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General Thade User ID: 41996781 United States 03/28/2021 04:05 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | |
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muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:08 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | An aching neck begs to be laid down upon a soft pillow. I decline the body parts request. After all, this is no time to be taking it "easy". There is serious work at hand. I have to let the cat inside. Quoting: ghostly screams Plus I'll need to make a few more posts on the forum. Words incoherently pieced together convey a message of confusion. Weird communications intended only for the insane. I DID NOT SEE THIS...CONTINUATION...WITH THIS INCLUDED IT WILL BE A FULLY FORMED POEM. I'LL LET YOU FINISH 'YOUR' WORK. JUS' REMOVE SOME VERBAGE AS ABOVE TO CONVEY AND EXASERABATE EVEN MORE THE 'SUFFERING' OF THAT WHO HATH 'PENNED' IT.. ..ACHING NECK 'BEGS'.. TO BE LAID UPON 'SOFT' PILLOW. I 'DECLINE' THE BODY 'REQUEST' ..S'IS NO TIME..TO BE TAKING IT "EASY". ..SERIOUS WORK AT HAND....I.. HAVE TO LET THE CAT IN AND...'YOU' TELL 'US' OP...IS 'YOUR' POEM FINISHED HERE? muckuh |
muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:08 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Insomnia rages as sleepless eyes read the computer screen. The hours spent awake have now surpassed the 24 hour mark. What keeps the avid computer user stimulated into the early morning hours? Quoting: ghostly screams Anticipation for tomorrows events fills me with anxiety. I have some tasks to complete but have forgotten what they are. Regret will be the hallmark of the new day that is but a few hours away. A day defined by failure and bitter disappointment. THIS IS VERY GOOD..JUST HAVE TO CHANGE THE FORMAT. Hi Muckuh...uh...how would one go about changing the format? WHAT I MEAN IS RE-WRITE IT IN A POEM PAGE STYLE ..LIKE WALT WHITMAN DID. PULL JUS' A COUPLE UN-NECESSARY WORDS..I ALMOST DID THIS FOR YOU THIS MORNING...I'LL START IT HERE NOW INSOMNIA RAGES AS SLEEPLESS EYES READ THE COMPUTER SCREEN HOURS SPENT AWAKE..HAVE NOW SURPASSED THE 24-HR MARK WHAT KEEPS THE AVID COMPUTER USER STIMULATED...INTO THE EARLY HOURS? ANTICIPATION..FOR TOMMORROWS EVENTS FILL ME WITH ANXIETY I HAVE 'TASKS' TO COMPLETE BUT..FORGOTTEN WHAT THEY ARE. REGRET.... WILL BE THE 'HALLMARK'.. OF THE NEW DAY.. THAT IS BUT HOURS AWAY A DAY DEFINED BY FAILURE AND BITTER REGRET BETTER THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD TURN OUT NOT SURE IF 'YOU' WANT 'DETERMIND' RATHER THAN 'DEFINED' DETERMINED IS MORE FATALISTIC..AND 'KNOWN' IN POETRY AND PHILOSOPHY CAPS. muckuh |
muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:09 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | WHAT I MEAN IS RE-WRITE IT IN A POEM PAGE STYLE ..LIKE WALT WHITMAN DID. PULL JUS' A COUPLE UN-NECESSARY WORDS..I ALMOST DID THIS FOR YOU THIS MORNING...I'LL START IT HERE NOW INSOMNIA RAGES AS SLEEPLESS EYES READ THE COMPUTER SCREEN HOURS SPENT AWAKE..HAVE NOW SURPASSED THE 24-HR MARK WHAT KEEPS THE AVID COMPUTER USER STIMULATED...INTO THE EARLY HOURS? ANTICIPATION..FOR TOMMORROWS EVENTS FILL ME WITH ANXIETY I HAVE 'TASKS' TO COMPLETE BUT..FORGOTTEN WHAT THEY ARE. REGRET.... WILL BE THE 'HALLMARK'.. OF THE NEW DAY.. THAT IS BUT HOURS AWAY A DAY DEFINED BY FAILURE AND BITTER REGRET BETTER THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD TURN OUT NOT SURE IF 'YOU' WANT 'DETERMIND' RATHER THAN 'DEFINED' DETERMINED IS MORE FATALISTIC..AND 'KNOWN' IN POETRY AND PHILOSOPHY CAPS. ONE LAST SUGGESTION..IS TO START THE LINE 'I HAVE 'TASKS' TO ..HAVE 'TASKS' TO COMPLETE THE 'FAILURE' OF THE AUTHOR TO FORM OR PERFORM A PROPER SENTANCE..'CONVEYS'..A MORE HAUNTING OR HAUNTED 'EXPERIENCE'..HE KNOWS IT SHOLD START WITH AN 'I' BUT...JUST 'WONT' DO IT... muckuh |
muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:09 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | WHAT I MEAN IS RE-WRITE IT IN A POEM PAGE STYLE ..LIKE WALT WHITMAN DID. PULL JUS' A COUPLE UN-NECESSARY WORDS..I ALMOST DID THIS FOR YOU THIS MORNING...I'LL START IT HERE NOW INSOMNIA RAGES AS SLEEPLESS EYES READ THE COMPUTER SCREEN HOURS SPENT AWAKE..HAVE NOW SURPASSED THE 24-HR MARK WHAT KEEPS THE AVID COMPUTER USER STIMULATED...INTO THE EARLY HOURS? ANTICIPATION..FOR TOMMORROWS EVENTS FILL ME WITH ANXIETY I HAVE 'TASKS' TO COMPLETE BUT..FORGOTTEN WHAT THEY ARE. REGRET.... WILL BE THE 'HALLMARK'.. OF THE NEW DAY.. THAT IS BUT HOURS AWAY A DAY DEFINED BY FAILURE AND BITTER REGRET BETTER THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD TURN OUT NOT SURE IF 'YOU' WANT 'DETERMIND' RATHER THAN 'DEFINED' DETERMINED IS MORE FATALISTIC..AND 'KNOWN' IN POETRY AND PHILOSOPHY CAPS. ONE LAST SUGGESTION..IS TO START THE LINE 'I HAVE 'TASKS' TO ..HAVE 'TASKS' TO COMPLETE THE 'FAILURE' OF THE AUTHOR TO FORM OR PERFORM A PROPER SENTANCE..'CONVEYS'..A MORE HAUNTING OR HAUNTED 'EXPERIENCE'..HE KNOWS IT SHOLD START WITH AN 'I' BUT...JUST 'WONT' DO IT... THIS IS REALLY A SORT OF SWEET "AND" TORTURED CONTEMPORARY POEM. I BELIEVE IT FITS THE 'DEFINITION' OF A POEM. IT SHOULD BE CENTERED ON THE PAGE. PERFECTLY. NOT IN LETTER FORMAT. CAPPY. muckuh |
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muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:10 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | An aching neck begs to be laid down upon a soft pillow. I decline the body parts request. After all, this is no time to be taking it "easy". There is serious work at hand. I have to let the cat inside. Quoting: ghostly screams Plus I'll need to make a few more posts on the forum. Words incoherently pieced together convey a message of confusion. Weird communications intended only for the insane. I DID NOT SEE THIS...CONTINUATION...WITH THIS INCLUDED IT WILL BE A FULLY FORMED POEM. I'LL LET YOU FINISH 'YOUR' WORK. JUS' REMOVE SOME VERBAGE AS ABOVE TO CONVEY AND EXASERABATE EVEN MORE THE 'SUFFERING' OF THAT WHO HATH 'PENNED' IT.. muckuh |
muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:11 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | An aching neck begs to be laid down upon a soft pillow. I decline the body parts request. After all, this is no time to be taking it "easy". There is serious work at hand. I have to let the cat inside. Quoting: ghostly screams Plus I'll need to make a few more posts on the forum. Words incoherently pieced together convey a message of confusion. Weird communications intended only for the insane. I DID NOT SEE THIS...CONTINUATION...WITH THIS INCLUDED IT WILL BE A FULLY FORMED POEM. I'LL LET YOU FINISH 'YOUR' WORK. JUS' REMOVE SOME VERBAGE AS ABOVE TO CONVEY AND EXASERABATE EVEN MORE THE 'SUFFERING' OF THAT WHO HATH 'PENNED' IT.. ..ACHING NECK 'BEGS'.. TO BE LAID UPON 'SOFT' PILLOW. I 'DECLINE' THE BODY 'REQUEST' ..S'IS NO TIME..TO BE TAKING IT "EASY". ..SERIOUS WORK AT HAND....I.. HAVE TO LET THE CAT IN AND...'YOU' TELL 'US' OP...IS 'YOUR' POEM FINISHED HERE? muckuh |
