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Oooh dark sensing, talent! Wh... what about me?
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You really want me to tell you here? LOL
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Come through this creaky old door and we can speak in private, don't mind the poor lighting it's a very small room - the candles are sufficient. Oh that strange musty smell? Something from... another time. It's fine.
 Quoting: Ty_


frankincense is what you smell. I've been burning it all day :)
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:)

Hmm, I might burn the midday oil. Also MOAR COFFEE!
Coz reasons, probably.
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You really want me to tell you here? LOL
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Come through this creaky old door and we can speak in private, don't mind the poor lighting it's a very small room - the candles are sufficient. Oh that strange musty smell? Something from... another time. It's fine.
 Quoting: Ty_


frankincense is what you smell. I've been burning it all day :)
 Quoting: Green Witch


:)

Hmm, I might burn the midday oil. Also MOAR COFFEE!
 Quoting: Ty_


Yes! Moar Coffee!

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Sorry, really distracted atm. :)
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Did you finally get those bondage restraints from Adam & Eve...?

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Water, Bread, Meat, the shelf-able kinds.

Got string already, and lots of medicle... Oh! Bondage...

hmm

I should get some candy
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Excellent choice, Glax! I’m proud of ya, buddy.

Candy Charms is a big jump for you!

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lol
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I'm almost curious enough to google that. Almost. My spidey sense tells me I won't like the result, nor the imaginings my mind will come up with afterward.
 Quoting: Ty_


uh...

Well this is awkward, cause I am pretty sure I know.
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I'm almost curious enough to google that. Almost. My spidey sense tells me I won't like the result, nor the imaginings my mind will come up with afterward.
 Quoting: Ty_


uh...

Well this is awkward, cause I am pretty sure I know.
 Quoting: Glaxnor


chuckle
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Ty.... serious question...

Have you considered illustrating children’s books as a side gig?

You have a talent for it. Why not monetize it?

.....think of all the frankincense you could buy.

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It gives you the illusion of freedom,
makes you trust, love, and defend your oppressor,
while making an enemy of those
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“You have been programmed to resist the very person that is here to set you free, from the prison of your Mind... You are not free... everything you are has been manufactured by Minds that have not your best interest. You are imprisoned by beliefs and not reality. Religions are mental programs to imprison your Mind.”

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I'm almost curious enough to google that. Almost. My spidey sense tells me I won't like the result, nor the imaginings my mind will come up with afterward.
 Quoting: Ty_


uh...

Well this is awkward, cause I am pretty sure I know.
 Quoting: Glaxnor


chuckle
 Quoting: Green Witch


chuckle
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Ty.... serious question...

Have you considered illustrating children’s books as a side gig?

You have a talent for it. Why not monetize it?

.....think of all the frankincense you could buy.

.
 Quoting: Zovalex


Essential oils aside, he could make some serious money with his drawings.
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I should get some candy
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I'm almost curious enough to google that. Almost. My spidey sense tells me I won't like the result, nor the imaginings my mind will come up with afterward.
 Quoting: Ty_


uh...

Well this is awkward, cause I am pretty sure I know.
 Quoting: Glaxnor


Some things are better left ungoogled.
Coz reasons, probably.
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I should get some candy
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Poor Mongo. He only pawn in game of life.
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Ty.... serious question...

Have you considered illustrating children’s books as a side gig?

You have a talent for it. Why not monetize it?

.....think of all the frankincense you could buy.

.
 Quoting: Zovalex


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He is very talented.
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I'm almost curious enough to google that. Almost. My spidey sense tells me I won't like the result, nor the imaginings my mind will come up with afterward.
 Quoting: Ty_


uh...

Well this is awkward, cause I am pretty sure I know.
 Quoting: Glaxnor


Some things are better left ungoogled.
 Quoting: Ty_


chuckle
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Ty.... serious question...

Have you considered illustrating children’s books as a side gig?

You have a talent for it. Why not monetize it?

.....think of all the frankincense you could buy.

