need feed back on my message to my wife for her birthday | |
Meggarea User ID: 1585244 United States 11/29/2012 10:47 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | so im in the army in newyork had to send my wife home and its her birthday im seending her flowers with this message all bullshit aside trying to get some feed back on it let me know what you think thanks for the help Quoting: ThePhrophet2012 Happy birthday beautiful, I love you and miss you more than words could explain. Your Beauty shines like the morning sun. Your personality resonates like a shooting star. Your heart is filled with Love and Joy, and when I think of you nothing else in the world matters. Because our love is eternal never ending as if it was frozen in time. any feed back would be cool thanks good or bad It's a beautiful sentiment. I do apologize for the bold, my inner grammar Nazi sometimes escapes. :) |
ThePhrophet2012 (OP) User ID: 15317076 United States 11/29/2012 10:49 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | so im in the army in newyork had to send my wife home and its her birthday im seending her flowers with this message all bullshit aside trying to get some feed back on it let me know what you think thanks for the help Quoting: ThePhrophet2012 Happy birthday beautiful, I love you and miss you more than words could explain. Your Beauty shines like the morning sun. Your personality resonates like a shooting star. Your heart is filled with Love and Joy, and when I think of you nothing else in the world matters. Because our love is eternal never ending as if it was frozen in time. any feed back would be cool thanks good or bad It's a beautiful sentiment. I do apologize for the bold, my inner grammar Nazi sometimes escapes. :) lol thanks yeah Im not to worried about my shitty grammer the florist im sure will know how to spell it out right when I do it over the phone thanks for the feed back |
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Anonymous Coward User ID: 28691353 United States 11/29/2012 10:50 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | so im in the army in newyork had to send my wife home and its her birthday im seending her flowers with this message all bullshit aside trying to get some feed back on it let me know what you think thanks for the help Quoting: ThePhrophet2012 Happy birthday beautiful, I love you and miss you more than words could explain. Your Beauty shines like the morning sun. Your personality resonates like a shooting star. Your heart is filled with Love and Joy, and when I think of you nothing else in the world matters. Because are love is eternal never ending as if it was frozen in time. any feed back would be cool thanks good or bad Because OUR love is eternal. Otherwise very beautiful, well done and nicely written. She will be all melty. |
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ThePhrophet2012 (OP) User ID: 15317076 United States 11/29/2012 10:52 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | so im in the army in newyork had to send my wife home and its her birthday im seending her flowers with this message all bullshit aside trying to get some feed back on it let me know what you think thanks for the help Quoting: ThePhrophet2012 Happy birthday beautiful, I love you and miss you more than words could explain. Your Beauty shines like the morning sun. Your personality resonates like a shooting star. Your heart is filled with Love and Joy, and when I think of you nothing else in the world matters. Because are love is eternal never ending as if it was frozen in time. any feed back would be cool thanks good or bad Because OUR love is eternal. Otherwise very beautiful, well done and nicely written. She will be all melty. thank you just wanted to see if it was coming off the same way i when I wrote it and heard it in my head |
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. User ID: 1610510 United States 11/29/2012 10:55 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | so im in the army in newyork had to send my wife home and its her birthday im seending her flowers with this message all bullshit aside trying to get some feed back on it let me know what you think thanks for the help Quoting: ThePhrophet2012 Happy birthday beautiful, I love you and miss you more than words could explain. Your Beauty shines like the morning sun. Your personality resonates like a shooting star. Your heart is filled with Love and Joy, and when I think of you nothing else in the world matters. Because are love is eternal never ending as if it was frozen in time. any feed back would be cool thanks good or bad Because OUR love is eternal. Otherwise very beautiful, well done and nicely written. She will be all melty. thank you just wanted to see if it was coming off the same way i when I wrote it and heard it in my head Oh, sorry. I see you're all delusional. Carry on. |
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ThePhrophet2012 (OP) User ID: 15317076 United States 11/29/2012 10:56 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Gross and overdone. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1610510 If she has a low IQ, she might like it. Like attracts like, I guess. You're cheating on her, aren't you? there will always be trolls I take it your not married dont have any kids and have never been in my shoes being in the army deoploying all the time for a year at a time can break a relationship or bring it togather closer than you could imagine or even understand we need more love in the world |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 1610510 United States 11/29/2012 10:58 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | You asked for feedback on what you wrote. Try to focus. Gross and overdone. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1610510 If she has a low IQ, she might like it. Like attracts like, I guess. You're cheating on her, aren't you? there will always be trolls I take it your not married dont have any kids and have never been in my shoes being in the army deoploying all the time for a year at a time can break a relationship or bring it togather closer than you could imagine or even understand we need more love in the world |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 28691353 United States 11/29/2012 10:59 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | You asked for feedback on what you wrote. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1610510 Try to focus. Gross and overdone. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1610510 If she has a low IQ, she might like it. Like attracts like, I guess. You're cheating on her, aren't you? there will always be trolls I take it your not married dont have any kids and have never been in my shoes being in the army deoploying all the time for a year at a time can break a relationship or bring it togather closer than you could imagine or even understand we need more love in the world Fuck off |
ThePhrophet2012 (OP) User ID: 15317076 United States 11/29/2012 11:00 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | You asked for feedback on what you wrote. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1610510 Try to focus. Gross and overdone. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 1610510 If she has a low IQ, she might like it. Like attracts like, I guess. You're cheating on her, aren't you? there will always be trolls I take it your not married dont have any kids and have never been in my shoes being in the army deoploying all the time for a year at a time can break a relationship or bring it togather closer than you could imagine or even understand we need more love in the world your right and im not lashing out I knew that would come but at the same time I have to voice my opinion back |