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ghostly screams (OP) User ID: 76079870 United States 03/28/2021 04:12 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Insomnia rages as sleepless eyes read the computer screen. The hours spent awake have now surpassed the 24 hour mark. What keeps the avid computer user stimulated into the early morning hours? Quoting: ghostly screams Anticipation for tomorrows events fills me with anxiety. I have some tasks to complete but have forgotten what they are. Regret will be the hallmark of the new day that is but a few hours away. A day defined by failure and bitter disappointment. THIS IS VERY GOOD..JUST HAVE TO CHANGE THE FORMAT. Hi Muckuh...uh...how would one go about changing the format? WHAT I MEAN IS RE-WRITE IT IN A POEM PAGE STYLE ..LIKE WALT WHITMAN DID. PULL JUS' A COUPLE UN-NECESSARY WORDS..I ALMOST DID THIS FOR YOU THIS MORNING...I'LL START IT HERE NOW INSOMNIA RAGES AS SLEEPLESS EYES READ THE COMPUTER SCREEN HOURS SPENT AWAKE..HAVE NOW SURPASSED THE 24-HR MARK WHAT KEEPS THE AVID COMPUTER USER STIMULATED...INTO THE EARLY HOURS? ANTICIPATION..FOR TOMMORROWS EVENTS FILL ME WITH ANXIETY I HAVE 'TASKS' TO COMPLETE BUT..FORGOTTEN WHAT THEY ARE. REGRET.... WILL BE THE 'HALLMARK'.. OF THE NEW DAY.. THAT IS BUT HOURS AWAY A DAY DEFINED BY FAILURE AND BITTER REGRET BETTER THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD TURN OUT NOT SURE IF 'YOU' WANT 'DETERMIND' RATHER THAN 'DEFINED' DETERMINED IS MORE FATALISTIC..AND 'KNOWN' IN POETRY AND PHILOSOPHY CAPS. I believe that 'DETERMINED' works especially well. Nice bro! ghostly screams |
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ghostly screams (OP) User ID: 76079870 United States 03/28/2021 04:18 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | THIS IS OLD HAT HERE BUT, I WRESTLED NEIL PEARTS 1ST COUSIN 3 TIMES IN HIGH SCHOOL....HE NEVER WON. UH. TROLLS!..YES, THEY'RE 'ALL' NECESSARY BUMPS. EVEN THIS ONE. Bumps give this thread the life it has been begging to experience. Let us collectively fashion this thread into the Frankenstein monster of a literary offering for all to read. ghostly screams |
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muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:24 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | THIS IS OLD HAT HERE BUT, I WRESTLED NEIL PEARTS 1ST COUSIN 3 TIMES IN HIGH SCHOOL....HE NEVER WON. UH. TROLLS!..YES, THEY'RE 'ALL' NECESSARY BUMPS. EVEN THIS ONE. Bumps give this thread the life it has been begging to experience. Let us collectively fashion this thread into the Frankenstein monster of a literary offering for all to read. SO MOTE IT BE OP...IF,...IF..IT IS FINISHED. I THINK IT FLIES BUT, YOU STATED SOME OTHER STUFF AFTER THE CAT LINE. YOU 'MAY' WANT TO DREDGE BACK INTO IT...OR 'NOT' YOUR CALL! muckuh |
muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:26 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | LAST LINE----TWO ".." AFTER 'HAVE' REGARDING THE CAT...THE TINY DELAY..IN THOUGHT AND COGNITION..CONVEYS BOTH THE SUFFERING OF THE SUBJECT 'AND' THE CAT..PERHAPS THE CAT ALSO..'IS NOT/NEVER(?) "RELEVIED".....???? Quoting: muckuh CALL ME CRAZY BUT I THINK THAT THESE TWO LIL '..' ARE PIVOTAL. IT 'OPENS' THE ENDING OF THE POEM TO MORE 'EXPLORATION'...OF A VERY POSSIBLE 'TRUE TRAGEDY' HERE DOES THE CAT DIE!? ............ muckuh |
ghostly screams (OP) User ID: 76079870 United States 03/28/2021 04:31 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | OP..YOUR "CHARACTER" IS INDEED TORTURED...SO, YOU 'NEED' TO TORTURE HIM 'ON THE PAGE'. HE DESERVE IT. AND, IT'S THE ONLY WAY TO GET IT OUT. IF YOU GET A CHANCE..RUN THIS BY FOSSY. CAPS. Quoting: muckuh I will regard this character as the embodiment of my guilty conscious and flagellate the ever living shit out of this miserable thing that insists to exist. It's suffrage will be biblical. ghostly screams |
muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:33 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | LAST LINE----TWO ".." AFTER 'HAVE' REGARDING THE CAT...THE TINY DELAY..IN THOUGHT AND COGNITION..CONVEYS BOTH THE SUFFERING OF THE SUBJECT 'AND' THE CAT..PERHAPS THE CAT ALSO..'IS NOT/NEVER(?) "RELEVIED".....???? Quoting: muckuh CALL ME CRAZY BUT I THINK THAT THESE TWO LIL '..' ARE PIVOTAL. IT 'OPENS' THE ENDING OF THE POEM TO MORE 'EXPLORATION'...OF A VERY POSSIBLE 'TRUE TRAGEDY' HERE DOES THE CAT DIE!? ............ OR...DOES THE CAT GET LET IN...LATER.....? HOURS LATER?..... DOES SLEEP 'TAKE HIM'?.........AT THAT MOMENT? THE "READER" THE ULTIMATE "RECEIVER" OF THIS 'HORROR-SHOW' IS LEFT UNCOMFORTABLE UPON LEAVING THE PAGE....AS THEY DAMM WELL SHOULD BE! THE FINAL TINY 'TOUCH UP' IS TO PUT 2 ADDITIONAL BLANK SPACES AFTER THE WORD 'PILLOW.' 'THAT' CONVEYS THAT HE DID FOR A FUCKING MICRO-MILLI-SECOND ABSORB SLEEP BUT, THE MIND OVER-RIDES IT WITH A SUDDEN "I" 'DECLINE' THE....SHOWING 'LIFE'..IN THE SUBJECT. ....AND..IM SPENT! "THANK YOU" FOR THE POEM OP... muckuh |
muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:35 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | OP..YOUR "CHARACTER" IS INDEED TORTURED...SO, YOU 'NEED' TO TORTURE HIM 'ON THE PAGE'. HE DESERVE IT. AND, IT'S THE ONLY WAY TO GET IT OUT. IF YOU GET A CHANCE..RUN THIS BY FOSSY. CAPS. Quoting: muckuh I will regard this character as the embodiment of my guilty conscious and flagellate the ever living shit out of this miserable thing that insists to exist. It's suffrage will be biblical. ..AND ISN'T IT 'IRONIC'.. GHOSTLY SCREAMS, THAT YOU WILL DO THIS..IN ORDER...TO FEEL BETTER?!... muckuh |
ghostly screams (OP) User ID: 76079870 United States 03/28/2021 04:38 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | LAST LINE----TWO ".." AFTER 'HAVE' REGARDING THE CAT...THE TINY DELAY..IN THOUGHT AND COGNITION..CONVEYS BOTH THE SUFFERING OF THE SUBJECT 'AND' THE CAT..PERHAPS THE CAT ALSO..'IS NOT/NEVER(?) "RELEVIED".....???? Quoting: muckuh CALL ME CRAZY BUT I THINK THAT THESE TWO LIL '..' ARE PIVOTAL. IT 'OPENS' THE ENDING OF THE POEM TO MORE 'EXPLORATION'...OF A VERY POSSIBLE 'TRUE TRAGEDY' HERE DOES THE CAT DIE!? ............ No, the cat is alive and well and its whole purpose of existing in the literary work is to be regarded as an important task to be attended to despite being a rather menial task that should not receive the build up that it gets. ghostly screams |
muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:39 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | WE OFFICIALLY PAST THE EXACT MOMENT AT 250PM EST..SO, WE MAY START TO FEEL BETTER SHOON. HOWEVER, THE SUPER-PERIGEE FULL MOON CONTINUES TO GET CLOSER TO 'US' FOR AN ADDITIONAL 33 HRS!...GRAVITY PULLS ON THE TIDES AND...ON OUR BLOOD.. IN OUR BODIES... muckuh |
muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:41 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | LAST LINE----TWO ".." AFTER 'HAVE' REGARDING THE CAT...THE TINY DELAY..IN THOUGHT AND COGNITION..CONVEYS BOTH THE SUFFERING OF THE SUBJECT 'AND' THE CAT..PERHAPS THE CAT ALSO..'IS NOT/NEVER(?) "RELEVIED".....???? Quoting: muckuh CALL ME CRAZY BUT I THINK THAT THESE TWO LIL '..' ARE PIVOTAL. IT 'OPENS' THE ENDING OF THE POEM TO MORE 'EXPLORATION'...OF A VERY POSSIBLE 'TRUE TRAGEDY' HERE DOES THE CAT DIE!? ............ No, the cat is alive and well and its whole purpose of existing in the literary work is to be regarded as an important task to be attended to despite being a rather menial task that should not receive the build up that it gets. THEN 'NIX' THE TWO DOTS. IT 'WILL' MAKE THE READER FEEL BETTER..ABOUT THE CAT AND THE SUBJECT. IT SHOWS HIS.. "DETERMINISM" TO ENACT WITH VOLITION...TO 'DO' THE 'RIGHT' THING..AND THUS, HE'S HUMAN LIKE US AND A 'GOOD' PERSON.. REGARDLESS OF BEING TORTURED 'AT THE MOMENT'. HAPPY ENDING. muckuh |