.
 Quoting: Zovalex


Essential oils aside, he could make some serious money with his drawings.
 Quoting: Green Witch


That actually is the plan. I have a childrens story written already, but the one I have in mind is not yet written.
Simple, as it should be but with a solid message.

The basic idea is about being yourself, not settling, we all have things we like and should pursue them; no matter what others say, etc. Might sound generic, but I don't think so - not the way I have in mind.

That would be a once off tale; other to that there's the one I have written already that has limitless 'adventures' outside the basic elements...
Coz reasons, probably.
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Ty.... serious question...

Have you considered illustrating children’s books as a side gig?

You have a talent for it. Why not monetize it?

.....think of all the frankincense you could buy.

.
 Quoting: Zovalex


Wait, really?

Cause I would totally be interested in working with a children's illustrator. Serious Ty, not a joke.
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https://imgur.com/rmOPaeB


He is very talented.
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https://imgur.com/whnWeE6


:O Praise!
Thanks :)

hf
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https://imgur.com/rmOPaeB


He is very talented.
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https://imgur.com/whnWeE6


:O Praise!
Thanks :)

hf
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I have another request if you want a challenge ;)
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Ty.... serious question...

Have you considered illustrating children’s books as a side gig?

You have a talent for it. Why not monetize it?

.....think of all the frankincense you could buy.

.
 Quoting: Zovalex


Wait, really?

Cause I would totally be interested in working with a children's illustrator. Serious Ty, not a joke.
 Quoting: Glaxnor


Well, the first one must be a solo project.
That may sound selfish, but I need it to be. Self worth prove to self thing.

That aside; there's quite a little crew of talented writers/creative minds congregating here...

Haven't posted this anywhere for quite a while now, so here it is again. (not part of a planned childrens story, altho...)


Mother bird felt it was time;
So three birds were helped out of the nest.
The birds all went down in free fall,
They squawked and spun around out of control.
Then one bird began to instinctively flap,
Then another, then another,
Still the ground approached rapidly.

Mother bird sat in the nest, not even watching the falling birds.
Father bird flew down behind them, screaming "Fly you fools! FLY!"

One bird heard him from his right ear,
This bird struggled and barely slowed his descent.
His vision became red as blood, and he raged,
"Why Mother? I hate you for doing this!"

One bird heard him from his left ear,
This bird struggled but felt the wind beneath his wings,
His vision had been red, but lifting slightly, it softened to pink.
"Oh Mother, I love you! I'm coming back Mother!"

The third bird heard him so loudly he couldn't focus,
His brothers either side screaming confused him even further,
He couldn't think, he couldn't understand anything anymore,
He could see the ground approaching, and screamed in defiance,
All of his senses, his entire being were overloaded - except his Will.

This third bird flapped so hard he forgot he was doing it,
He flew so hard and straight up, that his vision became black.
In his blacked out state, seeing nothing, he stopped.
For a single moment, he didn't move in any direction or see anything.

As his vision restored he saw only pure white around him,
Then the white swirled, he saw it was clouds and fell through.
Then he saw the nest, he saw his brothers, he saw, everything else;
All the things that he never knew about, an unexplored infinity of possibilities.

This bird flapped, not too hard, not too slow,
Not only his left wing, not only his right,
This new bird flew calmly, with majesty, as great eagles do.

He missed his Mother, he would return to visit sometime,
He knew there wouldn't be room, Mother would have more babes to raise,
But he would visit, after he built a new nest – his way.


