING...I'LL START IT HERE NOW


INSOMNIA RAGES AS SLEEPLESS EYES
READ THE COMPUTER SCREEN
HOURS SPENT AWAKE..HAVE NOW
SURPASSED THE 24-HR MARK

WHAT KEEPS THE AVID COMPUTER USER
STIMULATED...INTO THE EARLY HOURS?

ANTICIPATION..FOR TOMMORROWS EVENTS
FILL ME WITH ANXIETY
I HAVE 'TASKS' TO COMPLETE
BUT..FORGOTTEN WHAT THEY ARE.

REGRET....
WILL BE THE 'HALLMARK'..
OF THE NEW DAY.. THAT
IS BUT HOURS AWAY
A DAY
DEFINED BY FAILURE
AND BITTER REGRET


BETTER THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD TURN OUT
NOT SURE IF 'YOU' WANT 'DETERMIND' RATHER THAN 'DEFINED'
DETERMINED IS MORE FATALISTIC..AND 'KNOWN' IN POETRY AND
PHILOSOPHY CAPS.