A song I made - Looking for feedback - Help spread/support. <3

^ Remixed version - I tried to work with the vocals some? -
Still trying to work on it though - :)



^ original version


(an old song as well)



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Not trying to be the best - Just doing the best I can / trying to get better - *Which*cough late edit *With* each song I make, I try to get a little feed back and incorporate it into the next :

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Lyrics:

Hope,
That's what I lost when pop died,
Or my mother soon after,
Cause of the moments I asked why?
Why does life take the people I love?
When I all I've ever wanted was love?

So I struggled with the thought,
In the weather of the rage I fought,
I tried to understand something that will never be forgot.
You could probably relate
Confused about the pain of life,
Looking to the clock watching time pass..

I understand that we all make mistakes,
A new day, a new face,
Stare in the mirror
wondering who's looking at who.
Its too early to say its too late.
If there is one thing I've learned in this life
it's that we live what we create.
Live what we create,
even if it means that we take it away.
only freedom I know is in death,
and in death I know,
So use this time on earth to learn how to let go

Just let go

Its hard to do
but if you know that eventually you going to go too,
then we all have something in common right?
We'd spend less time on whats the meaning of life,
and more time being alive.

Imagine how much time you spend getting ready for life,
habbits, hobbies and trades,
only when life is lost are we able to be thankful for today.
Cause if you never knew loss,
You'd never get to play.

So I struggled with the thought,
In the weather of the rage I fought,
I tried to understand something that will never be forgot.
You could probably relate
Confused about the pain of life, about the pain of life~

I understand that we all make mistakes,
A new day, a new face,
Stare in the mirror
wonder who's looking at who.
Its too early to say its too late.
If there is one thing I've learned in this life
it's that we live what we create.
Live what we create,
even if it means that we take it away.
only freedom I know is in death,
and in death I know,
So use this time on earth to learn how to let go

Just let go,

I let go,

I let go,

And all I see is love.

I know that we all a little different,
But I can't ignore the fact we all a little the same,
Cause I see it in the face,
We've all suffered a little pain,
so next time you look in the mirror,
remember its never to late for change,
change for a better tomorrow and not in vain,
to show that we have strength
To show that we overcame!

I understand that we all make mistakes,
A new day, a new face,
Stare in the mirror
wonder who's looking at who.
Its too early to say its too late.
If there is one thing I've learned in this life
it's that we live what we create.
Live what we create,
even if it means that we take it away.
only freedom I know is in death,
and in death I know,
So use this time on earth to learn how to let go

Just let go

I let go,
I let go,
and found hope.

Amazing :O Defs wanna download these

Thank you <3


If you buy the iTunes version tonight - It's the wrong one-

It should have the updated version up tomorrow with (UPDATED) in the title.

I'll remove the other song off iTunes soon! -

<333