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I have another request if you want a challenge ;)
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All challenge(r)s accepted. ;P

Uhm, yeah - I am going to scribble down some words at some point so it may not be a today thing. Go ahead, I need all the remembering how and practice I can get.
Coz reasons, probably.
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I have another request if you want a challenge ;)
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All challenge(r)s accepted. ;P

Uhm, yeah - I am going to scribble down some words at some point so it may not be a today thing. Go ahead, I need all the remembering how and practice I can get.
 Quoting: Ty_


It's not a cartoon person this time. It's a symbol. Two serpents intertwined around a tree. Think of the Tree in kabbala. Both Serpents are green with glowing red eyes. One has it's fangs bared. There is a full moon in the sky with exactly 6 stars around the moon in a half circle. The moon is above the tree. The Serpents tails are touching each other and the heads are directly across from each other.
There are more details but I have to look.
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what do think all you people will do

when Christ our Lord returns,

with the entire Heavenly Host
and all the tens of thousands of God's Sainted
with Him;


will you fall to your knees when you feel His awesome,
overwhelming vibes
of Love
and Light;

thinking of how you'll explain to Him your living choice,
so you can be with the Family of God for Eternity;

or will you deny Eternal happiness and a Celestial Body,

to spend whatever time God gives you, before Judgement is passed, with all the darkness left on Earth;


ask Christ into your life before it's too late


goodnews
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Really??

I forgive you for your closed heart.
before you judge us..you must first walk a mile in our shoes
hence... do not judge us, for you do not know us. Do not
judge our way of life, for you have never had to deal with
our way of life.
I forgive you.

I also respect that you will find the happiness that you
Search for on your Path..
working with Positive Thoughts will result in Positive Outcomes.
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Haven't posted this anywhere for quite a while now, so here it is again. (not part of a planned childrens story, altho...)


Mother bird felt it was time;
So three birds were helped out of the nest.
The birds all went down in free fall,
They squawked and spun around out of control.
Then one bird began to instinctively flap,
Then another, then another,
Still the ground approached rapidly.

Mother bird sat in the nest, not even watching the falling birds.
Father bird flew down behind them, screaming "Fly you fools! FLY!"

One bird heard him from his right ear,
This bird struggled and barely slowed his descent.
His vision became red as blood, and he raged,
"Why Mother? I hate you for doing this!"

One bird heard him from his left ear,
This bird struggled but felt the wind beneath his wings,
His vision had been red, but lifting slightly, it softened to pink.
"Oh Mother, I love you! I'm coming back Mother!"

The third bird heard him so loudly he couldn't focus,
His brothers either side screaming confused him even further,
He couldn't think, he couldn't understand anything anymore,
He could see the ground approaching, and screamed in defiance,
All of his senses, his entire being were overloaded - except his Will.

This third bird flapped so hard he forgot he was doing it,
He flew so hard and straight up, that his vision became black.
In his blacked out state, seeing nothing, he stopped.
For a single moment, he didn't move in any direction or see anything.

As his vision restored he saw only pure white around him,
Then the white swirled, he saw it was clouds and fell through.
Then he saw the nest, he saw his brothers, he saw, everything else;
All the things that he never knew about, an unexplored infinity of possibilities.

This bird flapped, not too hard, not too slow,
Not only his left wing, not only his right,
This new bird flew calmly, with majesty, as great eagles do.

He missed his Mother, he would return to visit sometime,
He knew there wouldn't be room, Mother would have more babes to raise,
But he would visit, after he built a new nest – his way.

 Quoting: Ty_



You don’t have kids, do you, Ty?

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It gives you the illusion of freedom,
makes you trust, love, and defend your oppressor,
while making an enemy of those
who are trying to free you or open your eyes.”
-Fiyah

“None are more hopelessly enslaved than those who falsely believe they are free.”
-Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

“You have been programmed to resist the very person that is here to set you free, from the prison of your Mind... You are not free... everything you are has been manufactured by Minds that have not your best interest. You are imprisoned by beliefs and not reality. Religions are mental programs to imprison your Mind.”

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Ty.... serious question...

Have you considered illustrating children’s books as a side gig?

You have a talent for it. Why not monetize it?

.....think of all the frankincense you could buy.

.
 Quoting: Zovalex


Wait, really?

Cause I would totally be interested in working with a children's illustrator. Serious Ty, not a joke.
 Quoting: Glaxnor


Well, the first one must be a solo project.
That may sound selfish, but I need it to be. Self worth prove to self thing.

That aside; there's quite a little crew of talented writers/creative minds congregating here...

