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REPORT ABUSIVE REPLY
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Message Subject
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Illogical ramblings courtesy of sleep deprivation.
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LAST LINE----TWO ".." AFTER 'HAVE' REGARDING THE CAT...THE TINY DELAY..IN THOUGHT AND COGNITION..CONVEYS BOTH THE SUFFERING OF THE SUBJECT 'AND' THE CAT..PERHAPS THE CAT ALSO..'IS NOT/NEVER(?) "RELEVIED".....????
Quoting: muckuh CALL ME CRAZY BUT I THINK THAT THESE TWO LIL '..' ARE PIVOTAL. IT 'OPENS' THE ENDING OF THE POEM TO MORE 'EXPLORATION'...OF A VERY POSSIBLE 'TRUE TRAGEDY' HERE DOES THE CAT DIE!? ............ OR...DOES THE CAT GET LET IN...LATER.....? HOURS LATER?..... DOES SLEEP 'TAKE HIM'?.........AT THAT MOMENT? THE "READER" THE ULTIMATE "RECEIVER" OF THIS 'HORROR-SHOW' IS LEFT UNCOMFORTABLE UPON LEAVING THE PAGE....AS THEY DAMM WELL SHOULD BE! THE FINAL TINY 'TOUCH UP' IS TO PUT 2 ADDITIONAL BLANK SPACES AFTER THE WORD 'PILLOW.' 'THAT' CONVEYS THAT HE DID FOR A FUCKING MICRO-MILLI-SECOND ABSORB SLEEP BUT, THE MIND OVER-RIDES IT WITH A SUDDEN "I" 'DECLINE' THE....SHOWING 'LIFE'..IN THE SUBJECT. ....AND..IM SPENT! "THANK YOU" FOR THE POEM OP...
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