ghostly screams (OP) User ID: 76079870 United States 03/28/2021 04:42 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | OP..YOUR "CHARACTER" IS INDEED TORTURED...SO, YOU 'NEED' TO TORTURE HIM 'ON THE PAGE'. HE DESERVE IT. AND, IT'S THE ONLY WAY TO GET IT OUT. IF YOU GET A CHANCE..RUN THIS BY FOSSY. CAPS. Quoting: muckuh I will regard this character as the embodiment of my guilty conscious and flagellate the ever living shit out of this miserable thing that insists to exist. It's suffrage will be biblical. ..AND ISN'T IT 'IRONIC'.. GHOSTLY SCREAMS, THAT YOU WILL DO THIS..IN ORDER...TO FEEL BETTER?!... It feels as if I am creating an existence where I am no longer this earth bound self, but instead my higher self, intimately connected to the source. ghostly screams |
ACME_MAN User ID: 24352866 United States 03/28/2021 04:43 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Obviously more than a few sleep deprived people here at the GLP forum. ; ) Dedicated to the brave men who fought and laid down their lives on the beaches of Normandy and the plains of Europe . . . that their sacrifice was not in vain. [link to www.youtube.com (secure)] |
ghostly screams (OP) User ID: 76079870 United States 03/28/2021 04:48 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | |
ghostly screams (OP) User ID: 76079870 United States 03/28/2021 04:53 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | It's as if a collection of complete strangers are psychically connected with the inability to make sound and rational decisions. Hence, why there are more than a few of us delving into the same sleep deprived state of mind. ghostly screams |
muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:55 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | OP..YOUR "CHARACTER" IS INDEED TORTURED...SO, YOU 'NEED' TO TORTURE HIM 'ON THE PAGE'. HE DESERVE IT. AND, IT'S THE ONLY WAY TO GET IT OUT. IF YOU GET A CHANCE..RUN THIS BY FOSSY. CAPS. Quoting: muckuh I will regard this character as the embodiment of my guilty conscious and flagellate the ever living shit out of this miserable thing that insists to exist. It's suffrage will be biblical. ..AND ISN'T IT 'IRONIC'.. GHOSTLY SCREAMS, THAT YOU WILL DO THIS..IN ORDER...TO FEEL BETTER?!... It feels as if I am creating an existence where I am no longer this earth bound self, but instead my higher self, intimately connected to the source. YOU DONT WANT TO GO TO RE-HAB FOR INSOMNIA DUDE...NOT AGAIN. REMEMBER..'FIGHT CLUB'? muckuh |
muckuh User ID: 74825314 United States 03/28/2021 04:57 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | WE OFFICIALLY PAST THE EXACT MOMENT AT 250PM EST..SO, WE MAY START TO FEEL BETTER SHOON. HOWEVER, THE SUPER-PERIGEE FULL MOON CONTINUES TO GET CLOSER TO 'US' FOR AN ADDITIONAL 33 HRS!...GRAVITY PULLS ON THE TIDES AND...ON OUR BLOOD.. IN OUR BODIES... ONE MOAR DAY-ISH..FOR SOME OF US......SOME OF US..SOME OF US.... muckuh |
ghostly screams (OP) User ID: 76079870 United States 03/28/2021 04:57 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | WE OFFICIALLY PAST THE EXACT MOMENT AT 250PM EST..SO, WE MAY START TO FEEL BETTER SHOON. HOWEVER, THE SUPER-PERIGEE FULL MOON CONTINUES TO GET CLOSER TO 'US' FOR AN ADDITIONAL 33 HRS!...GRAVITY PULLS ON THE TIDES AND...ON OUR BLOOD.. IN OUR BODIES... May this lunar cycle facilitate the absolute lunacy needed to empower the lunatic fringe. ghostly screams |