Haven't posted this anywhere for quite a while now, so here it is again. (not part of a planned childrens story, altho...)


Mother bird felt it was time;
So three birds were helped out of the nest.
The birds all went down in free fall,
They squawked and spun around out of control.
Then one bird began to instinctively flap,
Then another, then another,
Still the ground approached rapidly.

Mother bird sat in the nest, not even watching the falling birds.
Father bird flew down behind them, screaming "Fly you fools! FLY!"

One bird heard him from his right ear,
This bird struggled and barely slowed his descent.
His vision became red as blood, and he raged,
"Why Mother? I hate you for doing this!"

One bird heard him from his left ear,
This bird struggled but felt the wind beneath his wings,
His vision had been red, but lifting slightly, it softened to pink.
"Oh Mother, I love you! I'm coming back Mother!"

The third bird heard him so loudly he couldn't focus,
His brothers either side screaming confused him even further,
He couldn't think, he couldn't understand anything anymore,
He could see the ground approaching, and screamed in defiance,
All of his senses, his entire being were overloaded - except his Will.

This third bird flapped so hard he forgot he was doing it,
He flew so hard and straight up, that his vision became black.
In his blacked out state, seeing nothing, he stopped.
For a single moment, he didn't move in any direction or see anything.

As his vision restored he saw only pure white around him,
Then the white swirled, he saw it was clouds and fell through.
Then he saw the nest, he saw his brothers, he saw, everything else;
All the things that he never knew about, an unexplored infinity of possibilities.

This bird flapped, not too hard, not too slow,
Not only his left wing, not only his right,
This new bird flew calmly, with majesty, as great eagles do.

He missed his Mother, he would return to visit sometime,
He knew there wouldn't be room, Mother would have more babes to raise,
But he would visit, after he built a new nest – his way.

 Quoting: Ty_


Absolutely understandable, but also don't forget everyone uses help. Publishing houses do tons of work to get a book to sell.

Saying you want to do it on your own is great, and it only makes me respect you more.

Just don't be afraid to ask for some help. I can give you some pointers to get your book as a best seller, and it doesn't necessarily involve changing your work. Just how you market it.

Same goes for everyone else, btw. This is not intended as exclusive. If I was being exclusive, I wouldn't post here.
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I have another request if you want a challenge ;)
 Quoting: Green Witch


All challenge(r)s accepted. ;P

Uhm, yeah - I am going to scribble down some words at some point so it may not be a today thing. Go ahead, I need all the remembering how and practice I can get.
 Quoting: Ty_


It's not a cartoon person this time. It's a symbol. Two serpents intertwined around a tree. Think of the Tree in kabbala. Both Serpents are green with glowing red eyes. One has it's fangs bared. There is a full moon in the sky with exactly 6 stars around the moon in a half circle. The moon is above the tree. The Serpents tails are touching each other and the heads are directly across from each other.
There are more details but I have to look.
 Quoting: Green Witch


I can give it a whirl, you'll need to get ssspeccific though.
Half circle around a full moon, half where? above, below, left, right?
Serpents head directly across - facing away or facing each other?

Reminds me of this that I did a while back, in part anyway.

(Eww blurry, click for non blurry.)

https://imgur.com/a/oc6xHVK


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I have another request if you want a challenge ;)
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All challenge(r)s accepted. ;P

Uhm, yeah - I am going to scribble down some words at some point so it may not be a today thing. Go ahead, I need all the remembering how and practice I can get.
 Quoting: Ty_


It's not a cartoon person this time. It's a symbol. Two serpents intertwined around a tree. Think of the Tree in kabbala. Both Serpents are green with glowing red eyes. One has it's fangs bared. There is a full moon in the sky with exactly 6 stars around the moon in a half circle. The moon is above the tree. The Serpents tails are touching each other and the heads are directly across from each other.
There are more details but I have to look.
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I can give it a whirl, you'll need to get ssspeccific though.
Half circle around a full moon, half where? above, below, left, right?
Serpents head directly across - facing away or facing each other?

Reminds me of this that I did a while back, in part anyway.

(Eww blurry, click for non blurry.)

https://imgur.com/a/oc6xHVK

 Quoting: Ty_


6 stars in a half circle to the right of the moon signifying the right hand path. The serpents heads are facing each other.
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You don’t have kids, do you, Ty?

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Nope. Been around little'uns most of my life though. From coaching under 8's, much younger cousins and more recently my nephews and nieces.

If you're asking due to me relating that story about the birds to being potentially a kids book - it would have to be heavily modified :P Other stories are more appropriate :)
Coz reasons, probably.
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Oh, on that note. Here is my first piece of creative writing in almost two years. I had to process my emotions, and it isn't quite right but it's pretty solid.

I didn't finish cause my wife got annoyed, and I uh... had to stop chuckle

They had finally come.

Davers had spent his entire life preparing for this moment. In many ways, he couldn't complain; it had been a far longer life than many would have expected. But there had been a price to go with that life, and it was time for him to pay the bill.

The knott twisted his stomach like a sadist at carnival, threatening to pull his insides out of his throat.

He took a long calming breath. It was true that he was about to die, but it would be a good death. He looked around the empty space around, the cool dark interior had been designed to help him clear his mind of distractions; but now it felt as suffocating as a tomb.

"Farsel, tell me how many do you see?" His voice was surprisingly calm, and the dark, soft ridges did their job and devoured his words. Returning only nothing.

"It looks bad." Was Farsel's terse reply.

"Everything is ready?"

"Yes it is. The outer traps have already destroyed a large number of their ships." Farsels voice faltered slightly on the word 'ship', because it was so hard to be certain what exactly they were.

"And I am bringing the outer sentry's online with full kill authorization." Farsel continued calmly, "The main task force is also preppared and reasy to intercept. Would you have nay other orders?"

"What is the status of the builders?" Davers rubbed his forehead as a stab of pain shot through it.

"They were already on a solid exit path, and I don't see any chance of enemy forces being able engage them."

"Good then bring up everything, and get them all authorization to kill. Maintain structure and control, let's not let them rush out of the gate. Keep them on a short leash."

"Very good. I have to remind you that it is now time for you to eat."

Inside that dark coffin, Davers began to eat, comfortably safe at the heart of a monstrous engine of destruction. All around it, was once a system that had boasted five planets, but now KR-1331A was just a single star with a lone orbiting companion. Davers system. He had decided that he hated the term KR-1331A, it was about as warm and meaningful as a lump of steel. So he just named it after himself, it didn't matter to anyone.

The system had been chosen, because the Seers had guaranteed this system would never support life. Not in a trillion years. So it was deemed acceptable to be used as fodder for the war. Davers had been the one given the job of staying behind. It was strange how the departure of the builders, a family of five, only made Davers feel even more like he was trapped. He had never actually seen any of them in person. They had never entered the cool chamber that Davers had affectionately called his 'egg'. They had been his only companions for almost four thousand years, while they slowly ate the sytems natural planets and used them to entomb him.

Davers felt a chill trickle of sweat scamper down his bare back

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Re: The Witch's Corner
Absolutely understandable, but also don't forget everyone uses help. Publishing houses do tons of work to get a book to sell.

Saying you want to do it on your own is great, and it only makes me respect you more.

Just don't be afraid to ask for some help. I can give you some pointers to get your book as a best seller, and it doesn't necessarily involve changing your work. Just how you market it.

Same goes for everyone else, btw. This is not intended as exclusive. If I was being exclusive, I wouldn't post here.
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Thanks for that, I may just hit you up. I've never been terribly good (or wanted to be) and self promotion. I absolutely detest trying to 'get people interested' or 'build a profile' etc. I tend to just do stuff and poeople either react or not, doesn't really work too well when there's no exposure of said work though!

I have thought that I'd go the 'self publish' route, as in, there's a few companies that do the printing and the author retains all profit. Haven't looked too deeply in to it.

I'll keep your words in mind for sure, thanks again. :)
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